New FF:Adhuri Si AasPart50(pg53)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#181

now we will know everything cannot wait

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aparna velayudhan

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#182

Hayy hyyy nyss update.. Arjuhi together alone

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Archana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#183

so they are stuck together...

and now waiting for arohi to reveal the past...

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shreya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#184

hayee very cute, now waiting to know arohi's past. some romance...

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Nira Mukherjee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Part: 32
Arohi get up from that place , & come to the front yard of that house , & started the story---

Memory:
Shefali & Gouri are standing in front of Arohi's bed; where Arohi is sleeping like an angel. Gouri , Shefali & Arohi are friends since their college days. They are also known as " Three Musketeers". To see her sleeping Shefali & Gouri started talking to each other.

"Ye ladki ka kuch nehi ho sakta . . ."--- Gouri sit in the bed with a thud & says.
"Sach mei . . . ye abhi tak so rehi hei . . ."---Shefali says.
"Arohi . . .kitni soyegi . . .uth na . . ."---Shefali give her a push.
"Akal ke dushman . . .subah subah disturb karne aa gaye ho . . .??"--- She says with a sleepy voice & covers her ears with a pillow.

Gouri get up from the bed & stand beside of Shefali---

"Arohi tu uthegi ki nehi . . .?? uth ja na . . . aaj kya hei tu bhul gayi?? Dekh uth ja varna agar Aunty aa gayi . . .toh bahot problem ho jayega..."

Arohi open her eyes & says with an irritating voice---
"kya hua hei bol . . .??"
"Arohi . . .meri maa . . .aaj kya hei . . .??"---Gouri says with a cunning face.
"Aaj . . .aaj . . ."---she tries to remembers " OMG . . .aaj meri mehendi hei . . ."---Arohi suddenly become tensed, she was already late for this & her mother is very particular with this kind of rituals.
"Ohhh . . .really Arohi . . .??" Dekha Shefali aaj iski mehendi hei . . . thank God Arohi tu yaad dila diya hume . . ."---Gouri says, she & Shefali are smiling , they pretend to be serious.
"chup raho tum dono . . . natak mat karo . . . pehle kyun nehi aye mujhe uthane ke liye??"---she says with an angry tone.
"Hum natak kar rahe hei . . .?? hum yahaan kab se khade hei tujhe uthane ke liye"--- Gouri says.
"toh mei kya karu . . .meine mana kiya tha tum dono ko baithne ke liye?"--- She says with a sweet tone.
"tu mazak kar rehi hei . . .?"--- Gouri ask her.
"Haan . . ."---Arohi says calmly.
"Arohi . . .!!"---Gouri shouts.
"Gouri . . .!!"--- she again replies calmly.
"hey stop . . .stop . . . tum dono ye kya Arohi . . . Gouri kar rehi ho . . .abhi kitna kuch karna hei . . .parlor jana hei . . . fir dress selection . . ." --- Shefali says pitifully with a cute face.
"Shefali shadi kiski hei . . .??"---Gouri asks her softly.
"Arohi ki . . ."---She replies.
"toh fir . . .??"---she turns back to Arohi---" Arohi ab tu ready hoke niche aa jana . . . sab tere liye wait kar raha hei . . .accha sun bhaiyaa se baat hui thi . . .??"---she added.
"nehi . . . vo toh phn hi nehi kiya . . ."---she says.

Gouri sit beside her , ---
"Mujhe toh soch soch ke hi hasi aa rehi hei ye jungli billi meri bhabi banegi . . ."---she says.
"haan aur tumhara bhaiyaan matlab darpok billa mera pati banega . . ." --- She is laughing.
"Hello . . . vo darpok nehi hei tumhe respect karta hei bas . . ."---Gouri says spontaneously.
"accha . . . "

Arohi took her phone from the bed-side table & says---
"Omg . . .phone switched off hei . . ."
She switch on the phone , there was showing 14 msgs & 10 missed call , Arohi's face become pale , Gouri ask---
"kya hua . . .?"
"14 msgs & 10 missed call . . ."
"ab tu ekbaar use phone kar lena . . ."---Shefali says then she turn back to Gouri & says---
"Gouri . . .chal"
Then she turn back to Arohi---
"Thoda jaldi niche aa jana . . ."
"haan haan thik hei . . .ab jao tum dono!!"
"dekha . . .ab hum dono ka yahaan kya kaam . . ."
"haan . . .ab jao . . ."

