Pyaar Ishq aur Nafraat Part 30UPDATED!!!! - Page 5

OMG this is getting soooo good dude shezzy keep it up! 👏

lol, anjali getting drunk and being with another man. you are pushing it. though it could be funny.
great job so far!! 👏 👏

^^ i dont think its takin it far i think its good cuz stories are written to provide a diff view other than the original serial so i think its gud 👏 shezzy im still waitin...

check out what i wrote in my siggy shezzy?

aww thanx karen 😉 😃

lol
neha - runs to john and gets hold of him and takes him to their bedroom
kavya - still very shocked slowly goes to anjali and takes her to the sofa
anjali - kavya im feelin dizy!!!!
neha - brings a cup of coffee for neha and takes one for john
kavya - takes anjali and the bois into their car
neha - i guess u r going now
kavya - i think we will have to im sorri 4 anjalis behaviour
neha - its kk
*next morning*
anjali wakes up and finds kavya sleepin on the sofa and wondrs why he is there
she starts to have flashbacks of last night but her vision isnt clear
anjali slowly gets up from her bed and goes to the bathroom
anjali started to get headaches and started to remember wht she did to kavya and john !!!!
anjali - KAVYA * anjali faints *
kavya quickly got up and ran to the bathroom he put her onto the bed and called the doctor
doctor - erm kavya i have checked her i think she drank a bit too much last night and is regretting something and coz of that she has alot of pressure and if this continues she could lose her memory
kavya - WOT lose her memory wht shall i do
doctor - give her this medicine and try to act like u odnt care
kavya - ok doctor bye
bauji - kavya wots rong wiv anjali
kavya - notthing she just having normal headches
bauji - okay
*at johns house *
John woke up
john - im really sorry neha i dont know wht came ova me
neha - do u love me
john - yes i do !!!
neha - do u love anjali>
john - silent no i dont love anjali!!!!
neha - ( trying to ignore the fact tht he does ) i love u soo much please dont hurt me like this agen
john - i promise i wont *gave neha a hug*
John and neha had breakfast and neha dropped the kids off
*nanda house*
nitya - *recieves a call *
man - hello nitya
nitya - hello so wot happened last nite did kavya and neha fall for each ova
man - no its all the opposite
nitya - WHAT U MEEN!!!!
man - anjali is in love wiv and john they came into the house and anjali kissed john infront of kavya and neha
nitya - WOT !!!!! * put the phone down *
notya thought for a while
*thinkin to herself this is still good kavya will obviosly kik anjali out the house*
nitya went to kavya
nitya - ohhh kavya my son im soo sorri i told u that anjali isnt a good girl see what she did she broke ur heart see these middle people do !!!!!!* huggs kavya *
kavay - Mama calm down she didnt mean it she was drunk see i have been drunk and did something more worse than her i dont think she meant for this to happen
nitya - no kavya ( walked out the room )
nitya ( ohhhhhhhh nooooo y is all my plans going bust ) arrgghhhh
*johns house*
john - neha im going to work now
neha - yeh okay
john went to work
an hour later
*knock at the door *
neha went to open the door it was the press
Press - hello we have heard that the biggest movie Star was found drunk and was kissed by another women infront of his wife!!!!! is this true
neha - get out of my house!!!!!!!!1
neha slammed the door crouched down on the floor and cried!!!!!!

wow great work dude, this is getting relli gud cant wait... 😉

i like the fanfic it was interestin could you please finish it off beacause i want to see what happens at the end

sweetie you rock i mean i have never seen such a cool fanfic ever wow 👏 just bravo to you sweetie

luv noori 😃

*****NXT PART OF MY STORY*****************
neha eventually stopped cryin
it was time to pik the girls up so she went to pik the girls up
John comes home and is shocked with all the press he cudnt remeber anyfin properly onli tht anjali kissed him and he sed he loved her but noone else was in the house so how does the press know ? John was really stressed out coz his love life and reputation was beginin to fall
He decided to go back to America
Neha came back with the girls
John - hi babe *kissed neha*
neha - hi
john - i need to ask u somefin
neha - yeh wot?
john - do u forgive me?
neha - yeh ofcourse
johhn - ok
neha - tell me wot u wanted to tell me
john - i ave
neha - i know u want to tell me something else
john - shall we go back to america
neha - wot! realli
john - yeh everything is fallin my reputation is really goin down i need to get away from this country
neha - wots about the kids freinds like bhuman and abhi?? wot about anjali and kavya
john - Wot .......oh yeh we will tell them we will stay in contact wiv em they can come ova to our house and stuff!!!
neha - john i reali aint sure about this
john - Neha wot r u?
neha - wot u meen
john - another women kissed me infront of u and i sed i love her and u aint reactin ??? wots rong ? u shud hate me now ??? i m reali confused ?
neha - john please leave it
john - LEAVE WHT??????
neha - john shut up !!!
john - (was silent) fine i will leave it
john - neha wat about america
neha - erm book it for about 2/3 weeks so we can get ready and stuff
john - okay i iwll just go and book now
neha - kk
******************NANDA HOUSE***************************

