aao sunau pyar ki ek - prt 15,16,17pg8 - Page 3

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Posted: 18 years ago
#21
i am dead haaaaaaaaa so waouuuu love it kiz fznfic hzi yaar man karta hai parte hi jao
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Posted: 18 years ago
#22
wow what a great update 👏 👏 ...........wating for ur next update cont soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
#23
hey guys thnx for replying here is the next prt..but plz do reply and comment coz they are my only support.
and thnx for cooperating with me
...im sori for thed delay but here is the next

rpart 4


title song:
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka (kavya) ek thi larki deewani (anjali)
woh bhi hasne lagi thi
yeh bhi hasne laga tha
dono samjhe nahi the woh jo hone laga tha
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka ek thi larki deewani......

note :all characters of this story are purely fictious.all things said by narrator are in blue and dialogues are in red.


Recap :pammi's arrival...anj and kav sweet fights...they are in a room lets see what is next..
here it begins
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here it begins

anj - kavya plz leave me... uff
kav - .....
anj - (thinking) what happened to him...is he alright
anj (concerned) - kavya what happened ....why arent u answering...ur alrite na - she waves her hand in front of his face. Remember they are still on the bed on top of each other.
just then pammi (kabab mein haddi) enters. she is shocked to see the scene.kavya nad anjali who are engrossed in each other do not even notice her.

pam - kavya what is this?!
na - now kavya comes back into senses... and he leaves anju
and both get up from the bed.

anj - pammi there is nothing like that...woh actually we just fell...
na - pammi gives anjali an i dont believe you kind of look. she just goes
away (thnk god chali gayi). anju tries calling her but kavya stops her...

kav - anjali why are you explaining things to her ? it really doesnt matter what she
thinks......all that matters is (he puts his hands on her cheeks) what we think...
anj - but kavya she loves you...
kav - (shocked) what nonsense!!
na - he leaves her and turns the other side..anjali turns him back.
anj - even you know that...then whom are you running from?
na - he golds her shoulders tightly
kav - but i dont love her i luv ... (he realises what he ws going to say ) ummm no one.
anj - fine but atleast dont be indifferent towards her..
kav - ok baba... now leave it. You know it really doesnt suit us i mean
we dont look the real kavya and anjali when we talk so seriously or when we dont
have are sweet friendly fights.
anj - KAVYA!
na - she hits him sweetly.
anj - ok common now let us go..
kav - umm anju u go im coming.
anj - ok..
na - anjali leaves. kavya watches her leave. Then he goes near the
window and says

kav - thnx god thnx...once i asked you what luv means coz i always thought i luvd her
but today im dead sure that i luv her more than my life...thnx for answering...i knew this
friendship is not just friendship...it is luv which is hidden in our luvly friendship...it is coz of this luv
that i care for her so much... it is coz of this luv that i cant let out a single breathe in the air
until i feel her presence in the same air...it is coz of this luv coz of which even for ta-
king the simplest decisions i prefer to ask her or take them or me....coz i trust her choice
cos she is MY choice....it is coz of this luv that i want to step forward only when she
is around me...thnx god...aur yeh pyar aaj ka nahi barso purana hai ...tabka jabse mein pyar
ka matlab bhi nahi jana tha...jaanta tha to sirf itna ki mein uske bina nahi jee sakta..tha.
yeh woh pyar hai jise meine barso se dil mein chupaye rakh dosti ka naam diya..par
dosti to sirf ek bahana hai PYAR karne ka...I LUV YOU ANJALI...I LUV YOU..
na - then kav also goes outside...where anju was standing alone..but when he goes
there kripa also comes there.
kr - arrey where were you both... you know the game was ssoo boring..
anj - boring... it had to be...after all HE (referring to sum1) was not there..
kr - anjali you speak yoo much these days..btw nowadays your brother doesnt have any time
for me..
anj - acchha so when he acts sweet he is your fiance and when ur mad at him then he
is my brother..
na - kav laughs
kr - anjali ki bacchi you wait...i will tell all this to your so called sweet bhaiya.
anj - no need...i myself will do the honours..
na - kav laughs again.
kr - anjali!
anj - kripa!
kr - waiswe where both of you...
kav - dont ask...and btw today i got to know that this chipkali(he hits his finger against anju's nose)
runs faster than a rabbit...
na - kr laughs
anj - uuu ill kill you
kav - you already have killed me anjali ...
anj - huh
kav - nothing leave it..
coming up : anj - i hate you kavya!(next or next to next prt)
na - why did anju say so?who is kripa's fiance...?what role will he play .. bringing ka close
or sending them away from each other...do reply..sori if you had really high expectations and for any
mistake or any prt you did not like...
luv u all
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Posted: 18 years ago
#24
wow good update
waitn 4 nex 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#25
love it and kripa fianc is shaurya???
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Posted: 18 years ago
#26
thnx so much for re[lying everyone...i mighty update today or tomorrow...and welcum rpo the forum 'cute & crazy'..hope u have a grt time here..
nd thnxz once agen all of u 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
hye every1..thnx so much for ur wonderful comments..i luvd them. Sori I cudnt continue…but here is the next part. Nd now onwards im not posting the title song everytime I post a prt coz its time consuming..hope you dun mind nd now onwards the epis may or maynot be in the form of dialogues nd
I may not concentrate on the colour thing. Sori for the incovinience but im having heavy work loadz these days. Im really sori but plz coorperate wid me. Nywayz here is the next prt. Sori once agen

