Pyaar Ishq aur Nafraat Part 30UPDATED!!!! - Page 3

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Shezzy12 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
sorri guys i really wanted to carry on so heres the next Part 😃

8 years forward
Children ; 😃
sneha ( child of john and neha) 7 years old
kajal ( child of kavya and neha) 8 years old
Abhi ( child of anjali and kavya) 5 years
bhuman ( child of anjali and kavya) 8 years old

John - neha
neha - yeh
john- we will need to go back to mumbai
neha - okay we will go
john - u sure
neha - yeh its not really likely tht we r going to bump into them
john - yeh and it has been 8 years
neha - yeh
they all got to mumbai !!
AT MUMBAI
thye have bought a house and its beeen half a year

( american acccent) Kajal - mom i have made a friend at my new school
neha - hoo?
kajal - mom its errrr,,,,,
neha - kajal tell me ur getting me worried
kajal - its a boy hes my best friend
neha - kajal so its a boy wots his name?
kajal - oh mom dad sed i wasnt allowed to have best friends hoo r boies
neha - oh kajal he was only jokin
kajal - oh okay
neha - get ready for bed
kajal - his name is bhuman ( runs to her room to get dressed)
neha - smiles*
john - sneha get dressed please
both girls get dressed
neha - John the girls are calling you
john runs to there bedrooms
neha and kajal - dad read us a love story about the princess and the prince
john - oh okay
john - there was a princess and prince who were married they loved each other sooo much one day a evil man came and took the princess away the prince had to find her and whenhe found her she was .....
kajal - dad wot
john - he had made her do a really bad thing the prince was really unhappy but he accepted the princess and they lives together for really long hat now they have 2 pretty daughter * just like you too *
kajal - thanx dad
john - gives them a kiss time for bed now
NEXT MORNING ************
neha - john please wake up
john - please let me sleep i odnt wanna go to work to day
neha - okay fine but ur getting the girls ready im not feeling well
john - oh okay
john got ready and woke the girls and got them ready
he got them breakfast and then they all got ready to go to school
kajal - dad can we invite bhuman for tea
john - darling we have to know his parents first then we will see
kajal - dad please i told him now and his driver will drop him off today at 4
john - kajal u shudnt do that
kajal - sorri dad
John - here u go.... come on schools here give us a kiss
they both kissed him and went to school
meanwhile at the nanda house !!!!!!!!

anjali - bhuman , abhi ur getting really late for school
kavya - dont worri anjali i wil get them
* bhuman and abhi r kinda naughty* 😃
kavya got them and took them to skewl
Bhuman - papa can i invite a friend round for tea
kavya - yes who
bhuman - kajal shes really nice shes new to the school
kavya - okay
bhuman - her dad is coming to school to pick her up u can meet him there
kavay - okay bheta here go to school now

*********************after school*************
neha - john can u go and pick the girls up
john - yeh im going
john arrives at school
kajal - dad bhumans coming
john - ohh okay
kavya is waiting for kajals father and john is waiting for bhumans father
they wait for half an hour
john sees kavya but cant see him closely
kajal - dad i think thts bhumans dad
john walks up to kavya
john - excuse me
kavya - * turns around * yeh
john and kavya stare at each other
KAvya - john can we start again please !!! lets forget everything
john - erm i cant i cant forget wot u did to my neha
kavya - please please belive me i didnt
john - okay then i will onli forgive u if neha does
kavya - erm okay
they walk away
kajal - BHUMAN
bhuman - KAJAL
john - shhhh kajal
kavya - dont scream bhuman
thye both get home
neha- ohh john i feel much betta
john - good * kisses neha*
all evening john was day - dreaming
neha - John john
john - day dreaming
neha - johnnnnnnnnnnnnn
john - ohh yeh
neha - somethings seriuosly wrong with you !
john - wot erm no
neh - erm tell me !!


