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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

very nice update tooo good ..

thanks for the pm ...

please update soon ...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

As ranveer said there might be some kind of mystery in the murder of meher and heer's husband..

And meher and heer are twins and loved harshad and heer first meeting .. colliding and falling.. awesome...

Loved the update.. and looking forward to the next part..

Thanks for the pm and do continue soon..

take care

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ragvir92

@ragvir92

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

nice update dear

The flashback scene was nice

I am very sure harshad wouldn't have killed meher.

Its surely a misunderstanding I think.

Anyways let's see what will happen

Hope to have more harshad heer scenes in future

good work

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Dark shadow Part 3

Thx a lot 4 detailed comments

Heer goes to the college canteen to have lunch.Harshad enters the canteen.Their eyes catch each other.A sweet smile is visible on both faces.Harshad sits near Heer.
H:Any problem if i join you?
She smiles:No,it's my pleasure.
H:So you like my company?
She is shy:I'm alone.So i would like to have a company.
He smiles:I will be with you always,you won't be alone.
They both are looking at each other.
Heer thinks:I just met Harshad yesterday.Then why do i feel that there is some other meaning in his sentence?
H:How is college?
Heer:Nice.
H:What have you ordered?
Heer:nothing actually.
H:Shall we order noodles?Here the noodles is very tasty.
She:Sure.
He orders noodles for them.They eat noodles.
They both finish lunch and eave the canteen.
She:Ok...nice to have your company.Let us go back to our classes.
H:Bye...
She:Bye.
She turns back and walks one step forward.Her shawl blows of her shoulders in the wind.Harshad catches it.She can't move.He is conscious now.So he leaves the shawl and walks away.She looks at him walk away.

Harshad is looking at the moon at night.Suddenly Heer appears before him.She has worn a beautiful white salwar kameez which has embroidary work on it.Her narrow dangling bead earring matches her salwar kameez.Her white salwar kameez is shining like a moon.

He can't believe his eyes:Heer!
Suddenly she disappears.
H:Oh!It was my stupid dream.But this dream tells me a lot.

Heer is at home.
H:Oh!I hope this weekend gets over fast.Missing the college very badly.Time is moving very slow.
Meher:Missing the college or missing someone?
Heer is embarassed.
H:What nonsense are you saying Meher?On monday there is a music show for the seniors in the college.Senior students are singing.I'm waiting for that.

Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago

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kiran

@kiran_28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

nice update yaar
luv heer nd harshad's scenes 😉
hmm it seem dat r falling in luv 😳
pls cont soon
thnx 4 pm

Edited by kiran_28 - 13 years ago

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Aww... so harshad and heer liked and somewhere loved each other after their first meeting,, so cute. loved the canteen scene.. also where harshad sees heer... awesome update..loved it

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AASUS

@AASUS

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Hey Jasmine
How are you?
Wow so Heer and Harshad were friends hmm
Cute canteen scene. Liked Meher teasing Heer. It was cute to see Heer being impatient to meet her new friend. I wonder what really happened that made them enemies now :/
Dream scene about Heer was interesting.
I'm curious to kniw what'll happen in the music show. Heer is new. Is her friend senior in college ? He seemed more relaxed, where as Heer seem shy.

Thanks a bunch for Ch 3 :D no one has been as generous as you are - giving back to back updates. :D The story is getting interesting. Let's see what's up next!

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luvharshiti

@luvharshiti

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

awesome update ...loved it ...

thanks for the pm ...

please update soon ...

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kiran

@kiran_28

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

hey i hv edited my comment on pg 4

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: AASUS
Hey Jasmine
How are you?
Wow so Heer and Harshad were friends hmm
Cute canteen scene. Liked Meher teasing Heer. It was cute to see Heer being impatient to meet her new friend. I wonder what really happened that made them enemies now :/
Dream scene about Heer was interesting.
I'm curious to kniw what'll happen in the music show. Heer is new. Is her friend senior in college ? He seemed more relaxed, where as Heer seem shy.

Thanks a bunch for Ch 3 :D no one has been as generous as you are - giving back to back updates. :D The story is getting interesting. Let's see what's up next!

I wrote it long ago.So i just have to post it.Thats y i'm able 2 giv quick updates😊