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Dr. Khadoos Juneja

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Part 1

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(The characters of this story are taken from the serial Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil. The story is entirely my imagination)

(This is a PREMEER Love Story)

WARNING: Its long! I hope u don't get bored and SURVIVE after READING this..

Happy Reading J

(Sorry posting through Cell. Horrible net speed.)

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What did he think of himself ? Agreed he was a senior doctor but how could he scold her like that? Didn't he understand that she was a girl and girls have soft heart?

And what was her fault? She was only 30 minutes late. Okay not 30 really, 30 minutes 25 seconds late but then again it was not her fault. Mumbai traffic was always and had always been like this.

Mr. Khadoos Juneja always needed reasons to scold his interns especially her. Oh wait there was another person whom he scolded on regular basis. Thank god she was not the only one. And she felt happy about it. Dr Khadoos Juneja also scolded her friend Preet Singh, that too on regular basis. It was as if his day didn't go good if he didn't give them their daily dose of scoldings. And from the past 2 months that they had been interns here, they always got scolding regularly.

And again today had been HIS' lucky day and she accepted she was at fault and that she was late and she deserved the scolding, but he could be little nice to his interns now, isnt it? And did that man even know that there existed something called as smile' because she had always seen him being grumpy and with a stern face. Birth defect she concluded.

So after the daily dose of scolding and a hectic morning of work she sat in the cafeteria. She was having a bad headache and then again she was feeling like crying. Reason ?? Well simply because she hadn't cried for many days and the tears made their way.

"Are you alright?" She heard a feminine voice ask her.

Looking up she saw a sweet looking lady, with concerned filled eyes looking at her. She was clad in a saree, and by the look of it, she knew she was married.

Wiping her tears she gave her a small smile and nodded. The lady took a seat next to her.

"What happened? Why were you crying?"

Should she tell her? Well she wanted to vent out her frustrations so why not tell this sweet looking lady. And she must be a patient here. She won't be meeting Dr. Juneja, so no chances of him coming to know.

"Well, thanks to that Khadoos for all this Niagara Falls.."

"Khadoos?" the lady asked.

"Yeah Dr. Khadoos Juneja" I whispered. Who knows Dr. Khadoos might as well turn here and didn't they say "Diwaron ke bhi kaan hote hai."

The lady smiled at her. May be even she had heard about the "Khadoos Juneja"

And so that gave her the encouragement and she continued telling her about the tales of certain Mr. Khadoos Juneja.

And by the time they were finished they both were laughing. The lady was really sweet. She was having a gala time and that when she heard someone calling out her name

"Meher are you early today?"

Right in front of her was her friend "Preet Singh"

"Hey hi Preet. Come join us. I'll introduce you to my new friend. We have had a great time gossiping about someone."

Preet came rushing towards me and seeing the face of the lady who was sitting with me he smiled widely.

"Hey Bhabhi what are you doing here today? I was not told that you are going to come. Are you alright? Is something wrong? Any problem?"

And before the lady infront of her could answer, the nurse came there calling out certain

"Dr. Heer"

Upon hearing the name the lady infront of her got up and smiled at the nurse telling her that she is coming.

Before the lady infront of her could move she saw the devil himself coming to the CAFETERIA.

She registered two things

Firstly Preet had referred to the lady infront of her as Bhabhi, and secondly she had seen with her very two own eyes, which were black in colour and the colour could be ignored at the moment, the 8th WONDER of the World happening right infront of her.

Dr.Khadoos was at the cafeteria' Oh lord what on earth was happening. She had to test her eyes today itself. She had started seeing illusionary things but then she found him looking at the lady infront of her and heard him say,

"How many times have I told you not to keep moving from one place to the another. And what was the need of walking till here. Are you feeling alright?"

And the lady infront of her, whom the nurse had referred as Heer smiled.

"You both brothers are so alike."

Heer turned in her direction and said,

" It was nice talking to you Meher. Would love to meet you next time so that we both can talk on our "FAVORITE TOPIC. And he is my husband Dr Prem Juneja."