Arohi close the door . She dials Aakash's no. after 2 rings , Aakash receive the call; & says angirily---
"kya baat hei Arohi . . .?? mei itni der se tumhe phone kar raha hu tum phone hi nehi utha rehi ho . . ."
"oh . . .sorry . . .mei na so rehi thi aur meri phone silent mode pe tha . . "
"its ok . . . accha suno wish me luck . . ."
"Luck . . . kisliye??"
"mei aaj car-racing mei participate kar raha hu . . ."
"no . . .Aakash tum car-racing mei part nehi loge . . ."
"Arohi samajne ki kaushis karo ye meri life ki last car racing hei . . ."
"par . . ."
"Arohi please . . .ok . . . ab chalo bye . . .best of luck kaho . . ."---but she remains silent , Aakash says---
"Arohi . . .say . . .best of luck!!"
"best of luck . . ."
"thanks!!"
He cut the call.
"Aakash . . ."---Arohi thrown the phone on the bed hopelessly.
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Arohi's mom & other family members are waiting at the lounge for her ; but there is no sign of Arohi. In a corner Shefali , Gouri & their friends are standing. Arohi's mother come to Gouri & asks her---

"Gouri . . ."
"Haan . . .aunty?"
"Arohi kaha hei . . .?"
"Arohi toh upar hei . . .tiayaar ho rehi hei . . ."
"tu jake ek baar dekh na . . . itni der se kya kar rehi hei . . .kahi Aakash ke saath jagda . . ."
"Aunty relax . . . aisa kuch nehi hei . . .ok . . .mei jake dekhti hu . . ."
She come to the stairs & stop to see Arohi, She is looking gorgeous. Arohi come come to her, Gouri says---
"itni der se kya kar rehi thi upar . . .?"
"are dekh na ye Aakash na . . ."
"tum dono mei jagda ho gaya . . .?"
"nehi . . .lekin vo car-racing karne chala gaya . . ."
"haan . . .toh?"
"toh matlab . . .??"

"Are tum dono vahaan hi khade rahoge . . ."---Arohi disrupted hearing her mother's voice. she smiles & come there. Two girls are starting apply mehendi in her hand some middle-aged women are started teasing her with Aakash's name. Arohi says---
"ma . . .Shefali aur Gouri kaha hei . . .?"
Her mother said nothing, suddenly all heavy lights become off; with that the music starts. Gouri & Shefali are in the stage with that music.

