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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Dark shadow Part 7



Heer:You are in love?With whom?Why did'nt you tell dad about it?
Meher:Because my man does'nt want to disclose it now.
H:But you tell me who he is.
M:No Heer.I can't.It will hurt him.I don't want that to happen.But i will tell you one thing.I met him during a music concert.
H:Don't worry Meher.You will get your love.

Heer meets Harshad.
Har:Did the wedding preparations start?
H:No,Meher is not happy about this wedding.She loves someone else.
Harshad is shocked:Oh!
He thinks:I know Meher..you can't leave your love and marry someone else.


Heer presents a chain to Harshad.It has a heart shaped pendant where it's written 'Love'.
Harshad is surprised:Heer!What is this?
H:This is my gift for you.You keep it with you.It will remind you of me always.
Har:I don't need this chain to remember you.You are always in my heart.But your gift is lovely.
Harshad wears the chain.
Heer smiles.
Harshad pulls her closer to him with a smile.She is shy.

Meher meets Preet.
P:I was happy when you called me here.That day i was tensed seeing your face expression.I doubted whether you are not happy about this marriage.
M:Your doubt is true.I'm not happy about this marriage.I love someone.
Preet is shocked.He controls his tears.
P:Good luck.I'm not angry with you.You live with him happily.
Meher's eyes are welled up with tears.
M:That is not possible.Because he was cheating me.I realised it very late.He is in love with my sister now.He wants to avoid me and snatch Heer from us.
Preet is shocked.
P:Leave it Meher.You forget him and start a new life.
Meher raises her eyes and looks at him.
P:I still love you.
Meher is surprised.
M:But i can't fall in love again.I'm scared.
Preet smiles:All men are not same.
Preet holds her arms:I will not make you upset.
Meher can't believe it.

Heer is reading something in her room.Meher enters the room:Heer...i want to tell you something.
H:Tell Meher.
M:I have decided to marry Preet.
Heer is shocked:Then..what about your lover?
M:He is not a good guy.I escaped from him.
Heer can't believe it.
M:What you said is true.Dad has chosen a nice guy for me.Preet is very nice.
Heer smiles:I'm so happy for you...
M:But i'm scared whether my boyfriend will kill me.
Heer is shocked:What are you saying?
M:He is dangerous.He is after you now.He is scared whether i will tear his mask and block his way...so he won't get you.
H:Who is he?Tell me..
M:He is..
Their mom:Heer...let us go to the shop and buy vegetables..it's urgent.Otherwise no lunch.
H:Ok...Meher...We will do shopping and come back.Are you joining us?
M:No.
H:Ok..we will come back soon.Then we will talk.
M:Ok.
H:Bye..


Harshad is walking on the road.His mobile rings.He attends the call.
His mom Nitya:Palchan is in the Lilavati hospital.Very serious.
He is shocked:I'm coming now.
A guy with helmet on the bike comes towards him and snatches his chain.
H:Hey...
Harshad is about to run behind the bike.
H:No,i have to go now to the hospital.
He goes to the hospital.When he reaches the hospital,his parents Nitya and Rakesh come towards him.
H:What happened to Palchan?
N:God heard our prayer.Palchan is out of danger now.
Harshad is relieved.

Heer and her mom come back home.Heer enters Meher's room:Meher!
She is shocked to see Meher lying down bathed with blood.Her stomach has been stabbed with knife by someone.
Heer screams:Meher!
Heer touches Meher's face:Meher..
M:Heer...
Meher breaths.That was her last breath.Heer sees a chain with small pendant lying near Meher.Heer is shocked:Oh!This is the chain which i gave Harshad.That means Harshad did this.
Heer cries.

Heer thinks of what Meher told her about her boyfriend.
"I met him during a music concert".
"But i'm scared whether my boyfriend will kill me.He is dangerous.He is after you now.He is scared whether i will tear his mask and block his way...so he won't get you".
Heer thinks:All her dialogues hint that it is Harshad who dated her?This chain proves the truth.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Nice update
and i m definitely sure dat someone is trying trap harshad.
someone else killed meher
pls cont soon
thank 4 pm 😃
Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
I think there is some kind of misunderstanding...awesome update and looking forward to the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awesome update ...
thanks for the pm ...
update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Jasmine

pg 7

😭😭😭 sigh Meher had to die 😒
oh whoa so Heer's being misled by someone. wondering who 😕

This was a shocker - I didn't expect things would turn bad this quickly.
So sad for Heer's family. What a tragedy 😔

Can't wait to find out how things will from now on?
Is Harshad going to get help from his family or friends to clear his name?
Or is Heer going to start investigating on her own?
Does Heer's parents know about her boyfriend and if so what do they think, I wonder.