Prem sir just looked in my direction and gave his usual look and then holding his wife's hand and giving her his "Million Dollar-Reserved Only For You Smile" led her out of the cafeteria.

I could just smile. All this was too much for me. I was still in a state of shock. I needed water and a chair to sit. My head was spinning. Firstly I had told the lady, who was apparently Dr.Heer all the bad things about Dr. Khadoos who happened to be her husband. How many times had my mother told me to keep my mouth shut. I wish I had listened to her. Then Dr. Khadoos had smiled. I definitely needed an eye checkup. Will go and check my eyes today itself. And next I had to actually ask Preet if Khadoos had actually smiled and then may be get a photo somehow and send it to the people who were keeping a record of the Wonders of the world.

I wish the earth could open up and swallow me, atleast for some time.

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"Meher, Meher.." I found Preet calling out for me. Preet had referred to Heer as Bhabhi, Bhabhi is sister in law as in brother's wife, that means Preet Singh is Prem Juneja's brother!!. But wait aren't they suppose to share the same last name?

She decided to confirm first, otherwise she was all ready to get another minor heart attack.

"Preet you are Preet Singh right?"

Preet gave me some weird look as if I was speaking some foreign language and then answered

" Yeah I am Preet Singh. Are you alright Meher? You don't seem too fine. Your face is looking totally drained of colour."

"You refereed to Doctor Heer as BHABHI?"

"Yeah Meher I did. Because she is My Bhabhi." Preet answered as if making a 6 years kid understand that 1+1 is equal to two.

"And she said that Dr Khadoos I mean Dr Juneja is her husband?"

"Yeah Meher he is. Prem Bhai is Heer Bhabhis's husband, Heer Bhabhi is a doctor in this hospital but since she is pregnant and Prem bhai being the over protective husband has told her to go on maternity leave. She must have probably come to visit him. But why are you asking me all this. Are we playing 20 questions or something, and then let me tell you that this is not the right time??"

She was surely going to go home and mark this on her calendar as her doom's day. This day could not have been any worse. She had to prepare herself for the worst now. Prem Juneja had seen his wife talking with me, and by the looks he was giving it seemed that he must be definitely angry. God Save Her. Good Bye Happiness.

She found Preet shaking her.

"Meher what is wrong with you? Till the time you were talking with Heer Bhabhi you were all fine. Now suddenly what has happened?"

Oh nothing much Preet. I've seen and I am the reason for my Doom's day, she wanted to say but instead ignoring his questions she asked him again

"Preet why didn't you tell me that you are Prem Juneja's brother? And why is your surname and his surname different?"

"You never asked me Meher. And my full name is Preet Singh Juneja. I like it as Preet Singh so I use it this way. Sounds cool isnt it?"

Cool? Well nothing was cool at the moment.

"Preet this is my last day here today. I am going to be fired from here tomorrow."

"Why but?"

"Because before you came I was complaining and telling all bad things about your PREM BHAI to your HEER BHABHI. And so if she goes and tells him I'll be fired"

Preet started laughing.

"So this was your favorite topic? I see. And don't worry Heer Bhabhi wont tell a word against you. She herself has fought with him so many times. Chill."

Although Preet's words were reassuring at the moment but she still was not sure about anything. She just hoped that everything was going to be fine.

"Waise Preet, how did your sweet Bhabhi fall for your Khadoos Bhaiya? I mean she is so full of life and ever so smiling and your Bhai is such a grumpy person. Jab dekho hum pe chilate rehte hai."

"That is because he is just like that here. At home he is not like this. Its just that he wants everything to be perfect and on time. And although he gets angry very frequently, Heer Bhabhi is there to control it. So no worries."

"You know what Preet I really want to know your Heer Bhabhi's and Prem Bhai's love story. I mean why did Heer Bhabhi fall in love with such a person. Bhagwan jane unme kya dekhliya."

Preet just chuckled and started their story.

The Love story of Prem Juneja and Mrs Heer Prem Juneja nee Maan.

