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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: LuvAdditiGupta

I am really glad that there r no villains in this FF...jaan chooti. 😉

Loved d beginning. Do continue soon.
Update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: additi10

Lovelyyy...:)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: HARSHITI12

nice concept
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thank u so much di..updating nw...will add u fr sure
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: premiti

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@kiran @priyahmt...
updating nw..really sry to keep u'll waiting...catching ears...so sorry
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Originally posted by: repunzell


yaayyy u're updatinggg😃!!!

a longer oneee plzzz as a compensation😉😆!!!


yeah di... thank u so much..and pakka a longer update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi every1 really sorry had to keep u all waiting
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#69
here i m with the next chapter
not so good
coz i m very bad at writings
just tried

here is the link to previous chapter
(jyoti di ur idea thank u so much di0


chapter 2

They both were brought back to the world..when the pandit ji told them to stand for 7 rounds

They took the 7 rounds of the fire around'taking 7 vows promising to be next to each other in all wonders of life. In ups and downs, in sad and happy moments. To share with each other..to trust each other. To take care of each other .and fulfill all their duties towards each other. may be they did not know each other, but relation can be developed at any time.with these feelings in heart they vowed to keep each other happy always. Prem was told to apply sindhoor in heer's mang' which is considered to be a blessing by god made out of the 5 components of the earth 'He took his hand forward..Promising to give her all the happiness of life. Heer closed her eyes. Some sindhoor fell on her nose. So one lady said " you are very lucky your husband will love u very much" heer just blushed. He put the mangalsutra around her neck which is considered so pure and a symbol of the marriage. All the rituals of the marriage were completed. It was time for the bidai. balraj just hugged heer. She was crying.. he remembered all her childhood memories. Today she was going away from him forever. But he had to send her. He went to prem and said " beta today I m giving the most precious thing of my life to you. Take care of her. She will never tell her sadness to any 1. She will take care of every 1 but not her. I m handling all my responsibility to u today and I know I will never let me regret my decision" prem just smiled and nodded. Lalit came and hugged him. and assured him not to worry about anything. Balraj smiled looking at his friend. Gay3 came and took heer to the car and made her sit. She told prem to go and sit next to her. later they bid a good bye to every 1 and left to the juneja mansion.

He did not know how to console her but also he could not let her cry. He had to do something ;he decided to speak up " heer I know you are feeling very sad. And you love your dad a lot. And I know u have left everyting behind and come to accept a new family also I know you are missing your mom very much, but trust me today is the last time u r crying. Now u r my responsibility and I will never allow a drop of tear to fall out of your eyes. I promise you heer I will never ever let u feel that u r alone. This everything happened in such a hurry. We dint even get time to think anything. May be don't even know each other properly. But as u know there is always so much of time to know to understand. And you have so many of us. Its not easy for you but I know its neither difficult. And he stopped noticing that she was just starring and had stopped crying. He did not know how he had spoken so much coz he had never ever dne it in his life. His words did some magic. she had stopped crying.she just gave him a smile. He was thankful to god that she had stoped crying because he could not see her crying face.With these thought they soon reached the juneja mansion. They were welcome by gay3 and other famil members. she told heer to put her hands on the wall printed in that red liquid. Later she told heer to slightly throw the rice pot and keep her legs in that red liquid and come inside.

Heer followed her mom in laws instructions and came inside. They were lead to the sitting room. And made to sit. Soon kulraj came with a big thali filled with milk. Harman and preet " di yeh kisliye?" veera " bhai isme abhi di ek ring dalegi bhai aur bahbhi ko is main haat dalke ise search karna hai" kulraj " aur jo koi jitega vo puri zindagi raj karega" preet " okay! so prem bhayya is only going to win" Harman " offcourse preet pem bhai is only going to win" veera " off course heer bhabhi is going to win"

Gay3 " I m also on my daughters side" preet " yeh kya ma bahoon aa gaye to apne ladle ki side chod di?" gay3 " yeh meri bahu nahi beti hai.aur main mere beti ki side loongi" rishi ( kulraj and kiran's son)came running " aur mein bhi heer aunty ki side main". Lalit " are heer aunty nahi heer mami" kiran " aur yeh kya kal tak to sabse jyada prem mamu ko pasand karte the abhi mami aa gayi to side change?"

Rishi " prem mamu to abhi bhi mere fav hai lekin second fav. Heer mami is my most fav" he turned towards heer " kyun mami aap mere saat khelonge na?" heer nodded her head in a yes caressing his cheek with love. All others laughed while prem just stared at his wife. Kulraj " iska matlab apko mami sirf khelne ke liye chahiye?" rishi " no mom mami mujhe chocolates bhi to deti hai" kulraj " ohhh!!!" veera " di chalo na game shuru karte hai" lalit " ha bhai chalo". Gay3 dropped the ring inside the thali. Both premeer were trying to find it out. Suddenly both of them raised their hands up to gather. Preet " are yeh kya both of them took it out at the same time" gay3 " that means both will always be to gather no matter what will come. Both will always be together in all phases of life" veera " bhai bhabhi ap ki jodi to heaven mein bani hai"