Background:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DdGjAU5DlUc

In the afternoon Arohi in her room trying to call Aakash who is not receive her calls. Arohi is become frustrated,
"Arohi tu abhi bhi upar hei . . ."---Shefali is standing in the door, Arohi look at her helplessly, Shefali come near her & says---
"Arohi what happened??"
"Dekh na mei kabse Aakash ko try kar raha hu . . . lekin vo phone hi nehi utha raha . . ."---she says with a choking voice & a tearful eyes.
"are . . .yahaan baith . . .tu itni si baat pe ro kyun rehi hei . . .?? are hoga busy koi kaam mei . . . tu kuch der baad fir se try kar na . . .---
shefali says while console her.
"haan . . .thik hei . . .lekin . . ."---she is hesitating.
"Lekin . . .i know tu bahot tension kar rehi hei . . .kuch nehi hoga . . ."---Shefali smiles.
In the evening; she is dressing up, Shefali & Gouri are helping her.---
"Kash bhaiyaan yahaan hota . . ."---Gouri says.
"Accha hei nehi hei . . ."---Shefali replies.
"kyun?"---Arohi says arranging her dupatta
"vo tujhe dekhte hi behosh ho jata . . ."---Shefali says & smiles. Suddenly Arohi's phone ring.
"hello . . ."---Arohi receive the call.
The other side replies---
"Ap Miss Arohi bol rehi hei?"
"haan . . .ap kaun?"
"apke liye ek bad news hei . . ."---she stops , she was also thinking how to say this bad news to her. "Mr. Aakash Mathur ab nehi rahe . . ."
"what . . .????????"---Arohi shouts.
Shefali & Gouri are cinfused, they come to her,
"nehi rahe matlab kya kehna chahti hei ap?"---Arohi says mumbling.
"Actually mam aaj subah yahaan car-racing karte waqt uska accident hua tha toh hum unhe hospital leke gaye the par I'm sorry to say that . . . i hope you can understand . . .sorry mam.
Arohi is not in the state of being listen or saying something, she is not crying also. She is become an alive dead body. She is sitting in the floor. Shefali says---
"arohi . . .kya hua hei?? kiska phone tha??"
Shefali keep the phone & says---
"hello . . . kaun hei ap . . .?"
After listening all the things Gouri can't believe his ears, she thinks it may be a fake phone, it may be a joke, but the big problem was Arohi. Gouri is crying, but still Arohi sitting like a doll, Gouri can't understand what to say to all those people who are in the mood of enjoyment, who are preparing for this marriage. This house which is decorating with so much light, it becomes pale at once. shefali says---
"Gouri kya baat hei . . .?"
"Bhaiyaa ka . . ."
"bhaiyaa ka kya . . .?"
"Bhaiyaa ka death ho gaya hei . . ."
"Tu kya bol rehi hei . . .?"---Shefali ask, suddenly she sees Arohi is still sitting, "Arohi . . . ."---She call her.
Gouri also tries to speak her up but she become silent. Gouri is crying hugging Shefali.
"Mei niche jake kya kahungi . . .mom-dad ko kya kahungi . . . aur Arohi . . ."---She hide her face with palm.
"Gouri ye rone ki waqt nehi hei . . .pehle hume Arohi ko sambhal na hoga . ."---Shefali says consoling Gouri, shefali come towards Arohi, she is still silent.
"Shefali tu Arohi ko sambhal . . .mei niche ja raha hu . . ."---she is panting. How can someone says this to those who are planning of their only child's marriage, its really a tough job to say what happened was.
"Ruko . . ."---Shefali stops , it was from Arohi."Shefali tum bhi Gouri ke saath niche jao . . ."---she says.
"Arohi . . .lekin tu yahaan . . ."--- "Tum bhi Gouri ke saath niche jao . . ."---Arohi again says. Gouri and Shefali are hesitating , they can't believe Arohi become so cool, so silent, after hearing this kind of news. But Arohi already shut the door.
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"Fir . . .?"---Arjun ask, his question startled her, she says---
"Fir kya . . .bahot din lage the ye sab kuch sambhal ne mei . . .aur pata hei . . .accha hi hua hei ki Aakash mujhe chod kar chale gaye . . ."--- Arohi's eyes become wet, Arjun come near her & says---
"ro maat . . ."---she hugs him; at last she finds a place where she can hide her tears.
"Chalo . . .ab andar chalo"---Arjun says.

Background: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ENASNHwP3eQ

At last Arohi reveal her past to Arjun, for the demand of the story i wrote a long conversation between "Arohi", "Gouri" & "Shefali". The update was become too long , Hope its not so boring.
Read, like & comment!!

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago

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arjuhi_s

@arjuhi_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#186

res...i have to read previous parts and then i will comment ek saath

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Rimpi_kmh

@Rimpi_kmh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Nice update!
N its nt a boaring,infact i like long update.
Finally arohi ka past samna agia.

