~Won't Give Up~ 12/12 UPDATED p16

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priya

@JugniPH

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

aww..lovely story..

premeer is just awesome..loved the friendship they shares...and the underlying love for each other..

bt i'm confused abt marriage thing..how come heer's marriage fixed with someone else? and also prem attending it too? they are in love na..?

cant wait to read 3rd part to find things..

pls update soon..

thanks for pm

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Wow Grace quick update 😲 that was really shocking. I was expecting to wait even months 😆

Thanks.

pg 4 part 2

PH friendship is very true and honest.

That's what I got out of the way they both taking care of each other.

It kind of surprised me friendship taking a sudden turn.

I think you carefully chose words in a way no one can really

guess for sure where this is going 😳

I still don't know what'll happen. It was a great read - v. interesting.

Loved Preet popping in between and his interaction with PH 😎

He's so funny and caring. I wonder what role he plays between PH

or if he's just a guest appearance in the story.

So Heer's leaving. Lookng forward to see what happens to her later

and what new things happens to Prem.

Ginger is a lovely addition so cute. Loved the update.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Beautiful update... how you showed the transform in their relationship..truly awesome... loved it

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kiran

@kiran_28

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wow grace
it was quite romantic update
loved premeer's romance and their cute fight at the end 😳
please cont soon
thanx 4 pm

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Deshian4lyf

@Deshian4lyf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awhhh omggg they are sooo cutee! Your writing is so good grace! I am always in my own world of premeer when i am reading your fan fictions! Amazing job! Thank you sooo muchhh! Loved it! Cant wait to read what happens in tonight's date! Love how heer tricked him into getting changed for the date! And oh my gosh preet<33 so glad you added a little bit of his part in this update! Do continue soon grace! Xoxoxo :)

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midnight_blue

@midnight_blue

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

awesome update..loved it😊

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Biya

@biyaahmad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

another beautifull os.

luved it so much.😊

luved premeer's friendship,the way she gets jelous with ginger,the way he teased her,the way he manoo her,the way they get into relationship,their date,their romance luved every thing.😊

but i m confused about wedding.😕

is she really going to marry with another guy?😕after all this relationship and the moments they share.

and if she really is,then why the hell is he grinning like fool in her wedding.😡

i can't wait now plz update soon.

and by the way madam when are u going to update "awmarw"?

update sooon and

thanks for the pm.😊

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

I m bck di. ;) :*

Update? :D :) :D :)

PS- This is my 6000 comment so Posting it here. My Fav Place. :D

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aaminaman

@aaminaman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hey grace that was a nice update you just beautifully explains how they have went to the next level but then I am scarf they are not talking about it and I think there's gonna be some misunderstanding or is it that raj comes and appologises ohh I am thinking too much why don't you put and end to my imagination by making an update grace you know what I can't wait too much it's killing I am in desperate need to read what's gonna happen and what mAde heer to
marry someonels

But you know what at the end I know one thing which I guessed up from the title won't give up prems not going to see his heer marry someonese he's going to get her back by hook or crook ryt grace