aao sunau pyar ki ek - prt 15,16,17pg8 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
it is very very good 👏......so looking forward to ur next update............... plzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wou greattttttttttt yaar cont soon i love it hiihih jhoote do paise lo
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
thnx all of u
i will post the next prt tomorrow
thnx and sori
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
thnx sssssssssssoooooo much for replying everyone here is the prt 2 dedicatd to all of you..
part 2


title song:
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka (kavya) ek thi larki deewani (anjali)
woh bhi hasne lagi thi
yeh bhi hasne laga tha
dono samjhe nahi the woh jo hone laga tha
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka ek thi larki deewani......

note :all characters of this story are purely fictious.all things said by narrator are in blue and dialogues are in red.


Recap : intro of anjali and her family. Anjali is in pune to attend her friend's wedding. the rasam of taking away the groom's shoes is going on..anjali is abt to pick the groom's shoes but sum1 stops her and takes the shoes with himself. this is the reason anjali screamed.

here it begins
Anj – you monkey! I wont leave you
Guy- I knew it from day1 tht like other girls even u don't wanna leave me..you are also fida on me na
Anj-KAVYA ke bacche u just wait and watch
Na- so here is the hero of our story. We should have understood in the beginning itself that it is kavya, who else will dare to trouble our anjali so much.
Guy – come come!!!!!(he still has the shoes in his hands)
Na- just then anjali gets an idea and………
Anj – ooocccccccchhhhhh
Kavya (kav) – anjali
Na – he runs towards her..
Kav – anjali kya hua u r fine na ? did u hurt urself? (very concerened)
Na- his attention is diverted towards anjali and he leaves the shoes..
Na - Anjali sees he has left the shoes
Anj – uf I have hru my leg
kav – you are a child anjali.. plz learn to care abt ur self too
anj – I do care..but..
kav- wait u don't get up from here I will get the ointment for you
anj – but kavya
kav – I told n im coming ..dont u get up 4m here or else.........
anj -ok baba
na – kavya goes..anjali smiles and
anj YESS!!!
Na – she takes the shoes and runs away from there. Meanwhile kavya comes back
Kav (to one of the girls) – where is anjali?
Girl ohthere she is enjoying her nek (the money girls get after returning the shoes
na – kavya understands that he was fooled..nd is like
Kav – oooooh mann!!!
Na – he sees anjali rejoicing , laughing and dancing and just smiles. Meanwhile anjali sees him alone and goes up to him
Anj – naaraz ho kya
Kav – naraaz nahi pareshan (tensed) hoon
Anj – why tensed?
Kav – dekho na itni mushkil se tumhara peecha ****a tha aur tum ho ki phir se aa gayi mujhe bore karne (see na..it was so difficult to get rid of u and now u r here again to bore me)
Anj – uuuuuuuuuuuuuuu , fine I will go
Na – she is abt to go when kavya holds her hand from the back
Kav – anjali I want to tell u sumthing
Na – he goes closer to her
Anjali – say soon..
Na – he comes very close to her and romantically says..
Kav – anjali jab tum
Na – anjali goes a little backwards and
Anj – say soon
Kav – anjali jab tum ............tum……..
Anj – now what is tis your new mantra that you are saying this' jab tum jab tum 'itself..
Kav – anjali jab tum gussa hoti ho na tab tumhari naak lal ho jaati hai
Na – kavya bursts out laughing..
Anj –and when you laugh na your teeth come out like a rabbit..(lol)
Kav – anjali ki bachi …
Anj – bye Bandar..
Kav – me Bandar!!! Just wait miss CHIPKALI!!
Aanj – u how dare u call me chipkali
Kav – I didn't mention that u r chipkali…u assumed it urself..see even u know what is right
Na -Just then kripa comes by
Kr – anju chal an we r playing damsharads..
Kav – oh damsharads I will join in
Anj – no one asked you..
Kav -none of your business.
Kr – uuff stop it
Kr – common lets go
Anj – no im not in a mood..
Kav – kyu dar gayi kya
Anj – dar gayi my foot..mein bandaro se nahi darti
Kav – par mein to chipkaliyon se bahut darta hoon
Kr – yaha par chipkali kah aa gayi
Anj – (who has understood tht he was referring to her is fuming with anger )choro na lets go and play
Kav – but u wer not playing
Anj – now I want to ..any probs
Kav - uuff these girls na...
Na – anjali and kripa step ahead and talk while kavya smiles.

They all sit around a bonfire to play..
Kavya sits and sum1 sits beside him..
Kav – TUM when did u come here?



