FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 20

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey no need to say thanks....u know na no thanks and no sorry in friends....
actually, regular classes will be start from tommorow...so i might be not able to reply from tom....
but i'll try to make reply 4 sure......
the update was really nice......will wait 4 prem to wake up...and see heer sleeping at his bedside.....
wow..abhi se hi i imagine all that........
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey lovely update....Prem back in the ward .....Heer making promises to Prem...lovely ...but I'm left wondering what has she planned to do to support him financially............
looking forward for the next part
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx fijiana......I'm glad u liked the update dear............and yes he will get better soon....itnaa toh bata hii saktii hoon.............no more health problems for him for time being....lekin Heer kya karegi yeh toh u have to wait to find out......yaar yeh to nahiin bata sakti naa...............
Thanx zenia (abb yeh toh main har baar kehti hoon and see I have to afterall u guys send in ur valuable comments....aur woh bhi itne pyaare waale comments)..........See yaar its so tough to get my eyes off that Shahid's pic............Still..........all the best dear for ur classes and waise bhi I'll send the enxt update wekend pe naa...........tabb toh I guess u'll be free..........So no probs.............I see.............pehley hii soch liya kya oney waala hai...........Yaaar I just hope u like the next part and I'm able to make all of u guys smile at least......blush nahiin toh smile hii sahi.........
Thanx angel82........Pata hai when I was writing this scene tabhi mujhe Heer kii determinetion bahot powerful chahiye thi.........And I'm glad u guys have noticed my efforts of making the same thing happen.........Anyways Heer abb kya karegi?..........Yeh toh tum log guess karo..........waise abhi iss issue ko uthaane mein thoda time hai..........So just wait patiently dear..................
Thanx once again to all of u and enjoy the weekdays...........till then enjoy and take care................😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Alright a very good morning to all of u guys.

Its that time of the weekend whenits my turn to pass ur time till Monday so here I am...................with the next part----2.

I hope u all like this one too so enjoy!

Its well past midnight…………….and Prem stirs………feeling uneasy…and he opens his eyes……….slowly and sees in all directions around the room………….as he lay on his back…………soon he realizes where he was………………

He then recalls that when one of those goons………….had hit him on his head…………this was the last thing he remembered……………Where was Heer? (the first question that hit his mind)………..Was she alright?............Who brought him to the hospital?.............How long had he been here?........😕

There were just too many unanswered queries in his mind…………………thst his head started feeling heavy all of a sudden…………..and he decided to change his side………….only to find Heer lying fast asleep……………In the background starts playing the song Baakhuda from the movie Kismat Konnection

Bakhuda tumhi ho,

Har jagah tumhi ho,

Haan main dekhoon,

Jahan jab………………..uss jagah……………….

Tumhi ho…………….

Yeh jahan,

Tumhi ho,

Vo jahan,

Tumhi ho

Iss zammen se falak ke darmiyaan……………..

Tumhi ho,

Tumhi ho, beshubha, tumhi ho

Tumhi ho mujhmein haan,tumhi ho!😉😳

A sudden and unknown calm seems to have set over Prem…………the moment he found Heer by his side………………..Prem smiles looking at her lovingly…………..All his pain seemed to have subsided……….and so did his worries………..Prem turns to that side itself…….and taking Heer's hand into his…………..He continues to look at her…………………as in the background plays the para of the same song…………….😳

Kaise baataaye tumhe…………..

Aur kis tarah yeh……

Kitnaa tumhe hum chahte hai?............

Saaya bhi tera……………Dikhe toh paas jaake…………..

Ussmein simatt hum jaate hai…………….

And soon Prem's eyes feel heavy…………and he too goes to sleep………….😳

Its morning……..Heer wakes up…………..to find her hand in Prem's………….and she continues to look at the serenity on his face as he slept soundly…………….she smiles………….and just stares at him for several minutes……………….and then making sure thatPrm isn't disturbed or woken up……….she gets up from there careful not to make any kind of a noise…………….😳

Heer goes out into the corridor………………only to find Preet and Meher there coming towards her.

Preet greets her with a big smile saying-- Good morning bhabhi…………Kaia chal raha hai sab kuch……………..Raat ko koi takleef toh nahiin hui Bhaiya ko?.............😳

Heer says a no as Meher came forward and hugged Heer telling her how much she missed her……………on which Preet says wittily-- Kya Meher………tum ek din bhi apni didi se door nahiin reh sakti……………..toh shaadi karke………….apne sasuraal mein apni Heer didi ke binaa kaise rahogi yaar?............😉

Meher replies-- Yeh mera problem hai naa?..........Main solve kar loongi………..Tum toh rehene hii do……………..

