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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: salma_786786

Brilliant update Shafaq...just read the last three updates last night soo this was a good surprise for me... thank you hun... your such a sweetheart... how is Ramadan going for you... hungry yet ... 😆

Thanks so much 😃 Salma. I'm sure it was a pleasant surprise. Ramadan is going well. I haven't had any hunger problems yet 😆. How has it been for you?

Heer won't be able to avoid Prem for much longer, i know he is the understanding type but how much can The Prem take... Heer needs support and only Prem can give that to her... He was sweet to move from the bed to the sofa... YAAAAAYYYYYYY more Premeer scenes coming up... can't wait... hope it includes Prem taking Heer by the shoulders and forces her to speak to him....😉 😉

Yep there's a limit to how much a person can handle. If Heer continues like this she'll end up breaking 🥺 his heart. I like the taking Heer by the shoulders and forcing her to speak to him idea. I'm might 😉 even include it.

Is Balraaj going to die???? what mannat would Heer make if he passes away... im shivering by even thinking about it...

I haven't decided yet ❓ but I'm not leaning towards that side either. Now would there even be a point of making a mannat then?

Preet and Ash scene was hilarious... him running the other way... don't blame him... is it me or does Ash seem TOOO clingy... if Harman and Meher track are coming up then i guess Preet will soon realise that he can not escape Ash and fall head over heel in love with her and than of course ENTER DALJEET!!!!

Ash is rather clingy.....poor Preet....I'm beginning 🤔 to have second thoughts. I don't think he'll be falling in love with Ash anytime soon. But it is likely to happen later. As for Harman Meher they are just too cute 😳.

Great update.... and Good luck in setting into University... im starting my second year and first year just flew by.... Don't worry to much...i really hate change aswel it gets me all upset and in no time you will feel comfortable Inshallah... All the best and achieve high....


I'm not going to Uni yet 😆.....I'll be starting Sixth Form college.....gonna do my A Levels. Then comes university 😛. Thank you though! I know I'll settle down in no time inshallah. Its just change is really annoying 😕 ugh.



Thanks 😊 for your lovely comments!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal

hey shafaq...its soooooooo nice.....plz show sum premeer scenes yaar....i dont want them to be alone....i mean if they ll be alone...like heer wid teji n prem wid her bauji then how ll they be able to talk to each odr...plz unite them soon....and plz end the sad momments sonnnnnnnnnnn...do lemme noe again when u update....


wid love
PARTH
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Thanks 😊 Parth Bhai. Like I said there will be many Premeer scenes in the upcoming parts....promise! Its just that at the moment the plot demands for them to be separate. But I'll unite them soon. Oh and I'll let you know by PM 😃 when I update next k.

Originally posted by: ranrags

Hello Shafaq..thanks for the PM..all the scenes were really good..specially the Heer-Prem scene..even though they didn't speak to eachother they both understood what the other was going through..and Prem is giving her all the space and time that she needs..truly it was nice..pls continue..



Hey.....you're welcome 😊.....I'm really glad 😃 you liked the part over all. Thanks a lot! I'll have to continue soon after such lovely comments 😳 haina?
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: shafaq92



Thanks 😊 Parth Bhai. Like I said there will be many Premeer scenes in the upcoming parts....promise! Its just that at the moment the plot demands for them to be separate. But I'll unite them soon. Oh and I'll let you know by PM 😃 when I update next k.





awwwww shafaq thanks....u r rele a gud writer....i love ur ff...i noe even in my ff i have to show them separate...so i can understand...😳😳😳

wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kimmu

Hello, shafaq! Sorry me is late... I was sleeping... tehehee...

Hello....hello 😃....its okay hun. You aren't that late.

Yea school is starting for most of us, it started for me on monday, and I already have my first project. 😲 Aww your moving? Well my wishes are with you, and I hope you can get settled down quickly. No Premeer scenes! Thats okay, if you can make it up with the upcoming parts then i;m perfectly fine. Just don't g on kdmhmd's road, where we barely get to see Premeer.. Thank god for these FF's, or else i would've forgotten how Premeer looked together... 🤣

Well I'm not technically moving.....I'll be starting sixth form college. Some schools have it.....others don't. Unfortunately mine didn't. You already started...and you got a project 😲 as well? Woah that was fast. Thanks 😊 for your best wishes kimmu! No way will I go on the KDMHMD road with no Premeer scenes. What's the point 😕 then? I would have forgotten as well if it wasn't for fanfics etc.