* is john gonna tell her ..........
😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
can u reply and tell how u like it , coz i need to know whether everyone has read it otherwise my readers will ahve a bit too much to read and it might put them off 😉 😃

thanx
luv yaz

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Shezzy12 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#23
guys plz dont be harsh on me i wanna carry on but i wanna know whether ur reading them or not???? 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
yo shezzy12 u go girl oops i was a bit late in replying but i read it up to teh last part and its getting good 😉 keep on writing and im sure to tell other ppl!!!

waitin for da nxt reply......

bye

👏 good job.... 👏
Shezzy12 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
thanks karen ( luv ya 😃)
heres the next part____


Neha - John u r really scaring me tell me please
John - no i cant okay its nothing its just....
neha - wot
john - its work itsss....
neha - hoo
john - ( erm bipasha )
neha - bipasha oh
kajal - dad whts wrong with bhumans dad ?
john - shhh nothing nothing its just i dont know him very well
kajal - dad come on im not dumb i CAN tell when theres something wrong or not
john - darling , theres nothing wrong with bhumans dad
kajal - erm okay dad
kajal walked off ( upset)
neha - kajal wots wrong
kajal - dad doesnt like bhumans dad i think he hates him
neha - ( laughed ) kajal no i dont think so
neha - ( reliases it could be kavya ) kajal wots bhumans secound name
kajal - ermm i dont know mummi ( walks off )
neha - Wait i will see bhumans dad and i will also let u go to his house
kajal - really wow okay mummi i will tell bhuman to tell his dad to wait after school tomorrow
neha - okay
-------------------nanda house ---------------------

anjali - mama
nitya - ( ohh wot is she sulking at ) yeh anjali
anjali - mama its Bhumans birthday in two days r u going to get him anything
nitya - noway
bauji - nitya wot noway
nitya - ermm noway im not getting bhumans birthday present ofcourse im getting one
bauji - good niya lets go shopping together and we will get bhuman a birthday present
nitay ( ohhhh noo shopping with an old man ) yes bauji i will go and change
anjali ( smiled)
nitya went to her bedroom
calls saket
nitya - saket
saket - di u remember me
nitya - oh shut up and listen
saket - wot di
nitya - saket i want bhuman and abhi dead
Kavya - MAMA
nitya jumped
kavya took the phone from nitya saket put the phone down
nitya - kavya its not wot u think
kavya - i know u called saket
nitya - WOT
kavya - Saket u told him that i had two boys
nitya - ( phewwww) yes kavya
kavya - mama i didnt hear it quite well did u say dead or bread
nitya - ohh kavya bread !!!
kavya walked out the room !!!!!_______________

NEXT MORNING
*************************
kavya - bhuman heres ur school bag
bhuman - dad kajals parent is coming after school to see you so wait in the car park for them
kavya - ( is it gonna be neha ? ) huh? o o okay bhuman
neha cudnt get to sleep with the thought tht she will see kavya - the man hoo she had a small cruch on and hoo is the father of kajal!!!
john - neha wots up u not well agen or something u didnt get any sleep did u ??
neha - no im fine im just felling a bit dodgy
john - ohh kk
john drops sneha and kajal off to school
*************afternoon**********************
neha - john i will get the girls
john - no neha i wanna get them
neha - john i am not in the mood of arguing to this
john - ( thinking - ohh no she will see kavya ) fine
neha goes to pick sneha and kajal up
sneha and kajal - mamaaaaaaa *run up to neha *
sneha - mama its the first time you came to pick me up
kajal - yeh mummy wots the occasion
neha - ohh nothing come on in the car
kajal - mama wait for bhumans dad first
neha - oh yeh
they waited
kajal - there he is
neha - where
kajal got hold of nehas hand and took her to kavya
neha - hello
kavya - looked around
kavya - NEHA!!!
neha - ( shocked )
kavay - neha please forgive me i didnt do that
neha - no onli if anjali forgives me
kavya - yes she will i know bring john and ur kids for a dinner tonight at the nanda house
neha - fine
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wots gonna happen at the dinner ????
thanks guys for reading
luv yaz
😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
Hey Shezzy12, this story of urz is really good. I see you havnt posted the remaining story. Its really good. I've jus read all the story and now waiting for the next part. Hats of to you Shezzy. 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
Good job Shezzy..you have kept to the original plot..of Kkavya being an idiot!LOL! 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#28
hey shezzy its brill hun 😃 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
^^ OMG i love ur siggy!!!!!! soo dreamy

yo shezzy sup dude i read it and now im waiting!! im sad cuz kayaanjali not in canada rite now so i have to wait longer for it to come out so i can watch it ..but for now ill be happy by reading ur story soo hurry up girl me waiting and u do now im like ur first reader so u gotta give me credit

ps- i love the bipasha addition 👏
Shezzy12 thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30
lol hahaha karen 😃

thanx luv
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