FF: KDMHMD Pt 3 -- pg 6

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Harman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Durga A.

Ashriwad dene ke liye aap bohot shukriya. Koshish karongi ki iss ff ko bohot acha bana ne ke liye. 😃

Durga

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asmaanixx

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

A girl comes running in through the doors of the canteen. She stops in front of a table to catch her breath.

M: Arre, Saniya. Kya hua? Tum itni takhi hui kyun ho?

Saniya. Yeh hai Saniya Chaudhry. Ek ache gharane se ek mamooli si ladki. Shant se kam leti hai aur kissi se ghussa nayi karti. Log iska kafi fayda utha the hai, par iske dost hamesha iska saath dethe hai. Zaroorat aane par, yeh bhi apni awaz utha leti hai.

Aur yeh hai Meher. Meher Maan. Balraaj Maan aur Teji Maan ki beti. Paari liki, sushil ladki hai. Sharmili hai, par hai bohot pyari. Chup chap si rehti hai, magar sachayi ka saath dene se daar thi ni. Apni Di ki bohot izaat karti hai. Uske liye yeh kuch bhi kar sakti hai.

S: Woh… woh ek zaroori baat kehni hai.

M: Ha, kaho.

S: Woh… woh…

Everyone in the canteen becomes silent.

M: Kaho. Kya baat hai?

S: Heer bafaas aa ri hai.

For a couple of seconds the whole canteen stays silent.

M: Di?!

S: Ha.

The whole canteen starts screaming and shouting in happiness. They all started talking about the last time they saw Heer.

M: Are you sure ki Di bafaas aa ri hai?

S: Ha. Tum kush ni ho kya?
M: Kaisi baate kari ho? Of course mein kush hoon.

S: Tho phir yeh kushi tumare chere par kyun ni aa ri?

M: Maloom ni. Par mujhe lagra hai ki Di ke saath, koi aur bhi aa ra hai.

An airplane lands on the runway. Inside the airport, there are 2 families waiting for the arrival of someone. On the left side are the Maan's.

B: Kaha re gayi? Usse abhi tak aa jaana chahiye tha.

T: Aap fikar maat ki jiye. Woh baas aati hi hogi.

Balraaj Maan. Ek aam pita aur pati ki zindagi jite hai. Apni dono betiyaan par fakar hai. Apni parivaar ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta. Ek bohot hi acha dost aur bhai hai. Yeh apni betiyon se baap kam, aur dost zayda hai. Yeh apne vadon ko hamesha pura kar ke hi rehte hai.

Teji Maan. Inki life aam Hindustan biwion ki tara hai. Ghar ki safayi. Bachon ka dekh bhal karna. Pati ki seva karna. Aise hi Teji ki zindagi hai. Dono betiyon ki ache se ghar mein shaadi karwa dena hi iska sapna hai.

On the right side are the Juneja's.

L: Yeh ladka bhi na. Pita ni kaha rahe gaya.

G: Woh aata hoga. Aap kyun

pareshan hore hai?

Lalit Juneja. Canada ke sab se baade business tycoon. Bas kuch dino pehle apni biwi aur chote bete Preet ke saath India aiye the. Yoon the yeh Canada se aiye hai, par inka dil aur dimag abhi Hindustan ka hai. Yeh asani se kissi aur ki bataon mein aaja the hai. Yeh chate hai ki unka baada beta, Prem, uska karobar agaye baraye. Apne beto par bohot vishwaas hai.

Gayatri Juneja. Yeh apne beto se bohot pyar karti hai. Ek aam ma ki tara, yeh bhi apne beto ki ek achi si ladki ke saat shaadi karwana chati hai. Yeh ek ma kam, aur dost zayda hai. Apne parivaar aur pati par pura bhorosa karti hai.

15 minutes later…

B: Kaha re gayi yeh ladki?

L: Kaha re gaya yeh ladka?

T: Aati hogi. Aap jante ho na usse.

G: Hero banne ka bohot shok hai usse.

B: Par humhe kitni bechani ho ri hai. Pata hai usse?

"How dare you?! Tumari himat kaise hui mere saman ko haath lagane ki. Sare aam chori karni ki sharm ni aati tumhe?"

The Maan's and Juneja's turn around to see what the commotion was about. A girl is walking towards the exit of the airport. She stands outside with her luggage, waiting for someone to receive her.

H: Yeh mummy, papa bhi na. Pata ni kaha re jate hai.

