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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
aww..loved the flash back scene..
both falled for each other..
i guess harshad will confess his feeling on that music show..
update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
the scene was too good
Harshad was so cute
Ahem ahem heer started to miss harshad now itself.
nice work dear.
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
#33

Dark shadow Part 4

Thanks a lot 4 ur detailed sincere comments




Monday...
Heer wears a dark pink salwar Kameez.It is sleeveless.She curled her hair.She puts make up.She wears ear hoops.She looks very stylish.
When she enters the college,all the guys look at her like crazy.She iignores them and looks for Harshad.Suddenly Harshad appears before her.She is happy.
H:Hi Heer.
She:Hi..
H:You are looking dashing.
She:Thanks.Today there is a music show.Right?
H:Ya...
She:Let us go to the auditorium together.
H:Sure.
They go the auditorium.It's really crowded.Students are singing.In the crowd she realises that Harshad is missing.
Suddenly she hears an announcement:Now we can hear the magical voice of Harshad Agarwal.
She is surprised:Harshad sings?
Harshad appears on the stage.He sings looking at Heer:Pehli nazar mein...{Race}.
Heer blushes.All are clapping hands and jumping with joy..
After the song,she wants to congratulate Harshad.But she does'nt find him.So she is out of the mood.

Harshad reaches home.
A cute young girl runs to him.She has a sweet apple like face.Her straight hair is soft and silky.She has worn a beautiful dark green salwar kameez which has dark pink border.Her long dangling earrings are pretty.
She:You came brother?
H:Palchan...you are important than anything.You are my dearest little sister.
She smiles.
P:How was the music show?
H:I could perform well.
P:I knew that you will rock..because you are my brother.
He smiles and pats her.
H:So let us celebrate your birthday..
All the family members come around.
H:Driver...please take the cake from the car.
P:You bought cake?
H:Yes,your favourite pink cream cake.
Palchan is excited:wow!
The driver brings the big pink cake.
They fix a candle there.She blows out the candle on the birthday cake.
She cuts the cake.She tries to put the cake piece into Harshad's mouth.But he puts it into her mouth.

Heer at home..
She thinks:I could not congratulate Harshad.He sang so well.Where did he go in between the show?
The next day...
Heer waits in the college compound for Harshad.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
awesome update ...loved it ...
waiting 4 the next update ...
please update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
nice updat yr
pls cont soon
eagerly waiting for next part
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Loved the update...and eagerly looking forward to the next part..


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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Jasmine :D cute ch.4
Wow the music function seemed fun and would like to know more. It was cool Harshad Agarwal is a good singer but just wondered who else performed / participated there? Did Heer make new friends or still shy? Bday party at the end was adorable. Can't wait to find out if Heer will find a way to congratulate her friend and what new revelations waiting for us next.
Thanks a bunch 🤗
Edited by AASUS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
lovely update
can't wait to read the comming update..
pls update soon..
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

awsum update

luved it so much.

countinue soon and

thanks for the pm.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Dark shadow Part 5




Heer can't find Harshad.She goes to her classroom.She is dull.

In the evening,Heer sees Harshad coming out of the classroom.Her face blossoms like a flower.Harshad smiles.
H:Let us go to a classroom.
They go to an empty classroom.
Heer:Yesterday why did you leave so early?
H:Yesterday was my sister Palchan's birthday.She is my pet.
She:Wow!You have a sister?Even i have a sister.Meher.She is my twin sister.
He is surprised:So Seeta aur Geeta?
She:No,we are not identical twins.Palchan studies in the engineering college.Very serious.A complete book worm.Very studious.By the way..your song was too good.I never knew that you are a good singer.
H:What i sang is with honesty.I sang those lines for you.Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya..You did some magic and stole my heart at the first sight itself.
Heer is shocked:What are you saying?
H:Yes,I mean it.
He goes closer to Heer.He is very close to her.She feels his breath.He feels her odour.
H:I love you Heer.
She raises her eyebrows and looks at him.
H:I will wait for your reply.
He goes away.
Heer smiles slowly.

The students go for excursion.
They play Antakshari.Now it is Heer's turn.She looks at Harshad.Her eyes glow.
She sings:Pehla pehla pyar hai..{Hum aapke hain kaun}.
Harshad smiles.

Heer goes to her hostel room.In the dim light she is shocked to see Harshad.
H:Hashard!What are you doing here?Don't you know that it's for girls?
Har:Yes,i know.
H:Then why are you here?Go...
Har:I will go.But before that i want to hear something from you.You sang the song "Pehla pehla pyar hai..."Does that mean that you have fallen in love for the first time?
She blushes.
Harshad notices it.
Har:That means you love me?
She shakes her head with shyness.He smiles.
Har:Now i'm happy.I will go before someone catches me.
She smiles.He leaves the room.

Harshad goes to the terrace.He sees Heer near him.He smiles.They both dance to the song 'Maula Mere Maula...' from the film 'Anwar'.The rain pours down.The rain pours emotion.Then he realises that it was his imagination.

They all return home after the excursion.

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