FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 3

Thanx yaar. 😊 I'm glad u liked it. 😊 Achcha pati aur achcha bhai 😆 😆

Ya I agree with u totally. 😳

Hi everyone. I'm soon going to post the next part. 😊

Here's the part--4. Hope u all like this one too. 😊

There Heer who was fast asleep…………………………was wide awake ……………..for quite sometime now……………. 😕 Just a fw minutes back……………….she had a bad dream, or rather a nightmare …………………of the events of the past few days…………………..She remembered as she slept……………How DJ chachi had dragged her out into the garden in the rain, clutching her hair ………………………And then when she had brought him downstairs to the place where Prem ki shaadi ka mandap was set up……………….How she had shouted at her…………………..and then………………How she had pushed her to throw her out of the house, when Prem had caught her…………… 😳 (Kya catch thi naa and the passionate hug...........I can never forget it 😊 😊 )


By then she had woken up with a start calling out—- Prem……………….. 😳 She was sweating……………..And she realized it was just a bad dream………………………..


She had then laid down back on the cot but unable to sleep anymore, when she had heard Prem tell Meher that she should go inside and sleep as it was getting quite late. 😕 😕


Then she had heard Meher stop Prem. Meher says to Prem-- Prem? 😊

He turns around and smiles asking-- Kya hua?? 😊


Meher says-- Thanx once again, jo kuch aapne didi ke liye kiya, uske liye……………………😊 😊


Prem walks upto her and says in a matter of fact manner-- Main bahot hi khudgarz insaan hun Meher…………………..jo kuch mainne kiya………….apne liye kiya hai…………..meri khushi………….meri zindagi……………..sab Heer se hi judi hain………………… 😳 Janti ho Meher, Pyaar karne ka matlab…………….apni mohobat ko pana nahiin hota…………………usse haasil karma nhaiiin hota…………………..Balki usski khushi mein……………..apni zindagi ka maksad dhoondna hota hai…………………usski hassi mein apni khushi……………….aur usske asoon mein apna dard dhoondna hota hai………………….Aur main yehi toh kar raha hoon…………………….. 👏 (Well said Mr. Prem)Good night……………………….. 😊



With that Prem again smiles and leaves from there……………………to sleep outside in the balcony…………..leaving behind an elated Meher…………..who was more than glad at her sister's khushkimati to have someone like Prem to love her…………….to care for her 😃 😃 …………And an astounded Heer, who almost every day saw a new Prem…………………… 😊 😊

The first time a quiet and concerned Prem 😳 😭 ………………then the Prem who confessed his mad and passionate love to her…………………… 😳 then an angry one who had warned her to not to marry Manmeet as he was not the right man…………………………. then leaving no stone unturned a determined Prem finding Manmeet's reality……………………. 👏

Then Prem the rebel………………who took upto the whole world, to save his love………………. 👏 leaving behind every one for the sake of Heer……………….and today……………..when she was with him…………….he consoled himself by finding happiness in her khushi……………..no matter if it meant that she becomes someone else's………………………Will I ever be able to know Prem enough…………..Heer thought………………… 😳


She thinks to herself—Koi itna achcha kaise ho sakta hai…………………Pata nahiin…………main itna pyaar ke kaabil hun bhi ya nahiin?........................ 😳

But she is too tired to think anything………………anymore………and she soon falls asleep…………… 😊 😊



Its morning. Heer is already up and has taken bath, her hair r still wet and she is in the process of waking up Meher………………the late—-lateef………….like she always had to do. 😊 😊


She continues to shout as she makes way to the kitchen to make prepare the morning tea-- Meher jaldi kar………..itni der ho gayi hai………………abb uth bhi jaa………………. 😆


Meher is too annoyed and snaps back sleepily-- Kya Heer didi……………….subah saat baje bhi aapko der lag rahi hai?.....................Jao main nahiin uth rahi…………….. 😆
(And she moves more into her chadar going back to sleep).