Before the two start arguing further Heer stops them……….and Preet asks Heer to go back home and take some rest………to which Heer doesn't agree at first but seeing it was no use as Preet was so admant………..Heer gives in…………..agreeing to go back but only on one condidtion…………That Preet would pick her up in two hours…………….to which Preet agrees like an aagyaakaari Devar…………….😊😊

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldi batao.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice..Meher-Preet hospital mein bhi shuru hogaye??hmm..and Heer so restless just to leave Prem for couple of hrs..good yaar..
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Posted: 17 years ago
That was fantastic once again!
Looking forward to the update!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx ranrags I'm so happy u enjoyed Preet and Meher's nok jhok...........And yes abb Heer........ought to be a little possesive about Prem and caring too.............bas yahi dikhaaney kii koshish thi..........
Thanx a lot Sunayna I 'm glad u liked this part as well............I'll be soon updating the next part dear......So please watch out for it.
Thanx sweta.......I'm so glad yaar u used itne saarey adjectives ek saath! Thanx dear and I'll be postibg the next part soon.
And Zenia dear u guessed it right abbbatao whether u liked my depiction of this situation or not?

Fijiana

Tanyaa

Angel82

Sillu

Amanranjan

Pooji

Pmrocks

Blushpink

sweetprincezz

Davzz

Where r u all guys yaar? Kya hua..........didn't u like this part or U didn't read it?

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey, i wont be here for a week so iin all your next updates i won't have read them!
When in come back i will comment!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Alright guys here's the next part-- 24.
I hope u all like this one as well............
There Preet and Meher after dropping Heer come back to the hospital………..to see Prem….who is already up by now and as the docs finish examining him……..assure Preet that his bro was much better now and he will soon be up and moving……………..

Preet is elated and so is Meher. Preet walks upto Prem (who is sitting now) as the docs leave from there…………….and he raises his hand and the two share a high five aur phir making it into a one fist haat neechey le aatey hain (samajh gaye naa scene ko?)……….

Preet says getting emotional-- Bhai aggar………………..aggar aaj aapko kuch ho jaata……toh………..(Preet has tears in his eyes) Unable to say anything further………..so Premsays wiping off his tears-- Tuu jaanta hai naa Preet……Teri aankhon mein main khushi dekhnaa chahta hoon…………aansoon nahiin……………Paglaa kahiin ka………….(he says embracing Preet's face with that same hand)……………..Tere hote hue mujhe kuch kaise ho sakta hai?..............Aur jaanta hai………….aaj tujhe itne dinon baad dekhke…………bahot achcha lag raha hai……………….Waise maa aur baujii kaise hai?..............

Preet says giving Prem a box his mom had given it to him to give it to Prem-- Yeh lo Bhaiya…..maa ne bheje hain…..aapke fav ladoo………aur kaha hai…………kii app apna khayaal rakhnaa…………aur jaldi se theek ho jao………………aur rahi baat uss chaand kii..toh vo toh abhi bhi…………amavasya ke andhere se ghira…….kahiin kho gaya hai………..

Prem looks at Preet……agrily this timeand holding his ears he says-- Preet?..........Tujhe kitni baar samjhaaya hai….baujii……..

Preet interrupts Prem and seta himself free……getting up suddenly (almost ready to run from there) saying-- Sorry bhiya…Lekin kya karoon vo kaam hii aise karte hai……kii mujhe…………

But before Preet completes his sentence……….bangs into Meher as he was binaa peechey dekhey……where she was standing………this sets Meher ff balance…………and to save her from falling down………..well…………….Preet holds her just in tme!

And now the fire has been set……..Preet and Meher continue to look at each other…………….in the background plays the song-- (one of my all times fav)

Nazron se nazrey milti hai………….

Dil mein…..toofaan uthai hai………….

Jinkii manzil ho ek jagah…………….

Jinkii manzil ho ek jagah………..

Vo rahein mill hii jaati hai……………..(I don't know the movie or the album…….in case any one of u knows……………Please tell yaar

Prem watches them…..amused at first…….seeing how clumsy Preet could be………..but then soon he realizes and notes the way the two of them were lost in each other eyes………………..living in their own world………….at this Prem smiles knowingly……………

He knew his yonger brother well…………he had shared everything he thought………he felt………….he wanted…………he hated……he loved…………with Prem all these years………And today for the first time………Prem had seen Preet look at some girl………….with such true love in his eyes…………….and such bright radiance on his face………..At last Prem thought………may be……..jus maybe (as he was a little unsure)…………he had found his dream girl…………..his life's love…………..his lucky charm…………and his lady luck……….

No matter what……….Prem thought………….he was happy………….and would be really glad if indeed what he thought was right and things would work out for them………..Afterall Prem himself wanted someone for Preet who was just as caring and as loving as Heer………….and her little sis seemed the correct person…………….

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao.

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