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Part 2

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Prem Juneja was once a happy go lucky boy but the happiness was short lasting after the separation of his parents. His parents had constant fights and issues in their short-lived marriage and so finally they parted ways. Neither his father nor his mother was interested to look after him. That was the time when Lalit Juneja who was his dad's second cousin and his wife Gayatri Juneja adopted him. They all shifted to Delhi and started residing there. Prem after that incident had become unusually quiet and cold towards others. His world revolved only around gayatri and Lalit who showered all their love on him and after an year Preet entered their lives. Although he spoke minimum, he loved his family a lot but to the outside world he showed a cold face.

And the same continued as the years passed.

Prem had always wanted to become a doctor, a cardiologist and he fulfilled his dream and started with his internship at APOLLO Hospital Delhi, which was one of the best hospital in India. It was here that he met Heer Maan.

Heer was a lively girl and loved to make people smile and when she met Prem Juneja who was quiet and kept a straight face, never talking more that required, he became the object of her interest. Although Prem gave cold shoulder to Heer, she never backed out. She loved irritating him and the best part was that, that he reacted to her irritation which by itself was a great achievement. In all this process she fell in love with his quiet sulky self. She noticed and understood that he only pretended to be unaffected with anything but in reality he felt every emotion. Everything affected him but he just pretended to be his cold self. She had seen a flicker of emotions especially when he was posted in children's ward. And with all these things, she would find herself falling more and more in love with him.

So although she irritated him, whenever he was around her heart beats would get really fast and at occasions like that she felt she would die of heart attack. She would feel butterflies in her stomach and her eyes would constantly be on him. She never averted her eyes away from him. And his one gaze was enough for her to turn red like a tomato. So one fine day she decided to put an end to all this and tell him about her feelings.

One fine evening she had found him alone on the terrace .She did confess, but he after giving her a shocked look, told her directly that it would be better for her if she put an end to her feelings. Although the rejection did hurt her even after planning to be strong, she stubbornly told him that, that is not going to happen and it will be him falling in love with her.

"Never Heer don't even dream. Its not happening"

"And I love challenges."

"You are playing with fire Heer."

"And I would love to play with it. Let's see Mr. Juneja whether its me falling out of love with you, or you falling head over heels in love with me. I think the second thing is most likely to happen."

"Never in my life." He had said equally determined.

"That we will see. Till than love you Prem." She had kissed his cheeks and walked out of the terrace and he had stomped his feet.

From there on Heer had continued with her love doses on him. But he tried his best to ignore it every time.

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Another one of the incidents was when one fine day he was in the locker room and he was alone. Best opportunity she thought and made her way towards him.

"Hey Love !!" she greeted him cheerfully.

He was his usual self and didn't reply her.

"Mr. Prem Juneja I am not speaking to the walls or these lockers. I am speaking to you."

"I have not told you to speak to me neither do I find it necessary to reply to your greetings and this is the last time I am telling you I am not your LOVE" he replied with a straight face.

"Thank God !! atleast reply to kiya. Rudely hi sahi.. and you are offcourse my Love. Let me decide for myself. And Prem ko hindi mein LOVE hi bolte hai na?" She said happily wiggling he eyebrows while he just gave her an angry glare.

"Oh god! Don't worry I no more get scared of your glares, developed a resistance you see! And Don't you get bored like this all quiet? I understand India is under high inflation rate but the government has not imposed any taxes on smiling, and it does not cost you to smile at people you know. Thank god its only me who loves you madly, or else who other than me has daring to even speak to you?"

"I would be really grateful if even you stop talking."

"Don't worry I can't be so grateful to you. And talking to you and loving you are the only motives of my life" She replied cheekily.

He threw another angry glare and was about to make his way out when she decided to stop him.

"Heer mera haath chodo.."

" Maine thodi hi tumhara haath chodne ke liye pakda hai?"

"Heer maine kahan haath chodo.."

"Aur nahi choda to?"

This riled up his anger and he just pushed her aside with such a force that she hit her hand on one of the lockers.

"AAhh!" she screamed in pain.