I would've made you a banner, but I'm kind of in this phase were I can't think of 'how' to make siggies. Aah i really sucks, cuz whenever i open a blank image, my brain is more blank then that image... There's lots of good siggy makes here, someone will def. make you one..

Aww its okay I can understand 😊. No worries.....I'll find someone hopefully.

Yesss! I was spared this time... No blushing.. woot woot!! Oh and talking about shabz, she beat me here too!! Nooooooooooooooooooooooo... Curse my ability of not staying awake. Now I think I should get on with my comment. 🤓

But not for long 😈 dear.

Oh god, even that teeny weeny Premeer scene was enough for me. You have no clue how much I love there eye-interaction. I can't help but repeat myself, i loove Prem! I love love loveee Prem. He is the most understanding guy ever. I feel so bad for him, he's going through so much. But today I felt bad for Heer too, she's going through a lot too. She doesn't want to hurt Prem, but she has too. I feel for the couple, I really hope things get better. Oh and btw, Prem on his laptop at 5:30 AM... kind of reminded me of myself in the summer... 🤣 Oh the good days...

I'm glad 😃 it was enough. I wanted to include more scenes but they just weren't appropriate considering the situation and all. Don't we all love 😳 Prem.....he's such a darling! He was trying to divert his mind with work. I'm sure that's not what you used to do on your laptop in the summer 😆 ?

Hmm.. Gayatri pouncing at the phone like a lion... 🤣 I'm sorry I couldn't help but laugh at that.... *Clears throat* Loved how you showed that Prem could'n't find his voice at first, he's become so dull. i could feel the emotions he was having, that helplessness he was feeling. He wanted to keep his wife happy, but she was sad. This time i couldn't help but wonder what Prem's reaction would be when he would find out that because of him, that picture, Balraaj went into a coma. It would kill him inside.

You made it sound so funny 😆. I hadn't thought of it like that before. Prem and dull? I don't think so.....he's just a bit troubled....burdened you could say. But he's the same old Prem 😳 and you'll see that in the next part 😉. I can't reveal any more. Now it isn't really his fault.....DJ's 😡 to blame and the halaat are to blame. But you're right he'll never forgive himself for this if he is to ever find out that is.

My initial reaction to Kiran taking Kul and the kids in the room. 'What am i doing in this fic??!! 😲'.. 🤣🤣🤣 Then I realized Kiran's a guy... kind of hard to digest since I've been living for 14 years now, as a girl. and this guy, takes up my name... 🤣🤣

🤣.....OMG I totally forgot your name was Kiran. I'm so used to kimmu....kimz so I was like what's kimmu on about. Then it hit me 😆 finally. I just used it 😳 as that was the name provided in the Character Sketch of the actual show. I can imagine you and all shocked though. Btw is it a unisex name?

I loved how Harman took Meher to the garden. When Teji said she wanted to take Meher to Balwants house with her, i was like noooo! Whats going to happen to Harman. Why can't Teji go alone? 😆 But anyways, knowing Harman [not much 😆] he would visit Meher daily, right?😃

That was such a random place 😆 though don't you think. I just couldn't think of anywhere suitable at the time. You really thought Teji would leave Meher behind? Visit her daily 🤔 ? I'm not so sure......I'm making up almost everything seeing as they haven't revealed much about his personality in the actual show.

Preet-Ash part was just hilarious. Preet avoiding Ash, yesssh! Thats what Ash deserved, for being a part of that disgusting plan of DJ's. I really hope she falls in love with Preet, and then Preet puts her down baaad! She really deserves it for practically breaking a marriage. She should know how it feels to be ignored by the one you love. Well if that doesn't happen, then I hope she just spills her guts to Preet.. hehe.. and Preet being laxman fixes everything...

Many found that part funny.....now was Ash part of the plan? This is something for you to think about 😉. Kimmu.....you sure are evil 😆 making Ash suffer when DJ is the real culprit and perhaps the only one. Preet's such a sweetheart 😳....I'm sure he'll realize soon that something's wrong himself.

Oh yeaa! Balwant getting out of DJ's muthi! Fly Balwant, Fly the like a birdd!! Your finally freee!! Really hope DJ doesn't start doing evil things again, and sh finally starts getting defeated.. Me been waiting to see her kicked out and put to jail for a while... 😃

Its party time 🥳 what say? DJ in jail....wouldn't that be a lovely sight!

Oh and theres a new edition to my lambe comments. The prediction section... Its starting over here though. So I'll let Shafaq cut the red ribbon to the newly added addition...This is what I think will happen, I can garuntee I will most likely be off.. 🤣🤣

Wow....I feel so 😳 honored! Thanks kimmu....and may I add your lambe comments have always been a pleasure to read 😃 and I'm sure this new edition will enhance them even more.

