New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9

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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#711

lol mm sad iliked preet so muchh well uknow i still hv a confusion is it preet or prem ??? i donno but arghh godd

nyways thnks for the pm

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Maheen

@sweet_gurl93

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#712

hey
really nice part, with the whole father's day picnic, and the gifts that Aarav gave...
but then like soo suddenly, an accident happened?? and Preet is dead?? that is soo sad! 😔
anyway cant wait for more
do continue soon
xx

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Swathy

@SwathyS

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#713

i dont like the idea of preet heer being together its always premeer
but to kill preet it also a big nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#714

awesome update jaz . loved each and every scenes very much
cont.soon

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441240

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#715

whoa whoa whoa!!!!

Preet is dead!!!! Defo didn't see that coming....

well atleast it means premeer can be together now....

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#716

finally u updated!

itz soo good 2 see that aarav gifted every1 on fATHER'S DAY!

prem was adjusting himself with the mann's and preet but again he lost his temper and lost everything!

itz unbelievable that preet iz dead....although i don't like him with heer but still i m sad=(.......i hope that heer doesn't blame prem 4 this!

continue soon!

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Mehak

@--Mehak--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#717

Hey Jazz!!🤗Oh I am really happy that you updated and it was a sudden update no? I mean I wasn't expecting!!😆Oh glad the blackmailing of Hiba worked!!😆Oh I didnt know she is such a blackmailer!!😉😆..The update was as usual beautifully written!!⭐️⭐️I absolutely adore your writing style, your creative ideas and then the story!!the update was a bit shocking though with so much happening and I seriously held my breathe throughtout the update!!😆..Hah I was so happy that Heer is actually accepting Prem and looking at him differently!!😳and the father's day pic was the best part!!very beautifully written and yes. hilarious!!😆😆Loved how women won over men and it was them ultimately doing all the work!!😆Meher and her dad were hilarious!!😆 And yes Auruv is such a sweetheart!!🤗🤗 I loved what he gifted Prem, his grand father and then his Uncle P!!😳😳He is the most adorable kid Ive come across in any FF!!😳😳..Now alrite the last part was a bit difficult for me to sigest!!What in earth has happened to Prem?😡I know his anger was justified but then punching him off wasn't the solution to cool himself off!!Hmmph..And Preet couldnt be dead?😡As much as I want Prem and Heer to be together as soon as possible, Preet's deathe isnt what I want!!I know ultimately it would mean more hatred developing in Heer towards Prem!!Eagerly waiting for the next part!!Update soon and Yes, please do update the other two ff's on the weekend!!😳😳

Love, Mehak🤗

Edited by --Mehak-- - 15 years ago

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#718

OMG you updated!!

I had almost given up!! lolzz....

nd what an update!! Loved Fathers Day scene! but the end...OMG....what happened to Preet!!

Update soon plz...

-Luv Pari

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sweetness4eva

@sweetness4eva

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#719

Jaz!!!!

Ahhhhhhhhh. Preet. 😭

Great update, but damn, Preet.

I'll anxiously wait for the next update, because i have no clue what i want to happen in the story.On one hand I want Prem and Heer back together, on the other hand I think its unfair to Preet. So I guess I ll go with whatever you choose. But maybe Meher and Preet Fall in love? And Harman comes in as Preet's elder brother, and then Ash falls for him? Lol. I have officially lost it. Anyways, love the twist, just a little worried how heer's going to go on without Preet, since he's always been there for her.

Anyways, gotta run:) Loved the update!

Thank you for writing such a good story!!

Mahrukh