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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

4 fijiana di: thanks di…now that dj is out of the house I'll have more ph scenes…keep reading..

4 tanyaaa: thanks yaaar…I'll update soon..actually I have started two ffs so…can't get enough time 4 both..but I'll cont soon…

4 janki di: thanks di….i know I didn't wanted to stretch it as I also don't want it draaaaging like bt ppl…and I'll pm u don't worry….and more ph scenes for sure…

4 sweetprincezz: thanks komal di…I'll cont soon.

4 sunayna; thanks sunayna….i'll cont soon…and I wanted her to stand cuz I hate it when she keeps quite as if she doesn't have tongue….

4 hi4eva: thanks yaar……I'll cont soon.

4 sewwtxsuga; thanks dhirti….i'll cont soon….aur kia karoon accident to karwana hi than a agar ph scenes chahiye the…lol..

4 12345xxxx: thanks neha..i'll cont soon.

4 sweta: thanks yaar…I'll cont…u know I am writing 2 ffs at the same time soo that's y…

thankooooooooos a ton for liking my ff guys…

luv iqra

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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
Hi guys......
i didn't update this ff from a long time thats b/c i am writing 2 ffs at the same time time and my brain is also not working for this one sooo...sorry guys.....so i'll post short parts i'll try to post long ones too.
One more thing this ff will be finished at the end of august as my school is starting in september.
so i posted this short part...i wrote it a long time ago but i waited till i write more but i got nothing soo...sorry guys.
Luv Iq-
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

Hi guys …..sorry for making u guys wait soooooo long......here is part 4 hope u guys like it..

This part is dedicated to sunayna (xgangax) and janki di (pm rocks)

Thanks guys ur great friends…

Part 4

Recap: dj is sent to the jail….

Lallu; arre bhai sab khare kia ho chal lag jao tayariyon mein….aaj mera barson ka kiya hua wada pura hone jaraha hai…

Aur mein nahi chahta ke heer aur prem ki shaadi mein koi kami reh jaye…

He knows it that his son won't refuse him nor heer so he announces their marriage.

But for his satisfaction he asks both of them.

Lallu: tum logon ko is shaadi se koi aiteraaz to nahi hai na….

Heer nods and prem says ' nahi, baoji aap kef aisle se mujhe koi aiteraaz nahi hosakta'

Lallu: main janta tha..

He gives them a smile, ph bend down for blessings and he gives them saying' jeete raho'

Everyone leaves the hall to start their wedding preparations.

Prem and heer are all alone in the hall.

They look at at eachother.

Prem smiles at her and looks her naughtily and she blushes.

Prem holds her hands.

Prem: heer aaj main bohat khush hoon…ab hum dono ke bich koi nahi aye ga..koi nahi..ab hume aik hone se koi nahi rok sakta.koi nahi….

He sees that heer hasn't spoken yet.

Prem: heer tum khush to hona tumhe koi aiteraaz to nahi hai na…

Heer: ye kasi batein kar rahe ho tum…is din ka maine saalon se intezaar kia hai, aur aaj jab who din agaya hai to main khush kyon nahi hongi…prem maine din raat sirf tumhare hi sapne dekhen hai sirf tumhare…main tumhare bin aik pal bhi nahi reh sakti aik pal bhi nahi..i luv u prem….. I luv u.

Prem: I luv u too heer..tum hi meri sab kuch ho….sab kuch.

They both hug.

Once again sorry for posting it to late and too short...

plz comment.

luv Iq-

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Sorry for the late reply!
That was so sweet! and i lave how you've given her a tounge. . . lol!
She was the first one to say I Love You!!!!!!!!!!!
I've read it 4 times it was so GREAT!
Update very soon!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the update.so heer said i love you.acha hain.update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
awesome
aww loved premeer scene
update soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
very good and nice yaar ts ok chote he sahi but post kai rehana dear i will be waitingt
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
great sis hope you up dated very soon your baji
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

@sunayna thanks yaar no need to say sorry ur the first one to reply....

@fijiana thanks for what di....now that i've started a ff cont to karna hi parega na....thanks for ur coments.
@pooji12345678 thanks pooji, i'll try to update soon...
@tanyaaa thanks tanya for replying nd for waiting.
@ pisces26 thanks baji i'll cont soon...
@ sunayna....no need to say sorry yaar....
iknow i say that i'll cont soon but i never do but this time i'll surely try to cont....
thanks for all the adorable comments...
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
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luved it
awe sum as usual

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