I think, Balraaj will be fine in about a few days. And when he wakes up, he'll take Heer home with him and talk about the 'dokha' that happened to them. Heer won't want to believe it, but goes a long with her father cuz of now she loves her father more than Prem. Prem breaks down, and finally puts his brain to work and wonders about the photo Ballu was talking about. He eventually gets to DJ, the awesome detective Prem is, and thinks of a plan to unravel DJ's real identity. And then DJ gets kicked out and Premeer live happily ever after. 😃😃

Oh do you? Interesting prediction 😉 kimz. Now you keep predicting....I won't spoil i for you 😆.

Anyways, continue soon. I really wanna know what you have in mind. 😃

I will.....you wanna know what I have in mind huh? Well....well....well...you'll have to wait and see 😈.



Thank you kimmu 🤗....I enjoyed replying to this very lamba comment hehe.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Loved the update!
I hope Balraj comes out of the coma soon!
?xXx?
Sunayna



I'm pleased 😃 to hear. I hope so too 😳....thanks 😊 Sunayna!

Originally posted by: noor k

awsome & amazing FF keep it up



Thanks a lot 😊 dear!

Originally posted by: DMGanuthika

it was very nice. I am new to this forum and I love ur FF. I read all 14 parts. Eagerly waiting for part15. Hope u will update soon.
Karthika



Thank you! Welcome to this forum 😊 dear. Wow you read all 14 parts in one go 😲 huh? Do keep reading Karthika!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal

awwwww shafaq thanks....u r rele a gud writer....i love ur ff...i noe even in my ff i have to show them separate...so i can understand...😳😳😳

wid love
PARTH😊



You're welcome bhai and thank you 😊....I'm glad 😃 you can understand. Speaking of your FF....I have to catch up....I'm so sorry 😳 I don't have the time to read it at the moment. But I will very soon and then give my comments k.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz



I will 😊...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi Shafaq,thos part was also very good,&now i think u ll make long Balraj's recovery poor Prem,Shaddi Karke Fas Gaya:😆😆jokes a part i really feeling bad for him but Happy for Heer she is lucky to have Prem in her life,i wwish soon she realise it&yes i want to see thier minal fast as i cant tolarate thier separation for long time neither in the show nor in FFs😳Best Of Luck for Next Part👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lian

Hi Shafaq,thos part was also very good,&now i think u ll make long Balraj's recovery poor Prem,Shaddi Karke Fas Gaya:😆😆jokes a part i really feeling bad for him but Happy for Heer she is lucky to have Prem in her life,i wwish soon she realise it&yes i want to see thier minal fast as i cant tolarate thier separation for long time neither in the show nor in FFs😳Best Of Luck for Next Part👍🏼



Hey....thanks 😊 a lot. I can reveal my plans to you 😛 now can I? I can understand your eagerness to see them together 😳....I won't drag things for long!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part
15


Hello to all my lovely readers 😊

Shocked 😲 right? Kya karoon.....I'm getting used to updating on time. Lucky you! And so if you haved guessed it already.....I'm back with yet another part of this FF. There's a lot more of Premeer in this one 😉.

Btw I'm still waiting patiently for someone to kindly make me a banner/sigg. Do PM me if you're interested. Thanks in advance!

Now I'd like to dedicate this part to Parth Bhai - welcome 😃 to the fanfic...and I couldn't spare you this time, kimmu 😈 muhahaha.

Thanks to everyone 🤗 for taking the time out to read this FF along with commenting. It means so much 😳 to me.

Shafaq 😃
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"Parjayi ji aur Meher yahan kya kar rahe hain ji?" she asked rather casually whilst removing her bangles and heavy jewelry as soon as Balwant entered their bedroom that evening.

"Woh yahaan nahi rahenge toh aur kahaan rahenge Daljeet!" he replied sternly in an attempt to force his opinion on her.

"Humein kya......who kahin bhi rahein. But why here?" she declared to some degree which could be considered inconsiderately.

"Tumhe fark nahi parta hoga. But I care! Khabardaar agar tune agey seh kuch kaha is maamle keh baare mein." he stated making it as clear as possible and then left for the bathroom. Daljeet sighed helplessly knowing this wasn't going to be as easy as she had thought. But she'd have her way no matter what.

