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luv.Harshiti

@luv.Harshiti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Owww.. GHOSSS..!!

Vrusu,.. 👏

As always this is Damn good.!!

I loved the Bhag and Locker room part the most. Its was really sweet and Imagining Prem Angry Glare and Heer smile it even made me go more CRAZyyy!!!!!!111

Thank you for such Wonderful OS. Loved it 👏

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Wow Vrushu That was such a sweet os dear

Hahaha I really thought at first that the girl was heer only

Nice idea

And This heer and her ways of making prem agree was hilarious and the drunken heer was so dramatic and out of control.Atlast heer succeeded

And Meher was funny too.She complained to heer about prem and got more shock to know that Preet singh is also a juneja

And Her scoldings for Prem was hahah

Overall a very cute os dear

Thanks for the pm

Take care

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sana.harshiti

@sana.harshiti

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Vrushika is back ... ... Awesome OS vrushu ... I loved it

and talli heer is so cute 😆

love the premeer scenes and Meet's scenes were also cute

know missing them more 😭

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heena..

@heena..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

wow!!!!!!!! such an amazing love story , loved it alott...

ya i really thought it was heer in the beginning but later suprised to know that she was meher ...😆

i also loved meet scenes 😉

talli wala scene toh zabardast hai ...👏

i really wish ki me ye tv me dekhpati 😒 ...,

after reading this OS, i m missing them more now ...

thankuuu vrushika 😛

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ILOVEPREMEER

@ILOVEPREMEER

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Such a cute OS.
Loved it.
Do keep writing.

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newt2007

@newt2007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Vrushika back with OS

loved it. Heer changed Prem into a smiling man.

liked khadoos theme.

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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Amazing OS vrushi
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Please keep writing more

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priya

@-.Priya.-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

wow this is such a cute story..loved it 😳

~Priya~

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

KissOfDeath Pri WOW you actually took time to read.😲 It's been ages. Nice seeing you.😎

Edited by AASUS - 11 years ago

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#20

Hi Vrushu

pg 1 awesome title. 😃 Thank you for the story.

I wasn't sure who was the girl crying. I decided to not to expect anything.

I know you primarily write on PH in all the stories. Still wasn't sure.

As I read on I thought it's probably is Heer.

The lady came to sit beside the girl crying, I thought was Kul Di. For some reason I thought it was young person so.

Well later we discovered who they are. It was fun actually to have us guess the characters.😃

I enjoyed it.

Preet's entry made the difference. Darn Meher sure was so upset and cried a lot.

Now in real - her boss cannot be this rude ? I mean she could complain to the hospital board isn't it.! Meher is scared but i wish she knew she need not be afraid. I understand her fear.

Heer laughing with Meher is sweet ( though we didn't know who these ladies were). I guess Heer knew how Prem can be. She should seriously advice him not be so rude to junior docs. :P

Anyhow it was kinda weird to know Prem is this khadoos - but ik he can be this way.

It's kinda amazing - almost entire story revolves around him or other characters talk about him, but he had 1 dialogue in whole story :P the rest is Preet's pov.

Even we did not know Preet is a Juneja until he cooly admitted.

Y'know I'm happy with the way you created characters and scenes. So much triggered memory of show - it's the way they acted.

I'm happy Mou's experience inspired you for this concept. Good job in portraying kdmhmd ppl in the story.

Keep writing. Thanks for making me smile. Muah

Edited by AASUS - 11 years ago