Prem was immediately by her side, pulling her hand in his.

"I am sorry Heer. Show me where has it hurt? Are you alright?" he asked with concerned filled eyes.

Heer was happy that atleast he was not putting a face of being emotionless.

She smiled at him and cupping his cheek said "Tum agaye na, now everything is alright. If you love me why don't you tell me Prem?"

He left her hand immediately and left from there.

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Next hilarious and amazing experience was holi celebrations. Heer had self invited herself at the Juneja Mansion for Holi celebration. Prem was shocked to see her there. She had lovingly taken blessings from her would be father in law and would be mother in law, all the while blushing looking at Prem dropping hints that she was in love with their son. Preet and Heer had developed quite a bonding.

Heer was standing alone with Gayatri when Gayatri had asked caressing her cheeks,

"Pyar karti hai na usse?"

She had bobbed her head like a five year old, " Lekin apka beta bohot khadoos hai. Manne ko tayar hi nahi ki mujhse pyar karta hai." Heer said pouting.

"Wo hai hi aisa" and over next half an hour she had told Heer about Prem's life and Heer had started crying.

"Beta why are you crying?"

"I am feeling bad for Prem. I hate those people who are responsible for Prem's state today."

"But I have full faith in you, you'll change him , actually I am already seeing him changing."

"I hope so" Heer had replied hopefully.

Gayatri had lovingly placed a kiss on her forehead.

Later Preet had pulled Heer to celebrate Holi and all Prem could do was feel jealous.

Fortunately or unfortunately Heer had by mistakenly consumed Bhaang.

And then she was high.. and dancing around.

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Prem was searching for Heer, he did not trust that girl. Wherever she was, she always brought musibat' along with her and clumsiness was her soul mate. God knows how many times a day she hurt herself tripping and falling every now and then.

The last he had seen her was with Preet and now when he met Preet few minutes ago, Heer was not there with him and so getting worried he made his way through the crowd to hunt her down. Not that he was worried about her he convinced himself, he didn't want his parents to be worried about anything, he justified himself.

After searching everywhere when he didn't find her he began to get worried and just then he heard faint voice of someone crying. Looking around he found Heer sitting at one corner and crying. Now what on earth did happen to this girl..

He went and sat beside her..

"Heer??"

She looked up at him and started crying loudly in a dramatized manner. Prem put fingers in his ears to prevent himself from becoming deaf.

"Heer stop screaming.."

She started wailing more loudly.

"Heer why on earth are you crying?"

Subsiding her sobs Heer replied, "Because you are not playing holi with me."

To say that he was shocked would be an understatement.

"WHHHAAttt???? You are crying because I am not playing holi with you?"

She shook her head through her tears.

"Heer enough of this drama. Get up at once, wipe your tears and let me drop you to your house."

Heer got up at once and started hitting her legs on the ground and hitting Prem.

What on earth was wrong with this girl?

He caught hold of her hands and looked at her. She was still crying.

And then suddenly she looked at him and said "Prem pehle to tum mujhe ek hi najar ate the, ab to char char dikhane lage hon." She said making a confused face.

"Char char??" what was happening today? Huh and why was Heer behaving weird. Seems like she has hit head somewhere or must have eaten something inappropriate. Wait a minute... Did she by ANY CHANCE drink...

"Heer, have u consumed bhang?"

And then she started laughing again.

"Oh! That was bhang which I drank. That's why it was tasting weird." She said making a face and showing him her displeasure at drinking it.

"Heer..." he tried to say something and he saw her crying again. The Bhang was surely showing its effects.

"Stop crying Heer, please for god sake..."

"To pehle mere saath holi khelo..." she said making a puppy face.

"No I am not..." and his sentence again remained unfinished as Heer got and started crying, stomping her feet like a 5 year old.

Handling a conscious Heer was itself difficult and now a semi conscious one was .. Arrghh!!

"Heer please chalo...'

"Pehle Hoil phir ghar...'

"Heer..."

"Tumhe pata hai, jab tum mujhe aise Heer kehte hon mere dil mein kuch kuch hota hai ."

