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Posted: 12 years ago

lovly update,

but who is this soloni? and why arjun is worried? he has a past??
now wat happen to gauri, why she is behaving like this..
waiting for the next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no - who is this saloni now? whats up with gauri -nice update naina
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part---35
Gouri is walking here & there , her restless eyes are proving her distraught -ions. Her bed's messiness also make a dark shadow on her face ; she can't sit still nor stand , she is confused , disturbed. From the first day she is one of a best friend of Arohi , every step of her life is attached with Gouri , when Arohi was leading a lifeless life , it was Gouri who every time with her , gave her mental support. Even she was told her to gave her life a second chance , but when all things are going to happen , why she can't feel relax .

Arohi & Arjun are still standing in the balcony ,

"Arohi . . . ab mujhe jana chahiye . . ."--- Arjun says looking at Arohi , who is still hugging him , hearing this Arohi raise her face , but says nothing , she removing herself from his arms , & turn back , she starts walking towards her room , but suddenly she feels a touch on her hands ,

"Arjun . . . tumhe ab jana chahiye . . ."--- she says without turning back , She keeps her head down , Arjun comes in- front of her , hold her shoulders ,

"Arohi . . . tum naraz mat ho jao . . . Arohi . . . kya hua ?"--- he says lift her face ,

"Mei tumhe khona nehi chahti . . . isliye Arjun . . . mei darti hu kahi Aakash ke tarha tum bhi . . . mujhe chod ke . . ."--- tears rolling down from her eyes , she can't complete her words ,

"Arohi . . . bacchi ho kya tum . . . mei hamesha tumhara hi rahunga . . . lekin . . ."--- his voice sounds worried

"Lekin . . . ?"--- Arohi ask.

"Arohi . . . chahe jo kuch bhi ho jaye tum mujhe kabhi mis understand mat karna . . . "--- he says .

"Arjun . . . "--- she stops , " Nehi Arohi . . . ab tum jake so jao . . ."--- she smiles , Arjun also smiles . They come to the room , Arohi lay down in her bed , Arjun is just going to leave , suddenly Arohi holds his hand

"thoda der aur ruk jao na . . ."--- hearing her sweet voice , Arjun sit beside her , & holds her hands tightly.

Gouri is thinking what to do , her brain is not working , she startled hearing the phone call , she receive the call ,

"tumhare vajah se ye saab hua . . . tum hi zimmedar ho jo bhi hua uske liye . . ."--- Gouri says angrily , her voice is trembling.

"Are mujhe kaise pata chalega . . . achanak uske upar pyaar ka bhoot sawar ho jayega . . . aur tum mujhe kyun blame kar rehi ho . . .??"--- The voice seems to be irritate . "meine tumhe kaha tha . . . dono ko pass lane ke liye . . . aur tum ho ki . . . sab kuch bigad diya . . ."--- the voice stops there is a silence between them.
"Tum yahaan kab aa rahe ho?"--- Gouri ask after sometime .

"Ab ana toh padega hi . . . sab kuch thik karna hoga . . ."

"Ok . . ."

"Aur tum thoda sambhal ke rehna . . . kya pata agar Arjun ne kuch sun lia . . . toh problem ho jayega . . ."--- The voice says.

"hmmm . . .!! thik hei . . . kaal batati hu yahaan ki sare news."--- Gouri says.

"thik hei . . ."--- they hung up.

"Arohi itni acchi ek ladki hei . . . aur mujhe vo trust bhi karti hei . . . mei kaise use sach batau . . . agar fir se kuch ho gaya toh . . . nehi nehi . . . mei aisa kuch hone nehi dunga . . . lekin fir bhi Saloni ko mei kaise rok sakta hu . . . agar vo sach mei yahaan aa gayi . . . aur Arohi ko sab kuch bata diya . . ."--- Arjun look at Arohi , she is already fell in to sleep. To see her Arjun remove his hands from Arohi's , & get up from the bed ,

"Nehi Arohi chahe kuch bhi ho jaye . . . mei tumhe kabhi chod ke nehi jayunga . . . "--- he bent down & kissed in her forehead & leave . . .!!

"Ab kaal mei Arjun se baat karungi . . . vo Arohi ke saath kaise . . . nehi aisa toh impossible hei . . . ab kaal toh kuch karna hi padega . . ."--- Gouri come to her room & laying down in the bed , she is waiting for sleep . . .!!


Sorry guys . . . for not adding any song . . . !!😊 i can't understand which song will be perfect for this update . . .!!


Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi naina... 😊 first time am commenting here ur ff ws ossom keep gng 👏 hmmm so gauri is dng her all time fav job nothing but interfering in arjuhi's life 😡 I ws thinking hw cud tis girl can b so nice to arohi 😈nice update do continue soon aur haan tanx fr the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
gd part ya...
Wts it wth gouri
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Posted: 12 years ago
now i am dead sure gauri and saloni do know each other!!
is arjun not whom he is claiming to be? i mean he is arjun but not the son of Mr. Sameer? isn't that the name of the person?
i think gauri and saloni planned something and they used arjun for that... but they never thought arjun would fall for arohi... and arjun doesn't know gauri is involved!
gauri can be worried about their planning failing or she could actually be worried about arohi as i feel the initial intention of arjun coming to barot was not good...
i am so eager to know the entire truth! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update!!
a gouri ki problem kya hai???😡
I am eagerly waiting to know the entire truth! of arjun
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update, but so curious to know, what is the mystery
what happend to gauri, want to know whole truth about gauri n wats the connection of saloni.
now eagerly waiting for the next..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update:-) waiting for the next n excited to knw the secret
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note:

First of all , a big Thanks to you guys . . . for liking my story & for supporting me , this story is not just a story . . . its a true tale , when i was first listened this story from one of my friend i was shocked , i cried .
Mei bhi na . . . kya likhna chahti thi . . . aur kya likh rehi hu . . . actually i'm going to spend my holidays in a hill-station . . . so next update will be after 27th jan . . .
Miss u all guys . . . 🤗
Naina . . .

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