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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Dark shadow Part 9



Heer's phone rings.She attends the call.
"I'm Doctor Rati.Swayam got up from his bed".
Heer is surprised:Really?
Heer rushes to the hospital.Swayam is standing up and smiling at her.
H:You are ok Swayam?
S:Yes Heer.
H:I'm so happy.

Ranveer thinks:I'm a professional killer.But i make sure that i kill only devils.Why i feel that Harshad is not a devil?

Harshad has been kidnapped and brought to Ranveer's mansion.
H:Who are you?What do you want?
R:I'm Ranveer,a professional killer who is thirsty for your blood now.
Harshad is shocked:Why do you want to kill me?
R:Because i have been paid money for that.
H:Who paid money?
R:Heer.
Harshad is shocked:Heer?
R:Yes,because you killed her sister Meher.
H:No...i did'nt.
R:Then who killed her?
H:I don't know.
R:Why did you attack her husband Swayam?That also on the wedding night...
H:He deserved death.But i allowed him to live only because he is Heer's husband.Because i love her.
Ranveer is shocked.
R:You both were lovers?Strange!Why are you angry with Swayam?Only because he married Heer?
H:No.Swayam is a dirty chap.My sister Palchan is my darling.Once she tried to kill herself.Because her boyfriend deserted her in a harsh manner.Later i realised that her boyfriend was Meher's boyfriend Swayam.So i told Heer not to marry him.But she did'nt listen to me.I became late..so i could'nt stop their wedding.But i could'nt control my anger..Swayam destroyed my sister's life.He cheated Meher.He will spoil Heer's life also.So i beat him cruelly.He does'nt deserve any mercy.
Ranveer is shocked.

Swayam is drinking liqour at home.
H:Why are you drinking like this?
S:I'm healthy now.I want to celebrate this occasion.
He drinks too much.
He goes closer to Heer.Heer is nervous.Because for the first time Swayam is becoming intimate with her.
H:What is this Swayam?You are not in your sense now.You drank too much.
Heer moves away.
S:Where are you going Heer?Do you know how much i love you?Do you know what all i did to gain you?Many ladies have entered my life.I deserted everyone including your sister Meher.
Heer is shocked:What?
S:Meher loved me madly.But it was just a time pass relationship for me.But when i saw you i realised that i'm serious about you.Meher knew that i'm ditching her for you.Before she exposed me to the society,i killed her.
Heer is shocked:You killed Meher?
S:Yes.I veiled my face and snatched Harshad's chain like a thief.I put it near Meher to make you believe that Harshad killed Meher.Thus you broke up with Harshad and married me.
Heer is shocked:That means Harshad is innocent?
S:Harshad...i hate him.His sister Palchan was one of my girlfriends.I left her for you.But that stupid girl tried to commit suicide.Harshad who is an emotional fool begged me to marry his sister.I refused to marry her.So he put me into paralysis.
Heer is shocked.She screams at him:You cheat!You killer!You destroyed many girls' lives.My God!I misunderstood Harshad..i did'nt believe him..i did'nt listen to him.I paid Ranveer to kill Harshad.I don't know if Ranver has killed Harshad or not.
Heer takes her mobile to contact Ranveer.
Swayam snatches her mobile:What are you doing?You want to tell Ranveer not to kill Harshad?Don't tell..let him kill Harshad.He is an obstacle in our life.
H:Give me the mobile.
S:No.
Heer moves to the land phone.Swayam pulls her hair.
It is hurting her:Leave my hair.You are hurting me.
S:Because you are disobeying me.
H:I will call him.I have to save Harshad.
He slaps her.
Heer does'nt back out.Swayam holds her tightly and tries to squeeze her neck:I'm sorry Heer.I love you.But i dont want you to live...if you live you will save Harshad and live happily with him.I will suffer in the jail also.It can't happen.
He squeezes her neck.Somebody pulls Swayam back.He is none other than Harshad.
Heer is surprised:Harshad!You are ok?
Swayam attacks Harshad.Somebody stabs Swayam from behind.Harshad and Heer are shocked.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
nice update
thank god that everything is revealed now
and it is proved that harshad is innocents
pls cont soon thnx 4 pm
Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Jasmine
Amazing twist again
Glad Heer's request to take revenge didn't happen.
Now it's a mystery who stabbed Swayam.
Looking forward to it :D
It's been thrilling , shocking experience so far . Very tragic too bec of innocent ppl's murder and others deeply suffered by after effects .
Keep it up!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
awesome update ...
thanks 4 d pm ...
update soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Dark shadow Part 10