"Yeh kya dramebaji hai Heer?" asked a completely frustrated Prem.

"Jabse tum se pyar hua hai na, meri dramebazi to aur bhi bad gayi hai... Tumhe mujhe ghar le ke jaana hai na?? thik hai first play holi with me and then we shal go homeee" she said giggling and trying not to stumble upon balancing herself.

Prem let out a frustrated sigh,

"Thik hai, but promise me we are going home after that."

"Pinkkkyyy promissseee" Heer got all excited.

Prem brought a plate of colours and gave it to her.

"take this and finish this fast.."

Heer took handful of colours and smeared it on his face.

"Chalo chalo ab tum mujhe lagao... jaldi!!"

Prem had no option but to listen to her and he did as she said.

"Now shall we go home?" Prem asked defeated.

"Home kiska home?? Mera to koi home hi nahi hai. This is my home. Yay!!" she said twirling around.

"Heer you promised.."

"Okay okay let's go...I will be a good girl lekin who will say bye to Sasuma, Sasurji and Devar-ji?" asked a confused Heer.

"I will do it. Just stand over here. Don't move. I'll be back with the car keys."

Heer shook her head.

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Five minutes later when Prem arrived at the spot where he had left Heer, she was nowhere around. Now where on earth was he suppose to search her.?

Coming to the front lawn of his house he found people gathered around. He hoped heer had not created some problem there. Once infront he found Heer right on top, on the terrace standing below the parapet. His mom and dad were requesting her to come down but she was not listening. Seeing him she started jumping with excitement.

His mother left out a breath of relief seeing him.

"Prem convince Heer to come down. She is saying that she is going to jump from there. She has consumed bhang and then she has locked the door to the terrace."

This girl will be the death of him some day.

"Heer come down please."

Heer gave him a look and started screaming on top of her voice,

"Sasuma apne bte ko bol dijiye ki either he has to say that he loves me or I am going to jump from here right now." Heer said turning serious for a moment and then laughing.

Gayatri looked at Prem with hopeful eyes. Prem just looked at Heer.

"Heer just come down..." he said.

"Sasurji Tell him fast that I mean it that I am going to jump from here..." Heer said looking at lalit.

"Prem man jao na... Ek I love You mein kya jaata hai?" Said lalit.

"Dad you are saying this you???" Prem gave a disbelieved look.

"Prem Bhai listen to Heer di na."

"Preet shut up! I'll deal with you later. Couldn't you have stopped her from drinking.."

Heer started speaking again,

"Dekha Gaowalo, main Prem ki maari yahan jaan dene ja rahi hoon aur yeh hai ki kuch padi hi nahi hai. Lekin koi baat nahi. I am going to count till 10 if he doesn't say that he loves me I am going to jump from here right now. And Prem remember you are taking away the life of a very efficient doctor by forcing me to kill myself." Heer was ready to climb on the parapet.

"Prem do something soon..." Gayatri was all scared now.

1' 2' ... 3'...'4'... 5'... 6'...

He had to think fast. This girl had planned it all to drive him nuts. How on earth had he fallen in love with this foolish, stupid, idiot girl???

7'... 8' 9'... 9.15'...

"Prem Bhai please do something fast..."

9.5'... 9.75' and Now Heer was all ready to jump.

"Heer wait.!" Screamed Prem.

All eyes had expectantly turned towards him.

"Heer... I..I.. lo.. Love you.." Prem said looking straight in her eyes.

"Me tooo..." She screamed and getting down from the parapet fainted there.

Gayatri and Lalit hugged each other and all the others around also started jumping.

Minutes later Prem had to take the help of ladder and get Heer down.

From that day onwards there was no looking back. Prem had accepted his Love for Heer and their love story had started. Once they were done with their internship and after an year of working at the same hospital they both got married as it did not take much time for Heer's family to agree to this and Prem's family was ready. And the rest is history.

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"Oh my god. That is such a cute love story. But I still did not understand how Heer Ma'am fell in love with your Khadoos Bhai.." Said a very excited Meher.