Na – who is this person?
Coming up – all return to Mumbai
And daily life ...


sori for ny mistake or any part u didnot like. hope u like it. waiting for your views.
luv u all 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
its really good
am waitin for next update 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
waou love it its great na cont soon soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
i love the chemistry between kavya n anjali....... n the story is so good 👏 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
nicee story mannn...iz really goodddd 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
aaww thnx everyone for replying ...herez the next prt for u
im sorry for being late but here is part three for all of you...

part 3


title song:
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka (kavya) ek thi larki deewani (anjali)
woh bhi hasne lagi thi
yeh bhi hasne laga tha
dono samjhe nahi the woh jo hone laga tha
aao sunau pyar ki ek kahaani
ek tha larka ek thi larki deewani......

note :all characters of this story are purely fictious.all things said by narrator are in blue and dialogues are in red.


Recap : intro of kavya...kavya and anjali sweet fights..and sum one sits beside kavya when dey r all abt to play damsharads and kavya is shocked or surprised to see her.

here it begins


Kavya – tum ? what r u doing here..
Girl – hye kavya …surprised you na..
Kavya – ya…
Girl – not only you even anju kripa all got surprised
Kav – ya coz u had told tht u wont cum……
Girl (thinks) – how can I not be there where u are there
Na - just then anjali and kripa come there
kav – tum…tum phir mere paas aa gai uffo
anj – oh mister Bandar …im going I've just cum to take PAMMI...pammi chalo
Na - so this girl is pammi..too fond of kavya..but is she just fond of him or....she studies in the same college nd is a friend of theirs.
pam – no..i wanna be in kavya's team for damsharads..
kav – no wayz! Um I mean pammi it is girls vs boys..
pam – so what I wanna be wid u na..
anj – ok fine …then…
kkav – anjali dun be shy I know u wanna be wid me ..it is ok u can be in my team…
anj – my foot! U r
kav - HOT
I know
Anjj – uurrgghh forget it..
Na – anjali is abt t leave wen kavya holds her hand from behind..
Kav – naaraz ho kya
Anj – naaraz nahi pareshan hoon
Kav – pareshaan kyu
Na – anjli has a very sad faceKavya gets tensed seeing her like this…he puts his hands on her cheek and asks

Kav – anjali what is the matter
na – anjali puts his hands down turns around and says
Anj –actually it was so difficult to get rid of you but nw ur here again to bore me
Na – anjali laughs…
Kav – anjali!
Anj – haan
Kav – now u just wait and watch
Na – thery r both laughoing nd anjali starts running…kavya runs behind her..pammi is like
Pam – I came here for im and look at him…he's paying no attention to me…but lets see how much will u avoid me kavya…lets see….
Na – meanwhile anjali runs inside the house and kavya follows her..
Anj – common kavya run faster..
Kav – you chipkali just wait
Na – anjali is laughing and she goes in a room…kavya also cums der nd closes d door..
Kav –now where will u run …ha SWEETHEART (he pays stress on the word 'sweatheart.')
na – he cathes hold of her hand nd pins her against the wall..

Anj – (still laughing) kavya plz let me go…
Kav – no wayz….
Na – b4 he cud say any further anjali interrupts him
Anj – pammi tum!!
Na – kavya leaves anju and sees behind and sees that there is no one
Meanwhile anju tries to run away
But kavya holds her from the back

Kav-anjali ki bachi trying to escape ha..
Anj – kavya choro
Kav – no wayz you ruit was so difficult to catch hold of u…u run faster than a rabbit miss chipkali…
anj – uuuu
Na – kavya puts his hand on her mouth..they both look in each others eyes for a few secs…then anjali breaks the eyelock and anjali tickles him coz of which kavya also snaps out he holds her more near to him and more tightly…


Kav – anjali nw tell me…u get bored offme ha
Anj – wen u cn get bored of me why cant i..
Na – just as they r talking kavy's leg slips coz of a roller skate lying near by so he falls on the bed nd since he is holdin anju she also falls above him..then anju is trying to get up but kavya pulls her back and now he is on top f anjali…he is just lost in her eyes…
Anj – uuuff kavya leave me (irritated)
Kav -……..
Anj – kavya !(she shakes him..)
But he is completely lost in her eyes…

To be continued..
hope u liked this prt..plz post ur comments and suggestions to improve…dey r always welcum. Sorry for any mistake or any part you did not like…and sorry coz in the preview i told tht they will be back to mumbai but then i realised that more can be dun in pune itself..sorry once again...
Coming up : sum1 realizes sum feelings for sum1…
Keep guessing…
😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
dnt worry bout the change of plan.
very good update.
waitin 4 nex 1

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