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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
obviusly achaa laga how is ur hand now
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Much better yaar. 😊 tabhi toh I was not on the forum for the last so many days. Bas kal next update ki wait karna. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'm back. 😊All fine and cured thanx to all of u. 😊

Alright here's the next part--6. I hope u all like this one too. 😊 😊

There in the Juneja mansion Kulraaj hs already had a heated argument with Lalit who is admant on his decision. 😕

Kulraj says-- Lekin aap Prem ke saath aisa kaise kar sakte hai baujii? Usse hak hai apna jeevan saathi chunne ka poora hak hai……………..aur…………. 👏

Lalit shouts-- Bas Kulraj! Mainne usse pooch kar usska rishta tai kiya tha………….aur abb mera usse koi rishtaa nahiin hai! Suna tumne!! Abb tum yahaan se jaa sakti ho. 😡

Kulraj goes from there sad. How much she ad wished to see her bro as a groom……………and today everything seemed to have finished all together. 😭 😭


There Preet who had listened everything says to Kulraj-- Dekha dii aapne, dad kitne ziddi hue, hue hain. Unhonien ek baar bhi bhai ki baat nahiin suni…………………Lekin main dekhta hun ki kab tak dad Prem bhai ko hum sab se durr rakhte hain……………….Darr hai toh sirf iss baat ka ki jab tak unhein sachaai ka pata chalega tab kahiin derr naa ho jaaye……………………..


In another room a worried DJ with Vishakha is talking to Preashant on the phone-- Pata nahiin iss Heer ka kya jadoo hai…………….jo apne baap kii har baat manne wala, aadarshwaadi beta…………Prem ek dum se baagi ho gaya! 😆


Prashant says-- Yeh sab main nahiin jaanta, lekin Heer ki shaadi toh Manmeet se karaani hii hogi…………………..kyunki jab tak aisa nahiin hota…………………tab tak naa toh property humaari ho sakti hai aur naa mainVishaakha ke saath reh sakta hun. 😕


DJ agrees and says-- Kuch naa kuch toh karma hii padega………………lagta hai abb mujhe apni ungli tedhi hii karni padegi iss gaon kii Heer se Shehri Prem kaa peecha chudaane ke liye……………….aur usse tere paagal bhai ke palle baandhne ke liye………………..Lekin pehle pata toh chale ki yeh donon premi aur premika……………….uss motti ke saath gaye kahan hai? 😆 😆


Prem is ready to go, wearing a blue cost pant and is standing in front of the mirror combing his hair and tying up his tie. He looks preoccupied and goes to get his files from the other room.

😳

He comes out to find Heer standing in front of the mirror fidding with the knot at the back of her kameez (the magenta coloured one)………………Prem walks upto her leaving the file on the table……………….. 😳

In the background begins to play the song Ore piya …………………(yaar I miss this one).............

O re piya hai.......
Udne laga kyun.......
Mann baanwra re.......
Aaya kahaan se.........
Yeh hausla re........

Well the words of the song itself explain the situation.......... 😉 Prem walking close to Heer.............. 😳


Prem looks at Heer in the mirror standing right behind her………………(with that naughty look ant slight smile on his face)…………………He asks-- Main kuch mada karoon? 😳 (Ladka chance maar raha hai......naughty boy........ 😉 😆 )

Heer fumbles-- Nahiin Prem main kar loongee……………. 😊 😊

Seeing Heer unable to manage things Prem volunteers this time………………..He holds the two threads in his hand and begins to tie them……………..but continuing to look at Heer in the mirror who…………….is all blushing……………..yet paani-- paani with sharam…………………… 😳


The song ends and so is Prem over with the knot giving her that look sayin-- See? It was so easy? 😛 😛


And he walks away while Heer goes to the kitchen. 😊 😊

By the time Heer comes in with his breakfast, Prem is already gone……….She finds him every where but in vain………….. 😕

And when Meher comes from outside she asks her-- Meher tuunne Prem ko kahiin dekha?

Meher replies-- Haan……………abhi abhi toh neeche the…………………kaafi jaldi mein lag rahe the…………… 😊

Heer says worriedly-- Dekh naa Meher……..Prem kuch kha bhi nahiin gaye…………..pata nahiin din bhar kuch khaane kaa waqt milega bhi ya nahiin………………..Aur abb pata nahiin Prem kya kaam kerengein?…………………..Yeh sab meri wajah se ho aha hai……………..meri hii wakah se Prem ko ek baar phir zindagi mein……………nayi tarah se………….apne pairon par kahada hona pad raha hai…………………….Main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahiin kar paoongi………… 😭 😭



