OS:Where It All Began? - In the Rain UPDATED PG 7 - Page 2

This is beyond beautiful 👏

Originally posted by: prajee

Very beautifully written... pls do continue...

It is FANTSTIC! So beautifully written...no exaggerations. Everything is just PERFECT! Do we get a contiuation for this?
If yes, then please update fast! I am in love with your writing!

Originally posted by: juthie_j

I am completely agree with you. It reminds of the promo of krpkab that I have fallen in love with

Originally posted by: juthie_j

This is beyond beautiful 👏

I have already read it several times and I think you killed it

yeh dil mange more

Lovely OS.

Lovely os

This was amazing. ...

Lily puttar !
tu toh cha gayi ! very beautifully executed. I usually find rain-romance too saccharine sweet and improbable but this one meets my expectation accurately.

Sona and Dev are very introvert, mature and privaste person...so their story is actually difficult to write...they wont break into passionate verval exchange on drop of hat...they would only let their guards down when they are inside their own cocoon of comfort...like the scenario you described. the protagonists are totally in character and the emotional quotient is controlled very maturely. v well done, dear !
I love the end para...we dont know how their story would have progressed if sona had said yes to the job offer, or Dev bowed down to the pressure and reluctantly went to dance with Minister's daughter, or if sona didnt attend the party at all. All we know, they still could have found another way to reach each other, who knows that journey might .have been even more romantic...that might inspire 1000 other love-stories !!