*FF* heer knows everythingpt Imp note...pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: blushpink13

i posted the second part. u can read it now
iqra

Where did u post the part .
waiting for it anxiously

plz update

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Posted: 17 years ago
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second part is on page no 3.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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the second part is on page no 3 of kdmhmd not this topic
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey everyone, its iqra. here's the second part of the ff

in the hospital:

The doctor cums out from the ICU and informs Prem parents that they can meet Prem now. Lalit goes to inform the other family members. Gay3 goes in, and heer stays outside. She sits beside Prem, puts her hand on his forehead and stares at him with tearful eyes. She says'beta yeh too ne kya kiya, agar tujhe kuch ho jata to....' prem cuts herand says'Maa mujhe bhala kiya ho sakta hai, jab tak aap mere saath ho mujhe kuch nahi hoga maa kuch nahi.' Prem's mom stares at him and says' Too ne yeh sab heer ko bachane kay liye kiya hai na' prem crying with painful eyes.'Prem main jantee hoon ke too heer se kitna pyar karta hai.Main tumhari aur heer ki..'Prem cuts and says'Nahi maa aisi koi baat nahi hai main... main heer se shsdi nahi karna chahta.' Gaya3 says'Main teri rag rag se wakif hoon, too apne baoji ki khushi ke liye yeh sab keh raha hain na, nahi prem nahi main teri zindagi kharab nahi hane doon gi. Teri shadi ho gi to sirf aur sirf hee se.'Prem holds Gaya3's hand and looks at her. Gaya3 says 'Too aram kar main abhi aati hoon'as soon as gaya3 leaves the room heer enters the room.Prem is happy+emotional to see heer. Heer cums in and sits beside prem on his bed. Prem asks her'Tum theek to ho na' heer just moves her head a lil bit in possitive. Heer holds prem's hand and says' Aap ne to mujh se aaj pyar kiya hai, lakin main to aap ko barsoon se chahti hoon. Main tum se bohat pyar karti hoon prem. tum meri nas nas mein basay ho. tumhare bina mera koi wajood hee nahi. mein tomhare bina eik pal bhi nahi reh sakti....mein sirf tumhari hoon prem ..sirf tumhari.'prem loks at her with tearful, andemotional eyes. he is showing his happiness from his face. Heer and prem wipes eachother's tears and heer hugs prem. she also tells prem her real identification. from wich prem is really happy to know. from now on heer visits prem to the hospital everyday and takes care of him.

sooo wat says. did u like this part. if u like it then let me know. i might make a third part of it.

thanks, luv iqra

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya sure it was very nice very sweet just do cont soon iiiiii will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I liked it!
Please continue and very very soon!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks tanya, and sunayna for the lovely comments i'll surely cont it.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really nie once again please continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: blushpink13

thanks tanya, and sunayna for the lovely comments i'll surely cont it.

luv iqra

do it soon...😳
just finished reading ur ff...its great! continue soon....👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks janki di...i'll cont soon...i am thinkin abt it..but my bain isn't working very well.
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