FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 11

it was lovely...keep up the good work...

That was a great part!
Preet's left too!
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Can't wait till the next part!
Glad you had a great Birthday!
?xXx?
Sunayna

Hi to u too Payal. U r ew to my ff so first of all welcome dear. Thanx for the complement dear. I only hope I continue to live upto ur expectations. Thanx for the B' day wishes dear.

Thanx a lot tanyaa and ur wait has ended dear.

Thanx pmrocks I'm so glad u appreceated my efforts.

Thanx to u too Sunayna. Abb dekho kya hota hai in the next few updates. I'm sure u will love it dear.

Thanx zenia I'm so glad u liked it.

Alright here's the next part-- 15. I hope u like this one too.

There as Preet drives away from his house he thinks that how he had never imagined spending a single day without seeing his elder brother or at least hearing from him……………..and today as he drove his way in search of his bro………….Preet realized sadly that it had been five days since he had seen or heard him………………….

He thinks determined---- Aaj toh yeh toofaan bhi mujhe Prem bhaiya ko dhoondne se nahiin rok sakta……………….chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye……………main aapko dhoond kar hii rahoonga…………………..

There Prem walks his way staggering in between………………but continuing to find Heer and ensure her safety as his heart and his gutfeel told him……………….she needed him!

And yes she did……………….Heer who was walking fast after taking the medicines is suddenly surrounded by some goons!

They misbehave with her…………………while she continues to plead to them to let her go as those medicines would save someone's life………………..but they don't pay any heed and continue to harass her………………..which now scares her………………….

She has already started crying and now requests them with folded hands to let her go…………………But those goons r real khalnaayaks…………………..and one of them walks towards Heer and pulls off her dupatta………………which flies away……………in the rain and with the wind……………….(in the right hands)……………into someone's hands…………….Who?................Abb yeh toh u guys make a guess yaar!?

Haan u all guessed it right…………..its Prem. The goon continues to walk towards Heer as she moves back……………..

He is very sngry and shouts-- Bas……………..waheen rukk jao!

Heer who had her eyes closed……………….opens them…………….and in the heavy rain she finds it hard to believe…………….that it was him…………but it was………….and Heer was more than relieved……………………..and she runs all the way toh him……………….and well………………she hugs him tight!

She continues to sob-- Prem……………..Shukr hai……………..tum aa gaye……………..nahiin toh…………….nahiin toh……………….

Prem tries to console her……………he says gently moving his fingers tacross her hai (sehlaate hue)-- Kuch nahiin hoga Heer…………Kuch nahiin hoga…………..Main aa gaya hoon naa?............Tum daro matt………..Kuch nahiin hoga…………….

With that Prem glares hard at those goons………………ready to charge at them any moment!

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao.

I loved it!

and Prem saved her, i loved it all!

Continue very soon!

?xXx?
Sunayna