Meher consoles her saying-- Didi……..Prem ko yeh sab aapki wajah se nahiin karma pad raha………….balki who toh yeh sab aapke liye kar rahe hain…………….ar abb aapka farz banta hai kii aap unkaa saath dein……aur unkii takat banein kamzori nahiin…………..Jo ho gaya usse bhool jao didi………….tabhi aap jii sakogi…………. 👏

With that Meher leaves from there to freshen up, while Heer thinks to herself-- Meher bilkul sahi keh rahi thi…………..Prem yeh sab kuch mere liye hii toh kar raha hai………….mujhe bhi usska saath dena hoga……………….. 👏

Kaisa laga?
😊
Jaldi batao.
😊



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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
very nice dear its amazing u going gr8
always making my friday and weekend good as today was the last day for skol of the week i enjoyed skol and after skol ur lovely ff
so kep up ur good work
i will be waiting
do cont soon
for u 👏

love
Tanya
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
Thanx that is so sweet of u. 😊 😊 I only hope my ff continues to live up to ur expectations! 😊 😊

Weekends r such a relief naa? I completely empathise with u. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
awesome too good very nice waitingggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Thanx. 😊 Pehle yeh toh batao where were u for the last so many days yaar.........kahan thi? 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Waise pata hai isn't Prem started looking like Arjun jaisa, I mean he must have started shooting for the show,kyunkii yesterday when he walked down the road with Heer............the posture...........the look..........his expressions..........the poise........sab kuch..........He is pakka going to rock as Arujun too! 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
hey there good to know that you recovered well.i loved the update.this chachi ufff.anyways do update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
Thanx. And yes DJ chachi is anokhi, u see one of her kinds. 😊

Here's the next short part-- 7.Hope u all like this one too. 😊

There Prem who was in a hurry collides with someone and his files drop to the floor. He says a sorry and bends to pick them up and gets up to find that he had collided with a woman in her late forties saying to him-- Arre dekh kar toh chal beta…………..koi train choot rahi hai kya……………….

She continues to say while Prem looks at her apologisingly—Waise tumhe pehle kabhi yahaan dekha toh nahiin hai……………….naye aaye ho kya…………….kahan rehte ho? (She puts all doubts to him together).

Prem apologises saying-- Maaf kijiye……………? 😊

She says-- Shanno chachi………….iss chote se sheher mein sab mujhe issi naam se jaante hain…………………..

Prem says-- Main darassal jaldi mein tha……………isliye aapko dekha nahiin Shanno chachi………..aur hum kal hii yaha aaye hain………….uss upar waale ghar mein……………..

She asks him-- Tum akele rehte ho kya?

Prem is hesitant now……………he had realized it earlier itself that the word might raise a finger on his and Heer's relation…………..but what could he do? He had told the landlords that he was newly married 😳 😳 to Heer…………….that was the reason they had decided to give them the house on rent…………….Prem realized that now he had to live with this……………beautiful lie…………….. 😳

He says-- Darassal………… 😕

Shanno chachi looks up to where Prem had indicated to find Heer who had just come to the window after talking to Meher…………standing by the window and understanding she says-- Achcha………samajh gayi………nayi nayi shaadi hui hai tum donon kii………….khush raho…………..waise koi fikr mat karma……………….main hun yahan kisi bhi cheez kii zaroorat ho………..mujhse kehna……………tum befikr hoke kaam pe jao……………
😃 😊

Prem smiles at her thankfully and giving one last look to Heer he leaves from there while Shano chachi who was an outspoken and a funloving yet caring woman makes her way to their house. She quickly mingles up with the sisters especially with Meher. She even tells Heer not to worry and that she will send some kids to her for tuitions from today onwards itself. Heer is delighted as she wanted to help Prem till he settled in his new workplace, whatever it be…………………….
😊 😊

Its evening now and Heer has just finished up with her tution sessions with some kids of the moholla. She looks at the wall clock. Its half past five already and she wonders-- Pata nahiin Prem kahan reh gaye?............Subah se kuch khaya bhi hoga yaa nahiin…………..phone karke dekhti hoon…………….. 😳


She goes to Meher who is in the kitchen and says-- Meher main paas waale PCO booth tak ja rahi hoon……………tu darwaza bandh kar le…………….. 😊 😊


Meher aks her-- Lekin kisko phone karne jaa rahe ho? 😕 😕

Heer says instantly and slightly irritated by Meher's obvious question-- Prem ko…………….. 😳 😳


Meher smiles knowingly as Heer leaves from there. Heer calls him up…………….He is not picking up the phone. This worries Heer…………….She tries his number again…………………no one picks up this time to………………

It has begun to rain by now that to heavily………………. 😕

And Prem not picking the phone worries Heer terribly about his safety……………….. 😕

She tries the number once again……………………

Kaisa laga? 😊

Jaldi batao. 😊


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