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#188

poor arohi!

on the day of her mehndi all this happened!

i have a feeling arjun have some kind of connection with arohi and aakash's past...

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shreya

@ShrePreet18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#189

oye its not boring, I love this. we love long updates.

finally her past revealed.

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Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Part: 33
Next day morning . . .
Arohi & Arjun are sitting in the bus , it was 8:30 then. They say nothing to each other till now. Arohi is thinking about previous night , when she shared about her past with him & with that she remembered their first kiss. Arohi look at him , Arjun was also looking at her , she keep down her head , she smiles & look at the window.
This morning seems so beautiful to her , this sun , this hill , this nature she enjoyed many times before that but for the first time she feels that so beautiful , so charming , full of love. Arjun who is already in love with her , he gazing at her beauty. His partner , good friend , Arohi is already become his Arohi . . . only Arohi . . . without any tag. Arjun touch her hand , she shivers , Before that Arjun many times hold her hand , but she never shivers like that. Is it because she is in love . . .??
Arohi look at him with blushing eyes , Arjun's eyes become more passionate to see her , he wants to kiss her right now , but he controlled himself. They get down from the at the bus stand of Barot. After the bus gone Arjun waving his hand & says "Bye" to Arohi , he wants that she will tell him something, she turns back & stops ,

" Arjun . . .tumhe ek baat puchu??"---She says.

"haan . . ."---Arjun replies.

"tum mujhe pure 2:00 ghante kuch bhi nehi kaha . . . aur usdin jo hua . . . i mean tum mujhe like karte ho ye baat pehle kyun nehi bataya . . .??"

"like . . .???? aisa kisne kaha tumse . . .??"

"Matlab . . .?"

"Matlab mei tumhe like nehi karta hu . . . "--- he left giving her no chance to reply , she is standing alone.

Exhausted , sad & tired Arohi come back home . Arjun already called Gouri & told her about them . Gouri is waiting for her in the front yard of the house , seeing the tired Arohi Gouri come towards her.

"Tum dono bhi na kamaal karte ho . . . !! meine kaha tha Arjun ko sunset dikha ke lao tum toh use sunset ke saath saath sunrise bhi dikha diya . . ."--- She says , at the next moment she become serious to see her silent. Arohi is lost in thoughts.

"kya hua . . . Arohi . . . sab thik hei na??"---she ask her ,

"haan . . .everything is alright . . ."--- She answered , with a wide smile though which is a fake smile , she is going to leave .

"kya hua Arohi . . ."--- She hold her hands & ask.

Arohi now can't control herself , she hugs Gouri & starts crying , tears are falling down from her eyes , she is trying harder to control them , but she failed.

"meine fir se ek galati kar diya . . ."---she wipe her tears & says.

"galati . . .??"---Gouri frown at her.

"haan . . . mei Arjun se pyaar kar baithi . . ."---she says raise her face.

"toh . . .?? tumhe lagta hei tumne galati kar diya??"---she ask again.

"haan . . .kyun ki Arjun don't love me . . . aur love toh chodo Gouri , like bhi nehi karta hei vo mujhe . . . toh itne dino se vo kya kar raha tha mere saath . . . natak???"---She is almost screaming ,

"Arohi . . .calm down . . ."---Gouri tries to control her. she is patted her back , Arohi is crying painfully.

"nehi Gouri . . .hamesha zindegi mei galati karti hu mei . . . log kehte hei jo bhi hota hei accha ke liye hi hota hei . . . lekin is mei kya accha hua Gouri . . .?? sach ye hei ki mei toh kisike pyaar pane ki layek hi nehi hei . . ."---She is weeping , then she running towards her room , & lock the door , Gouri is shouting by her name , but she don't listen to her.

Gouri dials a no. , she says---

"congrats . . .tumhara plan toh kaam kar gaya . . ."---she is smiling , & then she hung up the call & come to the kitchen . . .!!

Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago

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