"LOVE, you see." Preet said smiling at Meher.

"Yeah but still, I mean she is so sweet and all and keeps smiling and I've never ever seen him smiling with the exception of today. But then knowing about his past I understand why he is like this."

"Well well, he is like this only when he is outside. If you see him at home he is totally in a different avatar from the time Heer Bhabhi has come in his life. Me and Heer Bhabhi together irritate him and then he teams up with Maa. He has become so fun loving and lively and all thanks to Heer bhabhi"

"Its hard to believe you know, I mean a person who is so strict can be fun loving as well."

"One day come over to my place and see for yourself. Oh yeah come on this Sunday we have Mom and Dad's wedding anniversary and since Heer Bhabhi is pregnant Prem Bhai is looking over everything and I am his most responsible assistant."

"Firstly I don't know if I have the courage to come and meet your Prem Bhai especially on a day when I don't have to face him and secondly don't flaunt yourself too much. Come now! We have to get back to work. And tell Heer ma'am that I am sorry about all the stuff I said about her husband. She is super sweet. I wish I too had such a cute love story."

"Don't worry I am there na?"

"Haha you? We'll see.. come walk fast now."

Meher walked out with Preet following her.

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Prem held his wife and they were making their way to his cabin.

"Are you alright?" he asked with a voice full of concern.

"Premmm I am fine. I m just pregnant and you being a doctor have to stop acting so over protective."
"Please Heer not again. Let me do what I want please. Its about my wife and my baby afterall.."

"Yeah your wife and your baby. Waise I am sure we are going to have an emergency in the hospital soon." Heer said smiling looking at Prem.

"And why is that so?"

"That is because some of your interns have seen you smiling for the first time. So some of them are going to be too shocked seeing you smile while some will be blown off by your killer smile." Heer said with a teasing glint.

"Oh well I don't mind. My smile is reserved for my family and one special one for my wife. And no one is going to be blown off because they know I am already taken and a soon to be father."

"Who to hai.." Heer smiled and placed her head on his shoulder.

Prem kissed her forhead and led her to his cabin.

This pretty lady has changed the whole equation of his life. She has taught him to smile, to laugh and to enjoy life. Before she entered his life, he use to smile for his family but now he smiles from his heart. He wants to live with her forever. She has taught him to get crazy with her. She has brought out of him the childishness and playfulness which he had buried within him years ago. She has given him a new life. He has definitely changed but that is for her and his family to see. To the outside world he is still the arrogant, silent and strict Prem Juneja or rather say

"Dr. Khadoos Juneja"

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A/N hello peeps!! I am back after a long time to torture you'll. This one is inspired from mou di's stories about her boss who is apparently on leave giving her time to breath.

I hope it was not that bad and this is the longest I've ever written.

I enjoyed writing it and I Hope u feel the same while reading.

*Didn't proof read so please ignore all spelling/grammatical mistakes*

Loads of Love

Vrushika.


PS- how many of you'll thoght that it was Heer in the beginning???

Edited by vrushika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Woah! Vrushu is back :D

Ok, seriously Miss Premeer and Meet. :'(
You are making me cry buckets. :D
Beautiful update. Loved it till the end :D
and thanks for the PM vru ;)


Now go and see CSK ka match. Hehe
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😆Wowww vrushu...I didn't knw u write so well...infact not well its superbbb👏
N who said it was a long update...mai to itna kho gai thi prne me k pta nhi nhi chala kb over ho gya...mera dil to chah rha tha prti hi rhu😛
D best thing was d title which bought a big wali smile on my face...Dr. Khadoos juneja...😆😆

How can prem's parents disown him lyk dat😡Bt m glad lalit n gayatri adopted him...dey r so sweet😊N so is preet😊
Heer is just marvelous...she can bring smile to anyone's face😊
N her dialogs r just mind blowing lyk Prem ko english me LOVE hi khte hai na😉😆
I loved d way she irritated prem...n d sholey wala scene was just hilarious🤣..I can understand wat prem ws feeling seeing her on roof😆

