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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update naina
gauri - what are u upto?
mysticlover thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
what is gauri and arjun planning?
arjun doesn't like arohi!!!
he loves her! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
whats gauri upto awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago

What!! Arjun didn't like arohi :o
Is gouri called arjun?
Is it gouri n arjun planning?confusd..
poor arohi :'(
I liked the twist :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its awesome update.
So arjun n gauri planning something...
Waiting for the next:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part:--- 34

Arjun is sitting in the balcony , he is thinking about last night , when they were spent their moments with each other first time , when she told him about her life , her past & that moment also when Arjun first time kissed her . Arjun pick up the phone from the side table & dial her number ; but he cut the call. He thinks---

" Mei kyun soch rehi hu Arohi ke bare mei . . . haan sach ki mei usse pyaar karta hu . . . lekin agar mei abhi Arohi ko ye saab kahunga . . .vo toh yehi sochengi ki mei uspar ehsaan kar raha hu . . . lekin dil ki jazbaat ko kaise chupau . . . aaj subah Arohi ki ankho mei vo dard . . . mei use kabhi dukhi nehi dekh sakta . . ."

He dial the number ,

"Arjun tum itni raat ko . . . kya baat hei . . ."--- a sleepy voice answer him.
"Sorry Gouri . . . but bahot jaruri hei tumhe ye baat kehna . . ."--- Arjun stops to take a breathe , "I want to propose her now . . ."--- He added.
Gouri get up hearing his sudden fanciful claim. " Arjun tum pagal ho . . . raat ke 2:00 baje hue hei . . . tum abhi kaise propose kar sakte ho . . .?"--- She ask her , she feels irritated. Actually her voice seems not normal. "Tum bas itna karo . . . main door khol do . . .baki ka kaam mei sambhal lunga . . ."--- He says & cut the call.

Gouri is waiting for him in the main door , it was around 2:45 then ; at last Arjun come ,
"Arjun tumhara dimaag ki halaat thik hei na?"--- Gouri ask her , while she closing the door.
"Haan . . .ekdum perfect hei . . . Gouri pyaar ke liye risk lena padhta hei . . ."--- Arjun wink at her.
"pyaar . . .??"--- She suddenly shocked to hear this. "I mean . . .tum toh use like karte the achanak pyaar . . ."---She mumbling.
"Tumhe ho kya gaya hei . . .?"--- Arjun ask her , he also can't understand why her nature sudden changed.
"No . . . no . . .aise hi . . .puch rehi thi . . .thik hei tum jao . . ."---Gouri pushed him towards Arohi's room. She left.

Arohi is lying in her bed , she has nothing to say to anyone , except God. Just one question rumbling in her brain & she repeatedly utter this question--- "Why me God . . . why . . .? kya meri life mei kabhi kuch accha nehi hoga . . . meine toh kabhi kisika bura nehi chaha . . . fir mere saath hi kyun aisa hota hei . . . pehle Aakash aur fir Arjun . . . aap kyun hamesha mere saath aisa karte hei . . ."---Her voice is choking , she is weeping.
Background : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tXfmeD2AWaw ( Pls read this part with the background music.)

Arjun take a long breathe & knock at her door ; Arohi suddenly hear this knock & get up from bed , her dark room looking more dark today. Arohi opened the door & shocked to see Arjun in-front of her , at first she can't understand truly its Arjun . . . or she dreaming. Without give her a chance to saying anything he drag her towards the room & pinned her to the cupboard.
" Arjunnn . . . tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho ? aur vo bhi itni raat ko . . ."--- but she can't complete her words because Arjun keep his fingers on her lips & says--- " shhh!! pehle mujhe bolne do . . ." He touch her cheeks , & tucked some hair logs behind her ears , then he feels that her cheeks are wet , because she was crying . . . " Tum ro rahe the ? vo bhi mere liye . . .? Arohi . . .tumhe pata hei . . . har ghadi . . . har waqt mei sirf aur sirf tumhare bare mei hi sochta hu . . . mei ankh bandh karta hu toh tumhe dekhta hu . . . tumhari smile , sharmana , gussa ho jana , ye sab mujhe tumhare ore khinchta hei . . . jante ho kyun?"--- Arjun remove his finger from her lip , her eye's are trying to find his answers. To see her silent Arjun says--- " nehi janti ho . . . ok . . . mei batata hu . . .mei tumse pyaar karta hu Arohi . . . aur isliye hamesha darta tha agar tumhe mera ye pyaar ehsaan lage . . ."--- he says & hold her hands , kissing their softly.
Arohi wants to say something , but this time she also stops by Arjun. " itna kya bolna hei tumhe ? kaam ke baat toh kuch kar nehi pati ho . . . meine hi kiya sab kuch . . . ab jab mei bol raha hu tab itna kya bolna hei tumhe . . .?"

