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Goldstar7

@Goldstar7

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Very good start but dont dare to marry Heer with any other then prem , otherwise another wanted poster 😆 waiting for next update.

Edited by -prime- - 12 years ago

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newt2007

@newt2007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Grace u are back with another OS.

we can't stop dreaming our Premeer. we end up dream something everyday and tempted to write it. 😆.

Nice start dear. as usual another expressive start.

Maya, Meher, Ash and Heer friendship.

Heer's jealous. Ginger, nice name. your suspense on Ginger.👏

ha ha Prem is giving preference to Heer.

now Heer getting married to someone. oh confusing

i stick to your title 'won't give up.' not giving up my hope.😃

let see what surprise you have for us in 2nd part.

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Welcome back di... so happy to read a new OS from you...

Loved the start... and loved prem and heer friendship... but was so shocked to know prem was not the groom.. so looking forward to know how the story gonna proceed from here...

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midnight_blue

@midnight_blue

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Prem isn't the groom??😔 how could he let his Heer marry someone else?
awesome start Grace..update soon.will b waiting for an early update

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nspn.92

@nspn.92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

awesome...😊

got to read a beautiful premeer os after so long time...

i wish prem was d groom😔

continue soon...

thanks for the pm😊

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NOOR

@Noor_PremHeer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Hey Grace!! 🤗
Wow.. what a Dhamakedaar entry yar!!
loved the SS..
awww.. they had long distance relationship sooo Cute..
I always Love Prem of ur stories.. 😳 😆
oh God.. whom is she marrying.. 😲
what happened???
it was so clear with their conversation that he would propose her.. aaahhh..
Grace Please update soon cant wait to read what actually happened
Now i understood title of SS 😉
Upadate soon..
Love Noorie 😊

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Deshian4lyf

@Deshian4lyf

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Waitingg!(: continuee soon! Not to mention this but i am sooo glad your back

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Hey ...

Sorry for late comment ...

But the os was amazing ...

Loved the twist ...

Even the title is very different and awesome ...

Cant wait to read more ...

Cont. soon ...

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aaminaman

@aaminaman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

well after a long time ryt grace well i am happy that you uodated something even i am very busy with my studies nowadays but i have taken to come look whether you updated and when looked without any hope i got it weell its as usual really good but you know what i am a bit confused at the begining i felt heer was going to marry prem like how she was looking at herself and then thinking when i met him so i thought they were going to marry but then you really did stopped at that exact part where you left us anticipating and not giving us an update as soo as possible so please do give us one soon

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classyandsassy

@classyandsassy

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Ah atlast got a chance 2 comment ... Tht was luvly Grace ... & what can i say about GINGER 🤣🤣 ... Dis Prem is also sumthing ... He was making her jealous over a puppy ????🤣 ... Luking Forward 2 it ... & don't u dare separate Prem & Heer 😡😃 ... W8ing 4 d nxt part 😊

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