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sakshi

@eijaz-anita

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Posted: 18 years ago

aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka (kavya) ek thi larki deewani (anjali)
woh bhi hasne lagi thi
ywh bhi hasne laga tha
dono samjhe nahi the woh jo hone laga tha
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka ek thi larki deewani......

narrator (me): yeh kahaani hai
do doston ki
jo tabse dost hai jabse woh dosti ka matlab bhi nahi
jante the.....
unke jeene ke liye unhe saason se zyada ek dusre ki zarurat thi...

hey guyz i was getting bored so i thought to start a fanfic.
plz dont compare it with your fanfics coz they are really very nice.
i am very nervous as to how would you like it coz this
is my first ever fanfic so i really will need your support of suggestions
and plz tell me wer i lack so that i can get better. the base of this is inspired
fa little from mere yaar ki shaadi hai and the serial kayamath.
you may find some dialogues similar to them but this is a
different story. it wud be better if u grade it or mark it out
of ten. and dont forget to give your suggestions coz
i really need them. hope you like it.

here is the intro OF THE 2 MAIN CHARACTERS:

Kavya Nanda : he is very sweet , nice and caring, hot guy. he loves
his family alot. his best friend is anjali khanna. he is 19 yrs.
girls drool over him. he is very intelligent and there is always
a tie in the first prize regarding stuies between him and anjali.

Anjali Khanna : she is also very sweet caring and drop dead
gorgeous. boys drool over her. she is going to be 18 soon
but is in the same class with kavya. she loves her family alot
and can do anything for them. as told above she is very intelligent.
her best friend is kavya.

other characters will be introduced as the story goes on .......
hey guyz plz tell me if you like the intro and plz tell me whether i should continue or not. feel free to give me any kind of suggestion or comment. sori for any spelling mistakes.

do reply
luv u all 😊

Edited by eijaz-anita - 18 years ago

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sakshi

@eijaz-anita

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Posted: 18 years ago

the wind is hitting against the windows ..............of the khanna mansion..every one is happy. after some time u see a girl sumwer else and sheis in a wedding hall (shaadi ka mandap) and
girl : NNNNNNNAAAAAAAUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!

narrator-who is this girl?
is this story ending before it has started? why did she scream?
janne ke liye watch 'pyar ki kahaani' .

so tell me what do you think of the first promo? who wz the girl nd why
do you think she screamed ? plz do comment? i will post the first part as
when u hav red the promo and told me what you think of the story...
so plz do reply. there are more characters to be introduced from
other serials also....waiting for u ppl. sori for any spelling mistakes.

Edited by eijaz-anita - 18 years ago

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amz

@amrin1

Beginner

Posted: 18 years ago

wicked openin
carry it on, i think its anita screamin but no idea why yet
carry itt on sounds really good 😊

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sakshi

@eijaz-anita

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amrin1
wicked openin
carry it on, i think its anita screamin but no idea why yet
carry itt on sounds really good 😊

aaaawww thnx amrin di.......glad u liked it 😊 thnx for ur views about the promo......

but only 1 reply.... 😭
plz reply guyz .....i need it to continue....plz..

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sakshi

@eijaz-anita

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

hey guyz im changing one thing in the promo and that is the girl who screams is not in
the khanna mansion but she is in the shaadi ka mandap

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sakshi

@eijaz-anita

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

Hey guys as have told u
im changing I thing in the promo .. the girl who screams is not in the
Khanna mansion.. but she in a shaadi ka man dap..

title song:
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka (kavya) ek thi larki deewani (anjali)
woh bhi hasne lagi thi
ywh bhi hasne laga tha
dono samjhe nahi the woh jo hone laga tha
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka ek thi larki deewani......

note :all characters of this story are purely fictious.all things said by narrator are in blue and dialogues are in red.