Thanks 4 ur lovely comments.Its d last part.So plz write ur fav charac,fav scene & y u liked it.plz giv a detailed comment






It is Ranveer who stabs Swayam.Heer is shocked.Swayam falls dead.
R:I'm sorry Ma'am.I did'nt kill Harshad.He is innocent.I can't kill nice people.Your husband does'nt deserve to live in this world.He only killed your sister.
Heer's eyes are full of tears due to happiness and relief:Thanks.Thanks for not killing Harshad.I was too late to know the truth.
Heer moves to Harshad:I'm sorry Harshad.I gave you so much of pain.Please forgive me.
H:Why did you suspect me Heer?You even paid Ranveer to kill me.Since he is different from the other killers he left me without killing me.Otherwise...But i forgive you.Because i love you now also.
Heer smiles with tears in her eyes.
H:But sorry...i can't come back to you.
Heer is shocked.
H:Because i can't undergo any more pain.Love gives us pain.My sister Palchan is still sad because of her boyfroend's betrayal.
Heer cries.
Suddenly Heer sees the chain which she gave him around his neck.She becomes happy.

Harshad is decorating the house to celebrate Palchan's birthday.
P:Bhaiyya...have you invited Heer?
H:No.Why should i?
P:You have to invite her.Because i know that still you love her.That is why still you are wearing this chain.
He is upset.

Palchan rings up Heer:Hi..i'm Palchan..Harshad's sister.
H:Hi Palchan.How are you?
P:I'm fine.Today is my birthday.
H:Really?Happy birthday..
P:That is not enough.You must come for my birthday party which is going to be there in the evening.
Heer hesitates thinking of facing Harshad:But Palchan...
P:No excuse...you must come.
H:Ok...i will...

Party...
Heer enters the house.Palchan has worn a yellow party wear with matching accessories while Heer has worn a grand pink salwar kameez with a white shawl.
Heer is finding it difficult to face Harshad.He can't take his eyes off her.But he controls himself and turns off his face.
Palchan goes to Heer:Thanks for coming.
Heer gives a box to her:My birthday gift.I made halwa specially for you.
P:O!Thank you.
She opens the box and tastes it:So tasty.
She goes to Harshad:You eat Heer's halwa.It is so tasty.
Slowly he takes halwa and eats it.He looks at Heer:It is very nice.
She smiles.
Palchan cuts the cake.
All are busy at the party.Harshad avoids Heer completely.Heer becomes upset.She feels lonely.Palchan understands that.
P:Heer...can you please sing a song?
H:I'm not an expert in singing.My sister Meher was better than me in singing.
P:It is ok.You please sing...
Heer looks at Harshad and sings:
Ek Din Aap Yoon Humko Mil Jayenge
Phool Hi Phool Raahon Mein Khil Jayenge
Maine Socha Na Tha...{Yes Boss].
Heer's tears are rolling down.Harshad is very upset.Palchan also feels sad for her.
P:Bhaiyya...she regrets everything.She loves you now.Please go back to her.Don't hurt her.Because you love her deeply.
Harshad goes to Heer.Heer stops singing.
H:Harshad!
He wipes her tears and holds her arms.Then they dance together.They both sing the same song together.Everyone smiles.

Harshad and Heer go to a beautiful beach in the evening.They enjoy the beauty of the waves.They draw a heart on the sand and smile at each other.

The end
Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
nyc update
and also nyc endding
all is well wen d end is well
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

awesome ending ...loved it

thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Jasmine 🤗

Loved the happy ending.
Palchan is very understanding and had the presence of mind to help her bro.
Really sad about MEET dying in this story , some consolation is their actual killer is found.
Misunderstanding between the lovers are cleared.

Jasmine would you keep up the writing. You are very good at writing very gripping scenes, though they are short.
Thank you for it. All the best.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

awsum,beautifull update.

finally every thing is cleared.and that swayam is dead now.

i like the character of ranveer.

u write it very beautifully.plz write more.

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