OS:Where It All Began? - In the Rain UPDATED PG 7 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: fariya98

It's a beautifully written Os...👏

I actually read it today... and I must say it's wonderful... I totally❤️ it😳
You're amazing writer...
Keep it up👍🏼


Thank you so much.😳
I'm glad to know you liked it.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

lovely update👏
Thanks for the pm


Thank you so much, cherry.😳
And.. your welcome.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What a lovely OS. Dev and Sonakshi are so in love. You're a very good writer. Please continue to write such stories. Would you consider writing an FF or SS. You'd do a great job! Cheers!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kennashreign

What a lovely OS. Dev and Sonakshi are so in love. You're a very good writer. Please continue to write such stories. Would you consider writing an FF or SS. You'd do a great job! Cheers!😊


Hi, Thank you so much for all your praise.😳 It really made my day.😊
BTW, I am writing a FF on DevAkshi, titled That Moment. Do read and review. I'd love to know what you think about it.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LilyPotter



Hi, Thank you so much for all your praise.😳 It really made my day.😊
BTW, I am writing a FF on DevAkshi, titled That Moment. Do read and review. I'd love to know what you think about it.😊


Sure.. I am on it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: LilyPotter

<font size="3">Hi,
everyone.😊 I really appreciate your feedback and acknowledge your efforts. 👏This
is the second and last installment of this OS. This part is dedicated to Anu aka
chocolate for her support and encouragement.😃</font>


<font size="3"></font>


<font size="3">Dev's eyes twinkled as he felt his wife snuggle closer to him, her arms
wrapping around him as she rested her head on his shoulder. </font>


<font size="3">It had been
exactly 2 years, 6 months, 1 week and 5 days since their marriage, and they
were still as much in love as ever.</font>


<font size="3">Oh, that's
not to say that they did not fight, for they most certainly did.</font>


<font size="3">It was all a natural cycle, you see.</font>


<font size="3">They'd
fight, apologize, forgive and then have a good laugh about it over a cup of
tea. It were those seemingly small moments, which defined his reality and
reminded him how all the hardships, the struggles, were worth it.</font>


<font size="3">He smiled,
remembering her dancing in the rain. She had looked enchanting, and at that
moment his only thought had been that he had never seen someone look more beautiful.</font>


<font size="3">Dancing in
the rain was their thing, and so it
would always remain. For that had been their true beginning, a beginning which
over time became so much more.</font>


<font size="3">He stroked
her hair, his finger wrapping around one of her curls as he lowered his head
and kissed it. </font>


<font size="3">A sudden
movement broke him out of his reverie, as he felt Sona throw one of her legs
over his.</font>


<font size="3">His eyes lit
up with amusement at her antics, as he once again marveled at the sleeping
beauty in his arms. The woman who held his heart. The woman who he was truly,
completely and irrevocably in love with.</font>


<font size="3">He knew he
didn't deserve her. Nevertheless, he was willing to spend the rest of her life
trying to be worthy of her.</font>


<font size="3">He felt love, warmth and affection
suffusing him at the thought that this woman was his to call, his to support,
his to comfort and his to love.</font>


<font size="3">He always
did his very best by her, trying his hardest to make her happy. And every
single time she smiled, laughed or just swatted his arm, chuckling- he felt a
sense of victory filling his heart, at him
being the reason for her happiness.</font>


<font size="3">Their dance
in the rain was one of their first memories together, the first of many more to
come.</font>


<font size="3">Since then,
it was a tradition for them to dance together in the second rain shower of the
season. </font>


<font size="3">Yes, yes you
heard it right. The second, not the first rain shower. Dr.Dixit was far too conscious of it
being acid rain and simply refused to step out in it, let alone dance. </font>


<font size="3">But he loved
that about her. Her dedication to her work, her love for her family, her health
consciousness- each and every quirk only served to endear her even more in his
eyes.</font>


<font size="3">He had been
a fool before. A fool to ever think about leaving her, to even consider hurting
her. But he wouldn't make the same mistake twice.</font>


<font size="3">As he held
her form tightly against his chest, his last thought was that he'd never let her go.</font>


<font size="3">With that
thought he pressed a kiss to her forehead, his head leaning on hers as his eyes
closed.</font>



<font size="3">I hope you all liked it. Do like and review.😳</font>


Edited by kennashreign - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

I hope that the Devakshi is a ship that sails! This story gives me all the right feels!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: kennashreign


I hope that the Devakshi is a ship that sails! This story gives me all the right feels!


Thank you !😳

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