Great job Jasmine. ⭐️ You totally had my attention from 1st line to the last.
Thank you for it. Keep going.


Edited by AASUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Dark shadow Part 8


After a few days...
Heer goes to college.Harshad runs to her:Heer!
Heer stares at him.
H:I missed you a lot.I came to know about Meher.I was shocked.
Heer is rough:Shock?Why?As if you don't know anything.
H:Heer..why are you talking like this?
She:Where is the chain i gave you?Your neck is empty.
H:I'm sorry Heer.On the way,somebody snatched it from my neck.I could'nt go behind him as i was in a hurry to go.
She:You are good at cooking stories.
H:Heer!
She:I know everything.I found the chain near Meher's body.
She took the chain from her bag and throws it at his face.It falls down.
Harshad is shocked:How did it reach there?
She:You are acting as if you don't know anything.
H:What are you saying?
Heer:Poor Meher.She forgot her past and decided to start a new life with Preet.But..but you killed her.
Harshad is shocked:What?
Heer:You only killed Meher.While attacking Meher,your chain fell down.God did that purposefully so that the killer will be exposed.
Harshad is shocked:Are you crazy?You are out of sense.
Heer:I'm in my sense.I know the truth.You are the killer.
H:Why should i kill Meher?
Heer:Because you were scared whether Meher will expose you.If you get exposed you won't get me.
H:What are you saying?
Heer:You were Meher's boyfriend.
He is shocked:Me?What nonsense!
Heer:She had told me that she met her boyfriend during a music concert.She was scared whether her boyfriend will kill her.I found your chain near her body.It proves that you were her boyfriend.He is...
H:No...she met her boyfriend during my music concert.But it's not me.
Heer:No,i don't want to hear any tall tales from you.Enough.I can file a case against you.But i'm not doing that now,because my parents are depressed.Case and court will make them more weaker.Now onwards there is no relation between us.
Harshad is shocked.
He pulls her towards him.
H:Look at my eyes.Do you think that i killed Meher?
She looks at his eyes.She becomes weak.Tears fall down.She moves back.
Heer:No more drama Harshad.
H:Heer!Please try to understand me.
She:Get lost.
She goes away.Harshad weeps.He takes the chain from the floor.

After a few months...
The phone is ringing.Heer picks up the phone.
"Heer...i'm Harshad!"
H:Harshad?Why did you call me?Why do you want to desturb me?
He:I heard that you are engaged to Swayam Garewal.
H:Yes.
He:Please don't get married to him.Please don't leave me.
H:Stop it Harshad.I will marry him.
He:You are doing a mistake by marrying him.
H:That mistake will not be worse than loving you.I will marry Swayam.
He:I will not allow this wedding to take place.
Harshad is determined.

Heer gets married to Swayam.
Heer is sitting on the bed as a bride.Her husband Swayam enters the room and sits besides her.He looks at her with romantic eyes.Suddenly somebody knocks at the door.
Swayam gets irritated:Who has come to desturb us?
He opens the door.That was Harshad.Swayam and Heer are shocked.
S:Harshad?Why are you here?
Harshad beats him heavily.Heer cries loudly.

The flashback is over.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Jasmine 😳 woohoo me first

I can't believe it. It's FB 😲 Darn I think I kinda forget the story at the beginning 😕
Whoa you're totally good at shocking us huh. Heer's married 😲
Why couldn't Harshad do anything before and instead stopping by at night 😕
It's a mystery and doesn't really make sense. I guess he has explanation for it.
So Swayam is the killer or somehow related to Meher's murder ?

I want to know what happens again. Pretty please. Hope it won't be a long wait 🤓

Thanks a lot Jasmine. You're awesome Doing great job so far ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
OMG... harshad doing all that shocking.. and swayam..i think he is related somewhat to the murder of meher... awesome update and looking forward to the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
superb update ...
thanks for pm ...
update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
nice update yaarr
eagerly waiting
pls cont soon
thanks for pm...

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