A young, handsome guy is walking out the airport and stands beside the girl.

P: Lagta hai, ab taxi se jaana pare ga.

P,H: Taxi!!

They got inside separate taxis and headed for home. Once reaching home, they called their parents and informed them they've come home. The Maan's and Juneja's reach home and look around for their child.

B: Sukhwinder. Yeh Heer kaha hai.

S: Woh mandir mein Krishna aur Radhaji ki nayi moorti aane wali hai na.

B: Ha.

S: Woh wahi gayi hai.

B: Teek hai.

L: Mandir mein gaya hai?

R: Ji.

L: Thodi dher tho rook jate. Humse bina mile hi chale gaya. Aane do usse. Dekhna kya karta hoon.

In the mandir, there was a big, huge crowd gathered around a person signing autographs.

V: Bas. Ab aur nayi. Bhala aap hi bataye. Aap moortion ke liye aiye hai ya autographs lene ke liye.

Girl #1: Moortion ke liye obviously. Who moortian abhi tak aiyi ni issi liye hum autographs le re hai. Please ek aur de di jiye na.

Priest: Vivek ji.

V: Ji.

P: Aap yaha aiye, yehi humare liye kushi ki baat hai. Par aap hum sab ko bata sakte hai, ki aap ke liye Krishna aur Radhaji ki aap ke liye ka amiat hai?

V: Radha Krishan. Humare bharat mein har premi ko Shri Krishan aur premika ko Radhaji ki roop mein dekha jata hai.

(Link to song: http://www.dhingana.com/play/woh-kisna-hai/MTMyNQ%253D%253D)

A car stops in front of the mandir. A guy wearing a white kurta comes out of the car. He starts heading towards the mandir. A girl is shown getting ready to go to the mandir. She puts on her locket, small earrings, bangles and payals. She starts heading towards the mandir. The guy takes of his shoes and goes up the stairs.

A group of people start bringing in the statues. They place them where the priest tells them to.

Woh hai Rangeela
Chail chabeela
Woh hai natkhat
woh jamunatat
phere lagaye murli bajaye
Gopiyon ke sang raas rachaaye
Murli bajaiyaa raas rachaiyaa
shyam salona haiThe priest starts doing their prayers. The girl stops where she is and listens to the priest singing. She smiles. Everyone joins the priest in singing. She picks up a basket of rose pedals and starts running towards the mandir. jo hai albela madnainowala
jiski deewani brij ki har bala
woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai
woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai
kisna haijo hai albela madnainowala
jiski deewani brij ki har bala
woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai
woh kisna hai,woh kisna haiShe runs to a flower vendor outside the mandir gives in the basket of roses and heads up the stairs. The girl is shown.

She goes towards Krishanji. She folds her hands and goes around his statue 7 times. A group of girls come and take her outside. pyar mein doobi,pyar mein khoyi
pyar ki dhun mein jaagi na soyi
pyar mein doobi,pyar mein khoyi
pyar ki dhun mein jaagi na soyi

duniya se hai woh anjaani
sab kehte hai prem deewani
kisna se milti hai bhool ke har bandhan
kisna ki hi mala japti hai woh joganNainon mein sanson mein mann mein kisna
har pal hai jeevan mein jiske kisna
woh radha hai
woh radha hai, woh radha hai
Radha haiIt starts raining outside. They show the guy's face.

Prem comes outside and looks at the girl dancing. She's covering her face with a dupatta so he can't see her. She takes it off her face. He's mesmerized seeing her.Madhur madhur sa roop hai jiska
shwet shwet rang jiska
sundar tan man sundar chitwan
sundar hai ang jiska

pyar hai sagar se bhi gehra
kisna ke sang jiska
woh radha hai
woh radha hai, woh radha hai
Radha haiHe joins in the crowd. The girl is far away, but he can still see her dancing. He looks down and smiles. jo hai albela madnainowala
jiski deewani brij ki har bala
woh kisna hai,woh kisna hai
woh kisna hai,woh kisna haHeer's dupatta flies off her. She starts running after it. The dupatta lands on Prem's face. She runs up to him. Nainon mein sanson mein mann mein kisna
har pal hai jeevan mein jiske kisna
woh radha hai
woh radha hai, woh radha hai
Radha haiwoh kisna hai

He takes it off his face. Prem and Heer both see each other. He takes the dupatta and puts it around her head and leaves. Heer looks at him leave.

The End.

Durga

Edited by Durga A. - 17 years ago