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kiran_28 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
wow seems interesting
pls do cont it soon
want to read more
thanks 4 pm 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12

nice start.seems very interesting.

heer wanted ranveer to kill harshad.😲

because he made her husband paralysed and killed meher.

surly there is some misunderstanding.

now waiting eagerly for the next.

plz update asap and

many many thanks for the pm.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start
heer married to shyam? and harshad killed her sis?
i hope its a misunderstanding and heer will come to know before some badthing happns..
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jasmine
No I haven't read before judt found out when you messaged this time :) Please don't be sorry.
I see you after long time so said that :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey ... it's an awsum story ... Sumthing different ... Thriller type ... Plz do continue soon & thnx 4 d PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow this seems really interesting
In first shot itself heer want to kill harshad
very interesting.
Love to read further
Thanks 4 the pm.
Take care and do continue
Its awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello friends...i thank you each & everyone for reading & commenting on my ff.You all encouraged me a lot.I hope i'll get support in the coming episodes also.

Plz send me friend's request.so that i can pm u when i update.

Dark shadow Part 2



A horrible scene attacks Heer's eyes and mind.
Heer enters Meher's room:Meher!
She is shocked to see Meher lying down bathed with blood.Her stomach has been stabbed with knife by someone.
Heer screams:Meher!
Heer touches Meher's face:Meher..
M:Heer...
Meher breaths.That was her last breath.Heer sees a chain with small pendant lying near Meher.Heer is shocked:Oh!This is the chain which i gave Harshad.That means Harshad did this.
Heer cries.

Present..
Heer weeps:Harshad killed Meher..because he wanted to drive her away from his life.Only if Harshad dies i will get peace of mind.
Ranveer thinks:So strange!There is some mystery behind the whole story.

Heer is resting at home.She sheds tears thinking about the past.

Heer is dressing up.She wears a yellow salwar.She brushes hair and ties it.She makes her eyes beautiful by putting kajal.She wears earrings.She searches for bangles.Meher enters the room.
M:Are you not reay yet?
H:I'm searchiing for my yellow bangles.
M:Oh!You are going to college to study.
H:I know.Though you are my twin sister you behave like an elderly woman.I'm going to college for the first time.It's a chance to dress up.I'm already fed up of wearing school uniforms for many years.
Meher laughs.
Heer finds the yellow bangles in the cupboard:Wow!Got it.
She wears it.She looks at the clock.
H:Oh!It's late.
She rushes to the college.

While climbing steps,she hits a guy who was climbing the steps in a hurry.Thus they both slip and roll down the steps together.He is on top of her.He moves away.
He:I'm sorry.
H:I'm sorry.It's my mistake.I only hit you i guess.
He:No.It's my mistake.I climbed the steps in a hurry as it's becoming late.Luckily there is no injury.By the way what is your name?New admission?
H:I'm Heer.New admission.
He:Hi..im Harshad.
They shake hands.Without their knowledge their eyes get stuck up to each other.

Edited by jasminerahul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update yaar
i think there is sum misunderstanding between Heer and Harshad
nywz luv the fb scene
pls cont it soon
thank 4 pm
Edited by kiran_28 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update
loved the flash back scenes..
but i still dont think that harshad is behind meher's murder..may be he tried to save her.
update next part soon..
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jasmine more detail and past revealed on ch 2.
So there might be a misunderstanding about who killed Meher. So sad and tragic.
Wonder if Harshad and Heer became friends or not? Did Meher know about them?
Is Ranveer going to help Heer to unravel the mystery?
Can't wait to see what you'll tell us next.
Thank you and keep going.

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