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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

finally u update the ff awsome update...

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AASUS

@AASUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Hey Grace 🤗

Belated Happy Birthday! Thank you for your gift. 😃

pg 16 Epilogue

Beautiful. Loved all the scenes. Prem Preet, Heer Meher convos are fun and so nice. Love the friendship.

Family moments are v. special.

Chahat sure is a cutie pie and looks v. matured for her age.

I like the dialogues you gave for her. Enjoyed reading them.

Cute name Aayan. Also Prateek is v. cute.

I think out of all the PH you've created, this story come very close to reality in the way PH behave towards each other. They are not always reading minds so to speak, they have their insecurities and not always comfortable sharing. But it's nice they always take care of each other and going strong for nearly 10 years!

Heer reminiscing Prem's proposal to her and how happy she is is lovely. Same way Prem thinking about his Heer was beautiful too.

Ketan Tanu are fun.

Park scene was super cute.

oh I loved Chahat Aayan bonding. So nice they're special siblings and very close to each other.

Awesome update. Thank you so much. You're definitely one of the very treasured member in this forum because you always find a way to entertain us all. Thank you for your time 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

it was fantastic from beginning to end. chahat and ayaan, our chota prem and choti heer awesomeee yaar! ❤️

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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

awesome SS Grace ...loved it ...👏

thanks for the pm ...

and please keep writing more ...

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Goldstar7

@Goldstar7

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

A beautiful ending of PH with Chahat and Aayan and their families. waiting for an os with spoilt heer tamed by prem after marriage in future if u have time.😊

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Sindhu

@SindhuB

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

ncie one

thanx for d pm

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anitasharma

@anitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Thanks for this amazing story.
Do write more.

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Thank you everyone for all the comments and all the birthday wishes.
Look out my other works or updates 😉

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Fatima

@-Fatima-

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Gosh u start new ff & i didn't have any idea i suck big time i m bookmarking everything gonna read as soon my examz gonna end

p.s:missing u & love u Grace <3

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