D ending is so cuteee...n prem smiling fr d first tym in public became d hot topic😆...waise hosh to sbke hi ur jaate hai use smile krta dekh...😳
N how can I forget to mention meher...bechari...prem k gusse ka nishana bnti rhti hai😆
Yes...I too thought it was heer frst who become d victim of prem's temper😉😛
Its a superb OS
thanks fr d PM vrushu😊
Edited by deepluvprem - 11 years ago
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as soon as i come back m gonna jump on this one . luv u vrushii !!!
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Omg vrushu came wid a bang...it was an amazing story...concept was very cute...loved the talli heer 😆 the way she said sasuma..sasurji and devar ji..
Pta me too have a story in my mind..related to the topic arrogant prem :p
Maine socha tha ki i will write after my exam..lolzzz
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What an adorable adorable adorable story Vrushika.
Yes...I actually thought it was Heer at the beginning complaining about Dr Khudoos 😆...and the married woman who sat down next to her I thought would turn out to be his mom...and you know the typical story would go from there.

But no...you surprised me...it was Meher

First off I loved the fact that you used Meet in the story

And then you told Premeer's love story in such a beautiful way too. And this time Heer took center stage and charge of their relationship.

Poor Prem wanted to keep all his feelings bottled up because of his childhood...but Heer managed to get him to say I love you after all. Of course he cared for her if she was hurt, or missed her if she wasn't around...but wouldn't admit it. That suicide bit was the straw that broke the camel's back 😆

Very well written...lovely lovely lovely. 👏

I thoroughly enjoyed it. 😛

Thanks for the PM 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U know ... one should learn from u how to think about romance & drool over a couple when u r being tortured by one of them 😆 ... How I wish it was possible in my case but I doubt so😛 ... bcz I've seen my Boss's wife once & she is nowhere near to our Heeriye😕 ... She looks as Khadoos as our Boss😕 ... They r just made for each other 😆... Rab ne bana di jodi 😆 ... We've even given them name - " Hitler couple "🤣

OK coming to the update ... Vrushika is back ... & that too with a bang ... Awesome OS baccha ... I loved it & thoroughly enjoyed it ... At first I really thought the tortured person is Heer & that lady in cafeteria is Kulraaj😛😆 ... But u surprised me there by saying she is Meher ... Bechari ... No one can understand her plight more than me ... I wish her boss also go on a vacation ... may be a paternal leave ???😆

I loved this chulbuli, bubbly Heeriye a lot 😃... She & Prem reminded me a lot of Khushi & Arnav 😃... Specially the hand holding scene ... Chodne ke liye thodi na pakda hai ... I miss them😭 ...

OK back to the topic😛 ... This Heeriye was so sweet ... She has made our Prem run a lot after her in serial 😆... it's high time she starts running after him 😛... That's why I loved it more 😆...

Talli Heer was worth reading😆 ... Someone should learn from her how to be stubborn & make her wish fulfill 😆... She gave a hard time to Prem ... Payback time ... Ladki ho to aisi ... She made him say i love you to her & then only fainted ... not before that🤣 ...

& the ending part was more cute where Mr. Juneja was freaking over his wife😆 ... I wish they showed this part in the show ... Heer being pregnant & Prem being the possessive & over protective husband ... It's one of my most cherished wishes regarding Kis Desh😭 ... I really wanted to see a track like this😭 ... I'm missiing them more now😭 ...

After reading this I so wish to watch Additi acting in a talli scene some day & her hero saving her (it'll be more enjoyable if the actor is Mr. Harshad Chopda😉😆) ... I want to see these together ... Can't they come back 😭

& in between all of these Meet's scenes were also cute ... though they r short but significant ... these two always add charm to a story ...

Awesome OS Vrushu ... & as u r back now ... Hope to see ur other story being udated now 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
#9
Awww..that was such a cute story <3
loved it <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
Woww its Awosome OS... Loved loved loved it... 😊
Edited by tarannum6 - 11 years ago

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