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A week later, Juneja Mansion

Gayatri knocked on her son and daughter-in-law's bedroom door in order to invite them downstairs to conduct the weekly Pooja. The past week had been pretty tough for almost everyone but they had all tried to keep the atmosphere as light-hearted as possible. It was Heer who opened the door dressed in a light pink Shalwar suit with very little make-up and no jewelry at all except her Mangalsutar.

"Are Heer beta.....tayaar hogayi? Tum aur Prem zara niche ajao. Aaj tum dono neh pooja karni hai na." she reminded.

"Haan Maa. Aap chaliye. Main abhi ayi." Heer agreed.

Now came the hard bit. In the last week Prem and Heer had lived like strangers under one roof. Whilst Prem still made an effort to communicate with her, Heer made no attempts. She kept to herself most of the time. Only Gayatri and Lalit had the power in them to make her talk as when it came to them she couldn't show disrespect.

Prem was still showering, which she had noticed a number of times took almost forever. But being a dutiful daughter-in-law, Heer waited. Prem still not in the routine of sharing a bedroom with someone, exited the bathroom carelessly with just a towel wrapped around him. That too loosely. Heer looked away as long as it was anywhere but at her almost naked husband whom she had to admit had a hot body. Prem however hadn't noticed her presence yet and continued to pick his clothes out of the wardrobe casually. But this didn't last long as the sound of Heer's nervous shuffling on the bed where she sat still as a statue was enough to make him aware of her presence. Prem turned around immediately and found his wife sitting on the bed looking rather uneasy. He didn't know what came over him when he began closing the distance between the two of them. With every step he'd take towards her, Heer's anxiousness would increase. She shut her eyes in desperation to get out of this situation which Prem found slightly amusing. Once Prem actually realized what he was in the process of doing he halted at once.

"Woh Heer zara mera kurta-pajama pakra do gi. Bed par para hai aur main yahaan dhoond raha hoon" he remarked in an attempt to justify his actions and come out of this somewhat uncomfortable situation.

At first it took Heer by surprise as this was probably the most they had talked since their marriage. Eventually Heer gathered all the courage needed to reply.

"Haan woh.....ek minute." she replied faintly before getting up to hand him his clothes. For a moment it felt like there was nothing wrong and their behavior was of a typical newly married couple but that was not the case and soon both acknowledged this fact coming out of their stance and heading their own ways. Prem left to the bathroom in order to change whilst Heer made her way downstairs after reminding her husband of the Pooja which everyone was waiting very patiently for.

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"Chalo shukar hai.....Pooja theek tara seh hogayi. After-all it was Heer's first Pooja in this house" Gayatri stated pleasingly.

Lalit expressed his agreement as well "Haan Gayatri Bhagwaan ka bahut bahut shukar hai. Bas ab Balraaj jaldi theek hojaye phir Heer bhi waapis pehli waali Heer ban jayegi."

"Bilkul. Aapke moon mein ghee shakar. Meri toh din raat yahi dua hai upar waale seh" she added positively.

Both went to bed and actually slept for a change. Things were beginning to take shape gradually and hopefully, God-willing everything would fall into place soon.

But Heer maintained the same mental state and didn't feel anything had improved. Her father had shown no improvement whatsoever since slipping into coma and now she even feared that he'd never recover. Even her and Prem's relationship hadn't developed at all but for this she was too blame and her unwanted behavior. Heer was afraid that soon misunderstandings would distance them even more unless she told Prem the truth. But Heer didn't have the audacity to do so. At least not right then.

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The following day, Balwant and Daljeet's Home

Meher and Teji were preparing to visit Heer. They hadn't seen her for more than a week now and missed her tremendously. If they were just coping then how would Heer be doing all alone? Daljeet was just glad she'd be getting rid of them for some time which hopefully would be enough to brainwash her husband once again.

Soon the two bid their goodbyes reminding everyone of their return in the evening. Ash and Vishaka decided to accompany them as well leaving just Daljeet and Balwant behind to his utter disbelief.

"Haan toh Daljeet main bhi chalta hoon. Mera thora kaam hai sheher se baar. Aaate aate deir hojayegi." he informed making up an excuse to get away on the spot.

"Lekin....tussi kithe jaa rahe ho ji? Main saath chaloon kya!" she asked hoping for her husband to agree.

"Tu! Terea kya kaam udhar. Daljeet tum na ghar raho. Kitne kaam parein hai." he ordered authoritatively for once in his life.

Before Daljeet could protest, Balwant had left.

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The Junejas welcomed the Manns into their home and Heer greeted her mother, sister and cousins with hugs and pecks on their cheeks. Everyone proceeded to the living room to chat whilst Meher escaping their eyes went to look for Harman but found Preet instead.