But Heer is determined too and says warning her-- Dekh Meher, agggar tu abhi ke abhi nahiin uthi naa………………toh……………toh thada paani dalkar uthaongi……………………(and she says as she pours the tea into three cups) Wahan bechaara Prem baahar zameen par soya hai 😳 ………………aur tu hai kii iss bistar par se uthne kaa naam hi nahiin le rahi……………………Main Prem ko chai dekkar aa rahi hun…………..aur tab tak tu nahiin uthi naa…………to phir dekhna………………… 😆


Heer suddenly falls silent……………. 😕 as she realizes what she had just said………………knowingly or unknowingly……………she was too acceptin Prem as a part of his life……………. 😳 the man who dreamt of making her his life-- partner, finally seemed to have make his way through her love's life at last………………………. 😳
😳 😳


Heer walks away with the the tray in her hand, silently……………while Meher…………..who is wide awake by now………………….is smiling to herself sheepishly…………………delighted at the fact ki dheere-- dheere hii sahi……………………her sis was changing to her usual self…………………. 😊

very well written good but no premeer fear!
goodddddddddd i will be waiting for nect update soon 👏 👏 👏

uho dont cry dear most of the ppl r not online now i gues they will starting replying in the late hrs
but ur ff is supreb just go ahead without shedding ur tears 😛

Thanx for the encouragement, 😊 😊 but the views r ever increasing, but no replies, isliye I thought that may be my FF is soooooooooooo bad! 🤢 🤢

But thanx for the complement yaar. 😊 😊

Hello guys bad news...........I've hurt my right hand😭 so maybe I'll not be able to post an update his weekend, Sorry...........Kya karun it hurts. 🤢

hey there.thanx for the update.ab toh dekna hi padega what happpens on the balcony btw heer and prem woh beege baal uuf romantic moments i hope.
oh by the way hope your hand heals soon and yeah will be waiting for the next update,

Thanx yaar, I'm so glad u replied. 😊

Here's a short update for this weekend..........next weekend pakka I'll post longer next part so my hand is OK! 😊

So all of u enjoy this one. Part--5

Heer goes outside. There she finds that Prem was fast asleep. 😳 😳 She continues to look at him for an instant………………. 😳 😳 cool breeze blows across her face (In the background plays the para----------- 😳

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye shayad yahi to pyaar hai
betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal
paye shayad yahi to pyaar hai kutch bhi kaha na
kutch bhi suna na phir bhi bechain dil hai
humara behke kadam hai mushkil main hum hai
dekho sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina
bhi nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai 😳

As Heer bends down and she continues to look at him………………totally mesmerized…………………….by the calm………………..the serenity on his face………….seeing him sleeping peacefully………………….. 😊

She doesn't know how to wake him up and realizes……………….that may be he woke up late in the morning and so changing her mind to wakehim up she gets up………………. 😊 😕

But as she turns around her bangles make a noise and some water droplets from her hair fall on Prem's face………………….. 😳 which make him stir at first but then he wakes up the next instant………………(Sote rahoge toh u will miss someone dear 😉 ………………and Prem knew it………..How? 😕 ...............Arre yaar by his dil ki awaaz which was shouting, 😆 😆 jamoore Heer was very close to u just a moment ago, so get up before she goes! 😆 😆 )


He opens his eyes 😊 to find Heer looking down at him with an apologizing look on her face and with a cup of tea in her hand……………Prem smiles a little to 😊 😊 himself…………….thinking he is dreaming …………………..seeing his love's face first thing in the morning……………….. 😳 😳 he looks down scratching his head…………….in embarassement……………………

But when he looks up smiling……………….seeing Heer still standing there……………….his smile vanishes………………realizing it was not a dream! 😆😆


He quickly gets up (with little difficulty as his back was stiff from sleeping on the floor) and asks-- Heer kya hua? …………………………..
Heer stammers nervously-- Who main yeh chai layee thi………………par dekha……….. ki tum soye the………….I'm sorry mainne tumhe jagah diya…………. 😕

Prem smiles and says sweetly and in his usual gentle manner-- Sorry kis baat ka?.............infact achcha hua tumne mujhe utha diya…………………….(And he takes the cup from her hand……………..and as his hands touch Heer's……………….they both seem to go under some spell and continue to look at each other………………………..and Prem says smiling , having that naughty snile on his face as he continues to hold her hand and the cup)………….aur……………… Chai ke liye thanx……………………… 👏

The two continue to look at each other as the para plays in the background as the focus is fixed on both the lovebirds……………………… 😳

nazrein bichade
pehre laga de dil pe
par dil kisiki na mane 😳

Kaaton pe chalke sholon
mein jalke roke
milke rahenge deewane o o
o chahat ki lau to
aandhi mein bhi zilmilaye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai 😳

Kaisa laga? 😊

Jaldi batao. 😊

Thanx 😊 😊 and I'll post next update next weekend as my hand is hurt 🤢 yaar so sorry,and please continue to send in ur sweet comments too. 😊 😊