OS:Where It All Began? - In the Rain UPDATED PG 7 - Page 5

beautiful OS dear

This was a gorgeous read! Loved how you've made the words feel melodic and weigh less. Its amazing when it feels like a light pleasant read which ends up leaving a smile in your heart. This felt very cool and refreshing. I found the best part of this piece is its positive feel to it. Its almost as if there's a sun shining on the words to brighten up the atmosphere. Awesome work Lils :)

Originally posted by: vaishnavi28

beautiful OS dear

loved loved it!!!

Originally posted by: AngelsFlyAlone

This was a gorgeous read! Loved how you've made the words feel melodic and weigh less. Its amazing when it feels like a light pleasant read which ends up leaving a smile in your heart. This felt very cool and refreshing. I found the best part of this piece is its positive feel to it. Its almost as if there's a sun shining on the words to brighten up the atmosphere. Awesome work Lils :)

Omg Lily! It was today I came to read here after a long, long time and this was totally amazing!

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Omg Lily! It was today I came to read here after a long, long time and this was totally amazing!

I am really bad in romance... So I can understand that writing this was not so easy, and needless to say... This was beautifully done!😳

A gorgeous piece...

Would like to read more of your works, if I get time😆

Keep up the good work... Really looking forward to our Collaboration😉

It's gonna be amazing to work with you!😃

Love,

Mahishee

Beautiful lovely amazing...
The emotions were so flawlessly written.
The rain adds romance to the eternal lovers...The OS was so beautiful...
Plz write more...

Originally posted by: raksbasu

Beautiful lovely amazing...
The emotions were so flawlessly written.
The rain adds romance to the eternal lovers...The OS was so beautiful...
Plz write more...

Hi, everyone.😊 I really appreciate your feedback and acknowledge your efforts. 👏This is the second and last installment of this OS. This part is dedicated to Anu aka chocolate for her support and encouragement.😃

Dev's eyes twinkled as he felt his wife snuggle closer to him, her arms wrapping around him as she rested her head on his shoulder.

It had been exactly 2 years, 6 months, 1 week and 5 days since their marriage, and they were still as much in love as ever.

Oh, that's not to say that they did not fight, for they most certainly did.

It was all a natural cycle, you see.

They'd fight, apologize, forgive and then have a good laugh about it over a cup of tea. It were those seemingly small moments, which defined his reality and reminded him how all the hardships, the struggles, were worth it.

He smiled, remembering her dancing in the rain. She had looked enchanting, and at that moment his only thought had been that he had never seen someone look more beautiful.

Dancing in the rain was their thing, and so it would always remain. For that had been their true beginning, a beginning which over time became so much more.

He stroked her hair, his finger wrapping around one of her curls as he lowered his head and kissed it.

A sudden movement broke him out of his reverie, as he felt Sona throw one of her legs over his.

His eyes lit up with amusement at her antics, as he once again marveled at the sleeping beauty in his arms. The woman who held his heart. The woman who he was truly, completely and irrevocably in love with.

He knew he didn't deserve her. Nevertheless, he was willing to spend the rest of her life trying to be worthy of her.

He felt love, warmth and affection suffusing him at the thought that this woman was his to call, his to support, his to comfort and his to love.

He always did his very best by her, trying his hardest to make her happy. And every single time she smiled, laughed or just swatted his arm, chuckling- he felt a sense of victory filling his heart, at him being the reason for her happiness.

Their dance in the rain was one of their first memories together, the first of many more to come.

Since then, it was a tradition for them to dance together in the second rain shower of the season.

Yes, yes you heard it right. The second, not the first rain shower. Dr.Dixit was far too conscious of it being acid rain and simply refused to step out in it, let alone dance.

But he loved that about her. Her dedication to her work, her love for her family, her health consciousness- each and every quirk only served to endear her even more in his eyes.

He had been a fool before. A fool to ever think about leaving her, to even consider hurting her. But he wouldn't make the same mistake twice.

As he held her form tightly against his chest, his last thought was that he'd never let her go.

With that thought he pressed a kiss to her forehead, his head leaning on hers as his eyes closed.

I hope you all liked it. Do like and review.😳

A very very beautiful and love filled fulfilling ending.. I loved it.. Just can't wait to see Dev's romantic side in the show too.. Your OS just makes me very very anxious for that track.. Keep writing more and more you write beautifully..