my anger! upd chap 17 pg65 DEC 09 - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

nic promo:) u shld continue achu..:) its shaping up quite well and d mystery 2 why exactly did she leave Arjun will be quite gripping 2 read:)
And suggestions umm i thnk am very bad at suggesting.hehe.am sure u will do ur bst whatevr u hav in ur mind.go on:):)


tnk u dear! i was so confused..

truth to be told i am stuck! i mean i had a flow till now and now suddenly it's stuck...

the first reason or fight i had planned for them just go out the window! i forget it! can u believe it? i am crazy! so i am cooking up something else! i can only hope to find my mind back...

i hope i can be truthful to the story and u guys!
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Posted: 13 years ago
dnt u wrry achu.am sure u will rock!!take ur tym:) we r always dere 2 support u:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
of course u shud cont d prsnt track...archu😊
cant wait 2 no d resn 4 der seprtn..
tk ur tym n m sure u'll put al d piecs of d puzzle ryt in der placs...
al d bst..
lv u😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

dnt u wrry achu.am sure u will rock!!take ur tym:) we r always dere 2 support u:)


tnx dear!😊

now i am gng... had an appointment with my dentist! today he will tell me wen i can get rid of my braces! but i kinda like them.. tc dear.. this will most probably be up by saturday... and if i can manage u will knw the reason of separation..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover

promo:-

But still she had the memories of her real family, a family that was dysfunctional and had made her totally a rebel. She wasn't Arohi Khanna. The truth to be told she was Arohi Ahluwalia, a name she wanted to forget. That one fight with Arjun and all those bad memories rush back flooding her and choking her to break away. She broke away from him, her family and her friends because the love was beginning to suffocate.
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It was this shame in revealing her past that had cost her the love of her life... Sometimes Arohi think that her life was following the trodden path of daily soaps. First fall in love and then get separated but she knew whatever excuse she gave it was her fault. May be Arjun lose his cool too but it was her who started it. Her past couldn't be an excuse.
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The silly fights they had before were all signs of the coming storm. It may have gone by as a harsh breeze but she made it a heavy storm.


even though this is a promo i want your opinion on this. i wanted to write something else but i couldn't. the story is making it's own track. the thing about her real parents i want your opinion on that.. it's all messed up in my head. so pls give your stance. though i said i would update 'immature ' first this ff is not leaving my mind. and varsh i need your opinion mostly as i think my ff seems to have a close resemblance to yours.. i dnt want to have the same track.. and i am sorry if i sound rude and disrespectful.. pls comment..



Oh my God! i Understand Achu... i seriously did not intend this!! i built up the story long ago!
but hey! we both think alike! 😳 Please don't be upset... but the thing is though we both have the same twist... there is still a difference... and the events following the twist will differ :)
why would do you think you are rude? umm..i don't know where you are stuck up... if the problem is us both having the same track.. then i will abide to whatever you decide :):) and i Dont mind if it is having the same twist...
Or do you have a different track in mind? .. And story taking it's own way! i completely understand :) Do whatever your heart asks you to do Achu.. I Would love it if you continue this track though :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mysticlover


tnx dear!😊

now i am gng... had an appointment with my dentist! today he will tell me wen i can get rid of my braces! but i kinda like them.. tc dear.. this will most probably be up by saturday... and if i can manage u will knw the reason of separation..

u have braces????????even one of my friends had but she used to hate them!!!!!!!!😆
Now i guess saturday is ur fav day...You have been updating every saturdays now😆..ok...take care dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
great promo achu...

honestly i think you should just follow your heart... since the story is taking its own track donot try and change it as you may not be able to do justice to it... as a writer its completely your decision in which direction the story turns, and if you feel this is how it should be then we are here to support you :)))

i've loved the story and characters so far and im sure i will do so no matter what you decide... so all the best!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
gripping promo...hmm, somehow i expected this...a sad past engulfing and affecting a good person's present..
i don't know what can i suggest for story but the reason has to be very strong to justify long separation despite their mutual longing for each other.

take your time in updating.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome continue the story it's being interesting promo
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Achu..
Nice promo yaar...👏
U shuld defo continue and my suggesstion is that you should go with what is in your mind...😳

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