FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 5

acha lag din ki churuwaa achi hui mere

u going gr8 see i always first to reply i am so fida for ur ff 😆
do update soon dear 👏 for u


i will be waiting

love
Tanya

That's sooooooooo sweet and thanx. 😊 😊

great update...it was the best!! awww heer so concern about prem..should be 😳
it was amazing..continue soon..will be waiting 👏

Thanx pmrocks. 😊

Abb Prem ka khayaal Heer nahiin toh aur kaun rakhegi..........But still she needs time to know him............his likes............his dislikes........and all other small things. 😉 Kyun both of u sahi kaha naa?😊

Afterall abb donon ko saath jo rehna hai. 😳

I'll post the next update asap.Thanx once again. 😊

awesome too good very nice part waitingggggg for next asap.

awesome update.nice intro of the new character,but atleast heer has got a job.do update soon

wowwwwwwww i read all the parts just now and i wana read more.its awsome....ur too gud in ffs
luv iqra

Thanx fijiana. 😊 😊 Shanno chachi is someone to whom Prem and Heer both can confide to in this trying period of their lives. I'm glad u liked her intro. 😊 😊

And blushpink13 I'm soooooooooooo glad that u liked the whole FF and yes thanx for the complement dear. I only hope I continue to live upto ur expectations. 😊 😊

I'll be posting the next part in a short while. 😊 😊

And Tanya its a good morning to u dear. 😊 😃

Alright here's the next long part-- 8.I hope u enjoy this one as well. 😊

Heer tries Prem's cell once again………………….. 😕


There Prem is having a talk with the local bank of the small city close to Mumbai where PH and Meher had come to stay in. he is saying-- Aap bharosa rakhiye………………… 😕 😕


This time he hears his phone ring and he gives a quick look to the number to see who it was, but not recognizing the number he looks up at those people he was having a meeting and cuts the phone……………………instead he had received the call unknowingly………………. 😲

It was Heer! 😒 She says—Hello…………….Prem………….Hello?................. 😕 😕

No one answers…………………Heer's heart is totally sunk………………. but then she hears someone say-- Hum aapki baat maante hain………….lekin Prem babu iss chote se sheher mein………………..itna bada project shuru karne ke liye……………….company kholne ke liye……………jab tak aap koi cheez girve mahiin rakhte hum………………chah kar bhi aapko loan de kar, aapki madad nahiin kar sakte……………….. 😕
😕 😕


Heer is shocked to hear all this. 😲

She then hears a disappointed Prem saying-- Theek hai………………kuch intezaam hota hai toh main aapse phir milta hoon………….thanx ………………. 😭 😕

Heer is very sad…………… 😔 she could easily that Prem was sad too………………and she keeps the phone down………………….. 😕

The song begins to play in the background-- Baaghbaan…………………

O Dharti Tarse
Ambar Barse
Rut Aaye Rut Jaaye Haay
Har Mausam Ki Khushboo Chunke
Baghban Baagh Sajaaye

Paying the bill she leaves the PCO. It is raining already very hard by then……………………as Heer walks back to the house and she is getting wet in the rain…………………..she thinks-- Pata nahiin Prem ko hii saari mushkilon kaa saamna kyun karma padta hai?.................Abb tum kya karogey?…………………….. 😕

There Prem who is all disappointed and is walking out from the bank and is too getting drenched to his skin in the rain is thinking-- Pata nahiin…………….Kuch samajh nahiin aa raha………………(And he puts his hand to his forehead apne baal peeche karne ke liye, like he does it…………………Kitna handsome lagta hai naa?................ 😳 ) Lagta hai………….aur koi chaara nahiin bacha……………….Abb koi naukri hii dhoondni padegi……………

The song continues to play in the background— 😭

Baaghon Ke
Har Phool Ko Apnaa Samjhe Baghban
Baaghon Ke Har Phool Ko Apnaa Samjhe Baghban
Har Ghadi Kare
Rakhvaali,
Patti Patti, Daali Daali Sinche Baghban
Baaghon Ke Har Phool Ko Apnaa Samjhe Baghban
Baaghon Ke Har Phool Ko Apnaa Samjhe Baghban
Har Ghadi Kare Rakhvaali, Patti Patti, Daali
Daali Sinche Baghban
Baghban Rab Hai Baghban Baghban Rab Hai Baghban Baghban Rab Hai
Baghban Baghban Rab Hai Baghban

Where Prem is walking along the road……………….he comes in front of a car and barely makes it having a narrow escape………………….But being terribly upset and disheartened he does not notice who it was…………………..It was his dad in the car………………… 😕


He looks at Prem sadly………….. 😭 a look of worry on his face at first 😊 but then……………..his ego comes his way………………… 😡 But the next instant the concern of a father for his son overcomes and he……………………… 😕


Then Heer is shown thinking-- Naukri mil bhi jaaye………………toh……………….zindagi mein pehli baar Prem kisi ke under kaam kaise karega? ................Yeh sab meri wajah se ho raha hai…………….nahiin……………Meher ne theek kaha Prem yeh sab mere liye kar raha hai……………….mere aur Meher ke liye…………….Abb main usski madad kaise karoon…………………..(Heer cries out of her helplessness) 😭


Prem is shown thinking-- Kisise madad kii umeed bhi toh nahiin hai…………….apnaa sab kuch toh peeche chod aaya hun…………………zindagi mein Heer ke saath aage badhne ke liye………………Abb Heer aur Rano donon meri hii toh zimedaari hain…………………..jisse mainne nibhaana hai………………….Kuch toh karna hii hoga………………………


There Prem's dad gets out of the car and walks towards Prem…………………………. 😕


Kaisa laga?
😊
Jaldi batao. 😊

very good..it was awesome! keep it up n continue 😊