Anjali - *consicious* Kavya!!!
kavya - yes anjali
anjali - im so sorry * bursts out cryin *
kavya - erm its fine just calm down u were drunk u will be fine i promise i will be wiv u
anjali - Promise?
kavya - yeh *kisses anjali on the head *
kavya goes out the room and nitya enters
nitya - tut tut tut anjali!!!! wot have u been doin
anjali - so wot if i did !!!!!! wots it 2 u
nitya - shhh someone mite hear tht u love john not kavya
anjali - oh shut up
kavya heard anjali
kavya - ANJALI odnt say that to my mama
anjali - im sooo sorry mama
nitya - its ok
kavya - anjali plz dont do tht agen

aw sweetie its ok i really enjoy reading yours i am just doing my fanfic rite now so i hope u read mine aswell

luv noori

CONTINED***************

anjali - kavya i need to call john i think i have created some family problems for them too
kavya - fine call im
anjali - hello john
john - ANJALI!!!!
anjali - im really sorry i dont know what came over me
john - im sorri too
anjali - so are we freinds then
johhn - yeh ........anjali nehas actin reali wierd im reali confused
anjali - in wht way
john - shes not botherred about what happeened she aint angry wiv me
anjali - well she cud be sad but aint showing it ohhhhhhh john *bursts out crying* im sooo sorrriiii i know i will tak to her
john - anjali dont cry
john - okay anji gtg bi
anjali - bi btw is neha free now
john - yeh i fink so
anjali - ok im coming
******ANJALI GOES TO JOHNS MANSION***************
neha - anjali!!!!!
anjali - neha
neha goes to hug anjali
anjali is suprised
anjali - im so sorri about the other nite
neha - y r u sorri!!!! i mean u were drunk and i reali dont wanna chat about that right now
anjali *shocked by her behaviour* erm ok then neha
neha - so wot u want tea coffee cold drink?
anjali - erm a nice cappicino wud be nice
neha - *calls the servant* get us a cappicinio plz
servant - rite maam
neha - so wots up and hows the bois
anjali - ohh there fine and how ru and and the girls?
neha - there good
anjali - any news u need to tell me?
neha - err no
john - yes there is neha tell her baout america
anjali - AMERICA???
neha - yeh we are going back in few weeks
anjali - WOT????? WHY??? THIS IS UR COUNTRY???
neha - anjali i cant settle down here its too hard the whole lifestyle in america and india are different
anjali - o
neha - u can come and visit us a few times!
anjali - hmmhm yeh tht wud be nice!
neha - soooo......
anjali - erm i think i gtg now!!!!!!!
neha - do u wanna come shopping with me for america?
anjali - yeh sure
neha - well come tomorrow at my house a 1pm kk
anjali - yeh ok seeya bii
neha- biii
john - neha r u going to the shop to get kajal some medicine
neha - yeh i will just go!
***************NANDA HOUSE************************

kavyas mobile rings!!!!!!!!!
kavya - hello
docotor - hello do u know anyone called neha abraham??
kavya - yes shes my freind whats wrong>?
doctor - she has just had an accident plz come quick to the bluesky hospital
kavya = yeh ok thanx
kavya rushed to the hospital!!!
neha had hurt her head not very serious!!!
kavya looked at the window!!!
kavya was reali upset and nearly began to cry!!
doctor - excuse me mr.nanda can u call her husband u have been here for an hour have u calle dher husband
kavya - owt its been an hour ! * kavya called john and told him about the accident*
kavya entered nehas room
neha - john!!!
kavya - (sat down nxt to her)neha!!
neha - *held onto kavyas hand tightly*
neha - john im so sorry i shouldnt of behaved like this
john came in and saw kavya holding nehas hand
john - kavya! move please
kavya - *shocked* err yeh sorri
john - (sat down) yeh babes u okay
neha - im so sorri
john - its fine *kissed her hand*
doctor came in
doctor - i need miss nehas blood samples for some tests
john - yeh sure doctor!!!
took the blood!!!!
nitya came in
kavya - mama!
nitya - i found out u were in the hospital about neha so i came
kavya - o.k
nitya - ohh neha bheta are you okay ?
neha - yes auntie
nitya - i need a private word with neha please
kvya and john left
nitya - i found some juicy gossip out
neha - *confused look on her face*
nitya - guess wot kajal abraham is kavya nandas daughter !!! isnt she !!!!!
* wots gonna happen now * 😉