A story: Dusk and Dawn(p12,13,14 updt)

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

seond!!
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i'm loving the story and am getting an idea of where it is going!!
just hope the dairy knocks some sense into dishnee!!😊

Edited by vrshn - 14 years ago

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

This is the only thing I can give you, my diary, your mother's experience. I am sorry for everything I did to you and everyone who thought right for me, I wish that you can read my diary and understand me. By the time you will get the diary, I will be already leaving this body. I have always loved you, my daughter.

Yours unlucky mother

Arohi.''

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I don't believe this. Arohi died without even meeting her daughter. Feel sad for both of them

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

@punam - the story will unfold for the reason why she cant meet her. actually i tried to show that yudishnee was living with her (23-14) and then came to live wit her dad and brother.

@varshini loved that u could get the hint :) do let me know the story will unfold the way you are thinking.

I just wanted to know what do u think of the characters that I have introduced at the moment.

@priya - no worries dear on the name u wanted me to call me but as i felt now i must use my real name :) hope it is equally love as pen name eshu😊

@all - i am really enjoying the comments you guys have on me.

I duno this time I feel I am writing a novel 😊

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arjuhi4eva

@arjuhi4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Res...i need to get out of karans performance mood first :P :P

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

dishnee: i feel miserable for her! she has gone through so much that all she wants to do now is feel safe!
nandy; was sooo sweet! she sees the good in everything and has a mature outlook towards life!
mr.anand: though we did not see anything from his view,from the sound sof it,he believes in being male dominant!
arohi: waiting to learn more about her from the dairy :) but i'm damn sure she was a sweet one!
sarvesh: total freak and scary guy! hehe!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

very nice story nisha

pls continue - would luv to know what's in aru's diary

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Nisha , I can see who nadita is :) , Nice update.

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Du_Nish

@Du_Nish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

hehehe kavya 😊

hows the flow from ur perspective

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Du_Nish
hehehe kavya 😊

hows the flow from ur perspective

It is good, well blended . It is sad the yudishnee even after going thru a trumulous childhood wont be finding happiness with sarvesh either.

when I was reading I felt nandita cld have been arohi and you know who arjun cld have been. But I like the way you want to tell the story thur arohi's dairy.