"Are Meher tum kab ayi?" he asked pleasantly surprised on seeing her.

"Woh hum bas abhi hi aye Heer didi seh milne. Preet.....woh Harman kahaan hain?" she answered giving a faint smile.

At first Preet wondered as to why Meher was asking about Harman but ignoring his unusual yet pointless thoughts he notified her of his whereabouts "Bhai toh apne kamre mein hi honge. Lekin tum batao yeh hum kaun hai?"

"Uff hum matlab Maa, Ash, Vishaka aur main! Now I'm off. Thanks by the way!" she sighed and then left him to himself.

Preet felt the urgent need to get away before Ash got hold of him as if that were to happen then he would be history. She had appeared to him as the clingy sort during their first meeting but Preet had decided to give her the benefit of doubt on Prem's insistence. But he had, had enough of doing just that. The real Preet would have told her to her face what an annoying person she was but if Preet was to do just that then forget Ash, even Lalit and the elders would never leave him alone.

Preet didn't even notice when Ash arrived as he was too busy battling with his conscience.

"Preet! Haaye its been so long haina? Kaise ho?" she asked altogether greeting him at the same time.

Preet thought he was imagining her but the truth was he wasn't. However it was a shame he only realized this after pinching himself and the so called imaginary Ash.

"OW! Preet. Tum bhi na. What's happened to you?" she inquired again. This time making it loud and clear emphasizing on each word.

His parents had taught him manners and he was going to practice them no matter what and so Preet cursed his luck and replied grumpily "Haan woh kuch nahi. I'm fine." Then he made a run for it after excusing himself.

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Meher knocked not once but twice out of respect. When however she heard no response she slowly entered Harman's bedroom only to find him asleep sprawled all over his bed with files spread around him. He looked so angelic whilst asleep almost like an innocent little baby. Meher didn't have the heart to wake him and so once her staring session was over she turned to leave only to be stopped by Harman himself.

"Meher tum?" he called whilst rubbing his eyes to get a clear view.

Meher just nodded in agreement unable to utter anything as of yet.

Harman jumped out of bed, straightened his clothes and then greeted Meher with a friendly hug to her surprise. He had caught her off guard and this created a rather uncomfortable situation for the two which Meher soon restored with her bubbly personality.

They talked for hours enjoying one another's company and not wanting for this meeting to end at the same time. But everything had to come to an end. So did this! Meher advised it was best for them to join everyone in the living room before anyone got noticed they were missing especially her.

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Preet had never been so pleased to see his dad when he entered the lounge with Ash not far behind. Soon even Meher arrived with Harman alongside her which many failed to notice. Vishaka was busy chatting with Veera and Kulraaj Di.

Teji was in a much better state of mind and this was clearly evident to everyone present. It was she who reminded the Junejas of various rasams that remained unfulfilled.

"Waise toh Heer ki bidaai bhi theek seh nahi hui. Lekin ab woh aapki bahu ban chuki hai aur koyi rasme hain jinko hum nazar andaaz nahi kar sakte Lalit Bhai saab. Sab seh pehle to Heer ka Griha Pravesh hona zaroori hai. Phir Mooh Dhikhai aur Pag Phere ki rasam. Reception waghera to baad mein bhi hosakti hai. Veer ji hotay toh woh bhi yahi chaahte." she ended on a sad note reminding everyone of Balraaj's health.

Lalit agreed with everything she had said and if she didn't have problem then who were they to object. Gayatri suggested Prem to take Heer out to dinner whilst they prepared for the Griha Pravesh which was decided would take place that evening itself. Although Prem relented at first seeing Heer's expressions, he was forced into it by Teji and his Mom. He gave Heer a helpless look telling her it wasn't in his hands. But Heer was really frustrated and what added to her frustration was when Teji insisted she dress up like an actual bride by wearing a crimson red sari and heavy jewelry. Gayatri also agreed. They asked Prem for his advice as well. But all he had to say was "Heer looks good in anything!" making her blush for the first time ever forgetting all her anger.

Preet hooted for his big brother "Woh PB....yeh hui na baat! I admire your guts." whilst Veera teased "Bhai aap toh kehte hain ke I look like a ghost without make-up. Aur Heer bhabhi ki baat hui toh she looks good in anything huh?"

It was now Prem's turn to feel embarrassed which soon the grown ups put to a stop. Heer just left silently to get dressed chuckling to herself which only Prem noticed.

Teji soon decided it was time to say their goodbyes leaving the Junejas busy in preparations for the Griha Pravesh.

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