first part:

narrator: it is a very cold day. the sun is not seen. the roads are all
busy. we see a very big palace like house. the wind is hitting against the windows of the house
evrything is quite inside.
then we see lady in a pink saree doing the aarti. she goes to
everyone in the house to give the aarti. first she opens the door
of a room and goes inside....
lady : arrey you are still sitting on the bed itself ! you are
a dad and you are setting a bad example for our children.
man: my god PRERNA now dont start off with your lecture early in the
morning..
narrator(na) : so we see that the lady is Prerna. she is a very
good housewife and loves her husband and children alot.
prerna(pr) : lecture!!!!!??? MR.BAJAJ chaliye mein aapko khud
hi apne ladlo ka haal dikhaati hoo.
na: so this is mr. rishab bajaj...(ba)very good husband and
an ideal husband. he loves his children very much.
just then a girl comes in the room …….
and says MOM!
Pr- what happened KASAK?
Na – so that girl is kasak (kas)played by Surveen) she is the elder daughter
ofthe house and loves her family..she is 22 yrs old.
Kas – mom behna ka phone hai…
Ba – see prerna kasak has already woke up ….and you keep lecturing me AND
I will talk to my princess on the phone first …
Pr – fine baba first you talk to her.
Na – all of them go towards the receiver.
Ba – hello
Girl on the phone – good morning papa.
Ba – good morning princess…have you reached pune.
Girl – yes papa.
Ba – you didn't have any difficulty in reaching na.
Girl – stop worrying abt me papa im absolutely fine.
Pr – mr.bajaj now give me the phone I also wanna speak to my daughter.
Ba – first let me finish speaking na ..then you can speak
Pr – plz mr.bajaj
Kas – uffo 1 day has not passed that she has gone to pune and u ppl
R fighting as if u have not talked to her since ages. Both of u leave I
Will speak to my pyari behna.
Na – kasak takes the phone from bajaj and speaks
Kas – hello
Ba – kasak give the phone to me
Kas – let me talk na…
Pr –(sarcastically)no ! no! abhi to one day has also not passed
when shez gone
girl – whats dis happening di?
Kas – nothing jus the WORLD WAR 3…
Girl – huh (confused)…
Kas – leave all that and tell me whats going on.
Girl – nothing jus preparations of the wedding..
Kas – oh
Na – prerna grabs the phone…and kasak is like MY GOD!
Pr- hello beta . how r u? u have reached der safely na ? everything
Is going on fine na ? did u eat ur food ?
Girl – oh mom .. good morning ..so many questions ? mein yahan koi jung
Larne nahi aayi hoon… I have come here for ma friend's wedding. Firstly
Am fine secondly ya I reached safely thirdly everything is going on fine ..
Everyone is enjoying.. fourthly yes I ate my food..now don't worry about
Me and tense ur self ..ok mom mujhe jana hai.. lots of preparations to be done..
Papa se kehna meri chinta na kare ..and ha kasak di se kehna to do my duty
Of waking bahiya by troubling him.
Na – prerna laughs
Pr-beta today ur bhaiya has got up erly and gone for sum work nywayz
beta take care of ur self bye.
Girl – bye.
Ba – pr tumne phone kyun rakha I wanted to speak
Pr – mr. Bajaj she has gone to attend her friend's wedding..not to talk to
You all the time. Anywayz now come for breakfast.
Na – scene cut to pune . after a few hours. You see a groom and
A bride. They r sitting for the reception. Marriage is over. Then the girls
R trying to take away the groom's shoes (that rasam yaar)but the boys have
Encircled the groom so that the girls cant go near the groom also.
Girl 1 – hhhmm only she can win against the boys (referring to sum girl)
Girl 2 – so lets call her
Girl 1 – (SCREAMS)ANJALI!!!!!!!!
NA – the heroine of our story is here .. nd for those who have not
Understood it was anjali itself speaking on the phone.
Anjali {anj) comes By.
Anj – what happened KRIPA
Na – kripa (kr) 4m kyph is anjali's friend.
Kr – anju (she points towards the groom's shoes. Anju understands)
Anj – don't u worry…
Na – anjali goes there and all guyz just stare at her beauty.
She goes to one of the guys..
Anj – excuse me can I go there plz… actually I have to take the pooja thali plzzzz
Na- she sayz in such a sweet way that the guy who wz lost in her
is like sure why not..
anj – thnx
Na - she is jus abt to pick the shoes when another guy comes and holds her
Both hands from his one hand and takes the shoes form his other hand and
Kisses anjali on the cheek and says
Guy – bye sweety..
Na- and runs away.
Anjali screams – nnnnaaaaaauuuuu
U I will get u for this…

na- who is tht guy ? who is getting married ? is it kavya ? pls post ur views and sori 4
any mistake....pls reply.
coming up : some more wedding masti and fun nd look look look sum1 waiting to be introduced in the story
plz do comment
luv u all

Edited by eijaz-anita - 18 years ago