Recap – kav realizes his luv for anjali


Its night time. Every1 is tired and goes to their respective rooms to sleep. Kavya is very excited and cant wait to tell anjali abt hi feelings. He is pacing up and down in his room. He thinks of all his moments with her and a smile cums on his face. suddenly the lights go off. Kavya thinks that anjali is scred of darkness so he should go to her. Meanwhile in anjali's room anjali is scared. Then someone comes from behind and screams in her ears. Anjali gets all the more scared and screams herself. The boy puts his hand around her mouth. It is kavya , but anjali cant see his face , and when he holds her mouth she gets more scared. Kavya is abt to say sumthing when anjali bites his hand. Kavya screams. From his voice anjali understands its kavya and understands her blunder. Just then the lights come on. Anj – oh im so sori (very concerned). Kav – hey its ok! Btw miss chipkali you bite really hard. Had I not screamed you I would have been wounded all around by now. Anj – shut up kavya..! who wont get scared of a Bandar like you?! Nd btw what r u doing here? Kav – well I came here coz the lights went off and I know what a scarycat I mean scarychipkali you are! Anj hits him sweetly. anj – btw why aren't u asleep yet?
Kav – what to do you haunt me even in my dreams. Anj – very funny! What r ur plans for the day after tomorrow? Kav – huh..nothing since tomorrow we r returning ..day after tomorrow college…why? Anj – uumm nothing ..i just asked.(thinks)doesn't he remember what is it the day after tomorrow. kav – (thinks) how cud u even think that I wud 4get such an imp day of my life anjali? Kav- what r u thinking anju? Anj – (a lil angry) nothing. I wanna sleep . good night. She goes to her bed nd kavya just smiles. He thinks – dun worry this will be a surprise for you…
Next morning.
As we all know anjali is angry with kavya for some reason.
She and kripa are in the hall wating for kavya so that they can leave for mumbai.
Finally he arrives. Anj (angry)- oh u came so soon..i was just abt to put the red carpet to welcome you…btw why did u cum so early..i thought u wud ome by sunset..kav – sunset! I was thinking of coming by tomorrow. kav and kr laugh while anjali is more angry.



Hope u liked it.

So tell me how did u like this prt? Plz post ur comments and suggestions to improve. Sori nd thnx once agen. Sori for any mistake or any prt you did not like. i know it was short but im sori im piled with loadz of school work.
Luv u all 😊

Edited by eijaz-anita - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#28
itz a good update
dnt worry if it short, u do ur work its more important u can do this anytime.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#29
Hye everyone…thnx for replying …nd for coorperating wid me for short prts and as for others hope and wish I get their comments/criticisms too…im desperately waiting for them..thnx all of u who have supported me throughout … every1 who has increased my motivation…here is a prt dedicated to u ppl(sori if it is short)
Heres the next part

Recap – KA in anjali's bedroom…and anjali angry wid kavya

Kav – hey anjali whats the matter … you look angry…see your nose is turning red!. Kavya and kripa laugh and give a high five to each other while anjali is more angry…kavya senses anjali's quietness and asks her
Kav – what happened anjali…plz tell me.
Anj – nothing..i jus…I jus hate you
Anjali goes to sit in the bus (which is taking them to mumbai) while kavya calls out her name and tries to stop her but all in vain….
Kav thinks – NO…I cant see her sad…but I really wanna surprise her..but I have to thnk of sumthing to make her happy right now..
Meanwhile anjali sits in the busand thinks – how cud he…how cud he forget that tmorrow is that day when we are going to complete 15yrs of our wonderful friendship…I never did expect this from him…but probably im being too angry at him…maybe for him now all these things don't matter much..its ok(sad)..i cant expect him to give me all his attention always….and I will not remind him of tomorrow also…coz if I do so then he might feel guilty and I cant see him sad..
Just then kavya comes and sits beside anjali and puts his arm around her shoulders..kav- what happened anjali..any prob..u look really upset..then he holds her cheek with his othewr hand and says – u know I cant see u upset…anjali passes a small smile. Anj –
Im sori kavya…I was rude to you,…kavya covers her mouth wid his hand..kav – no anjali! …common whats happening to u…both of us know very well that it was not at all rude anjali! Infact I keep waiting for that part of day when we have are sweet fights…and today ur talikingstrange … any prob..r u alright? Anj - no …
nothing like that…acchha kavya tell me…you will never forget me na…
Kav – anjali … how cud u even think like that…I will never 4get you…moreover I will stay by your side till the end…is der sumrhing bothering u?
Anj – no..nothing..actually today for the first time I felt insecure..i felt a strange fear of loosing your support , your attention , your care…kavya cuts her.
Kav – never think so…and stop worrying over tings which can never happen. Anjali smiles and feels more comfortable.
Then every1 comes and sits in the bus. Pammi feels angry when she sees KA sitting cosy and too much engrossed in each other..she says in her mind-kavya ur mine..all mine..
Then all go and sit and the bus starts…
Kavya sings to anjali – kehdo ki tum mere dil mein rahoge
Kehdo ki tum mujhse dosti karoge

Anjali sings back (now she is cheered up) – dekhungi…sochungi ..
Kal parso kuch kahungi….

Every1 r enjoying the song except pammi. Finally every 1 reach mumbai. KA first goes to A's house since kav had to drop her..dey enter the house ….
To be continued..

Hope you liked it…do post ur comments and criticisms .which are always welcum.sori for any mistake or any prt u didn't like.

Luv u all.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#30
WAOU LOVE IT NA
love the song perfect for them

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