|| *NEW* Premeer OS- Dr Khadoos Juneja 07/05/2014 || - Page 4

Originally posted by: AASUS

Hi Vrushu

pg 1 awesome title. 😃 Thank you for the story.

I wasn't sure who was the girl crying. I decided to not to expect anything.

I know you primarily write on PH in all the stories. Still wasn't sure.

As I read on I thought it's probably is Heer.

The lady came to sit beside the girl crying, I thought was Kul Di. For some reason I thought it was young person so.

Well later we discovered who they are. It was fun actually to have us guess the characters.😃

I enjoyed it.

Preet's entry made the difference. Darn Meher sure was so upset and cried a lot.

Now in real - her boss cannot be this rude ? I mean she could complain to the hospital board isn't it.! Meher is scared but i wish she knew she need not be afraid. I understand her fear.

Heer laughing with Meher is sweet ( though we didn't know who these ladies were). I guess Heer knew how Prem can be. She should seriously advice him not be so rude to junior docs. :P

Anyhow it was kinda weird to know Prem is this khadoos - but ik he can be this way.

It's kinda amazing - almost entire story revolves around him or other characters talk about him, but he had 1 dialogue in whole story :P the rest is Preet's pov.

Even we did not know Preet is a Juneja until he cooly admitted.

Y'know I'm happy with the way you created characters and scenes. So much triggered memory of show - it's the way they acted.

I'm happy Mou's experience inspired you for this concept. Good job in portraying kdmhmd ppl in the story.

Keep writing. Thanks for making me smile. Muah

hey athi di.. firstly thank u so much for taking time to read and comnmnent
offcourse he cant be this rude.. and why would she compalain.?>? it isnt like prem is cornering her or somethng!! she assumes he only targets her.. it may also be that she always makes some mistakes...
hjehehehhe yeah prem has just one dialogue!
yeah mou di's experience.. she was actually complaing and i wanted to write somethng..
thank u for smiling after reading this,.. m really happy
love u.. muhhhaaa😳

Originally posted by: harshitideewani

Awesome Vrushi 👏 so beautiful and cute love story🤗

Loved the way you started even I thought it was Heer who was complaining about khadoos Juneja 😆 but it was Mehr a different start and then Preeth saying the story of Prem and Heer love story ❤️ loved the way Heer 👏took all the initiative her to confess her❤️ love and aslo make the Khadoos Prem juneja fall for her and then the way Prem totally changed and became a❤️ loving and caring🤗 husband also taught how to enjoy Life🥳changing his whole life.👏.

But still Arrogant😛, strict boss in the office... and then smiling infront of everyone was the news of the town... saying that nobody is going fall has he is already been taken😆 and his smile his only for his family loved ittt👏

Bechari Mehr ko Prem ki guzze ko sehna pada😒

But Heer knew how to convert that guzza into Pyaar👏...

Heer tumhari dedication ko salam👍🏼 yaar Khadoos Prem juneja ko apni ungli pe nachaiya😆 wuse 3 magical words bhone par majbhor kiya🤣... pata nahi phir kitne dheer lagatha🥺 Khaddoos Prem Juneja... ...

Loved the way Gayathri, LALit and Preeth supported him in all his difficult situation🤗 and made him his family.

Meet❤️ jodi also were Cute and sweet short story😉

Vrushi Fabalous Job Dear and waiting for more 😉

div di hello!!! i knw u have a special liking towards khadoos prem..
glad u liked the os..
thank u so much for reading it di..
love you!

thank u so much for the likes
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