Arohi starts laughing to seeing his fake "gussa" , Before Arohi could say or do anything in protest, he bent down and kissed her lips, she is blushing & pushed him back , she come to in-front of the window , Arjun is standing behind her ,
" abhi tak meine complete nehi kiya . . ."--- he whispering in her ears. hearing this Arohi turns back to him , & he pulled her closer. They are gazing at each other's eye. " Tumhe pata hei tumhare bina toh mei ek pal bhi jee nehi sakti . . . mei tumse bahot pyaar karti hu Arjun . . . itna pyaar toh mei apne aap se bhi nehi karti hu . . . tum mere liye sab kuch ho . . . mei tumhare bina mar jayungi . . ."--- She hugs him tightly. The curtains of her room are fluttering in the wild breeze , & it covers Arohi's face ; Arjun remove it , she close her eyes feels his touch , she can feel his breathe , his warmness , his lips upon her . . .

But suddenly a mechanical voice breaks their moments. Arohi open her eyes , Arjun remove her , she come backward & says---
" Tumhara phone . . ."--- Arjun receive the call.
"hello . . .whose this ?"
"Tum meri awaz hi nehi pehchan paye . . . Arjun . . .this is too bad . . .its me Saloni . . ."--- the other side replies.

Arjun startled to hear her ,
"Tum . . . kya baat hei . . . itni raat ko phone . . ."--- he ask.
"Baby . . . I've a good news for u . . . guess what?"--- Her voice seems happy , excited.
" I don't know"--- Arjun is now feels irritated.
"baby . . . mei India aa rehi hu . . . lekin tum khush nehi ho kya?"--- she ask.
"no . . .aisi baat nehi hei . . . wow!!"--- he trying to be happy but its almost like a fake one.
"haan . . .aur bhi ek surprise hei tumhare liye . . ."
"kya . . .?"--- his voice seems worried.
"Surprise hei . . .o.k. chalo bye . . . love u & missing u too much!!"--- She hung up.

Arjun keep his phone to his pocket. He come to the balcony, where Arohi is standing , he come & stand beside her .
"kaun tha . . .?"--- She ask , her face is looking happy , like a moonlit night.
"Koi nehi . . . vo ek business call tha . . ."---he says casually.

He is thinking about Saloni , she hugs him , his thought disrupted feeling Arohi's soft touch. He don't know what will happen when Saloni come to India, He can't loose Arohi at any cost , but if Saloni tells her about his past , what will happen then . . . If Arohi leave him , misunderstand him , he feels an unknown fear , Arjun hugs her more tightly . . .!!



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Edited by mon.sayan17.com - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh freak! Saloni? who is she? he has a past?

And why was gauri acting weird?
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the confession!
bt iss daal mein kuch toh kaala hey!!!
i mean in last update gauri phoned someone and i thought it was arjun but after reading about gauri's response in this update and the entry of saloni and arjun's fears about saloni coming to india and arohi knowing the truth about his past it makes me wonder... does gauri and saloni know each other?
what is arjun's past? why do i feel it is related to aakash and arohi?
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Posted: 12 years ago
dont let saloni get in arjuhi way please
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Posted: 12 years ago
now who is saloni????😕
arjun also has a past!!!!😲
arohi disclose hua too ab arjun ka past
n why gouri react like that ???
aakash ki jis bick rece ma death hua usma arjun vi participate kiya tha kya???😕

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