Preet " aur nahi to kya". Heer was staring down while prem was going all red. kiran " sale sahib aap itna kyun Sharma rahe hai ?" gay3 " abhi mere bte aur bahu ko pareshan karna band karo". Preet" abhi chalo sab line main khade raho, bhabhi ko sabka official intro dena hai" veera " pata hai bhai". Kulraj and kiran came infront " heer tum hum dono ko to janti hon..phir bhi.. main tumhari nanand hoon. Yeh mere pati parmeshwar. Aur yeh shaitan rishi. Rishi " mami main to aapko pehle se hi janta hoon" kiran " are hume pata hai lekin ab aapk mami ko hi to kaho" rishi " hi mami" heer said a hi. rishi "..lekin mujhe ek confusion hai?" preet " aab kya huva?" rishi " kuch din pehle to yeh aunty this abhi mami kaise ban gayi?"

Preet " ab hum kya kar sakte hai? Apke prem mamu ko yeh itni pasand ayi to apke mama ki wife apki mami hi hui na?" he and veera shared a hi5. Rishi " okay but mami u the best". Kulraj " heer iski baton mein mat ana jaroor kam hoga iske liye itna maska laga raha hai" rishi " no mom..dekye preet mamu ne kaha ki prem mamu ko heer mami pasand agayi who bhi bohat jyada..pehle mami nehi thi to mamu meri har bat sunte the abhi mami aa gayi hai to agar mamu se koi kam hai to pehle mami ko patana hoga na." prem just started down while heer's cheeks were glowing red. Kulraj " bohut bolta hai yeh ladka aaj kal. Bilkul preet mamu par gaya hai."

Harman " vo to he" Harman " chalo sab chodo ab meri bari.. bhabhi I m Harman. Aap ka devar. Welcome to our family". Preet " bhai aap bhabhi ko bhabhi kyun bula rahe hon aap to unse bade hon?" veera " preet bhai my idiot brother lekin Harman bhai prem bhayya se chote hai"

Preet " okay?" heer spoke up " hmm.. agar apko problem nahi hai to kya aap ko Harman bhayya bula sakti hoon?" Harman " sure bhabhi" kulraj " yeh to achi baat hai agar prem ne agar tujse kuch kaha to tu Harman se keh sakti hai. Vo vakeel hai" preet " di aisa kabhi hoga nahi" veera " vo bhala kyun ?" preet " prem bhai tab kuch kahenge na jab ye ek dusre se baat karenge. Yeh dono itna sharmate hai" lalit " aan tum dono mere bte aur bahu ko tang karna band karo" preet " thik hai chand" lalit " preet aaj nahi?" gay3 " tum dodno phirse shuru mat ho jaana" preet came infront hugged heer and said " hi bhabhi main hoon preet apka sabse chota sweet devar. Sabse hatke. Agar apko koi bhi help chahiye to aap mujse keh sakti hai" kulraj " preet kahi ulta na ho ja ye". All laughed now it was veera's turn she introduced herself. And then since it was already late gay3 told veera and kulraj to take heer to the room.

They took heer towards prem's room which was now their room. They made her to adjust her on the bed. Kulraj said " I know how u r feeling today. New environment new place new people and u know us just from one week. I know u r missing ur house; but don't worry u'll never feel as u r some where else. After some days u'll forget also that u r not in ur family. And as for ma, vo baki mother in laws ki tarah nahi hai" veera and heer both laughed. Veera " are di jinke bare mein janna hai unke bare mein to batayye" kulraj " han han unke bare mein bhi batate hai. Prem as u will be observing only he is very shy person. He don't open up so much. He will never share his pains with any 1. He will care for every 1 except himself. He is just like u." to this heer put her head down in shyness. Veera : bhabhi ap bhi bhai ki tarah kitna sharmati hai. Don't worry puri raat baki hai." Saying this both got up to leave and turned and wished her best of luck. Heer shyly smiled. Kulraj and veera closed the door and went. She was nervous. She did not know what to do. She kept playing with the ends of her dupatta. And waiting for him.

After being teased so much by his family he entered his room.he was so nervous. He did not know what to do. Like firstly he was shy to speak with girls. But she was his own wife. And he knew she had the same feelings. He saw her sitting on the bed. She saw him coming towards the bed. Her heart beats increased. He came and sat on the other side of the bed. Both were nervous. Prem did not now from where to start the conversation. He just spoke " heer I know u r very nervous. Even I m also feeling the same here. I know we don't even know each other properly may be. As far as I know I have just spoken to you once or twice and today once in the car. And the other times was once When I had asked you whether you wanted to marry me or not and u had said a yes. I felt good coz I dint want to force you with this marriage. I just wanted to say like before starting as a husband or wife I just want us to start with friendship know each other well understand each other and then move with our relation ship. I just want you to be comfortable with our relationship. I know its not all easy for you also. Everything is new here but don't worry I will never let you regret your decision. I hope you understand what I want to say. It is that I want both of us to understand each others like dislikes everything. And I know u r more nervous because next week are ur final exams also we will be shifting to delhi form here. You will be away from ur father. But I will never let u feel that u r alone. And he stoped thinking he was only speaking from so long. God knows how he had spoken so much today ; how he had opened up so much. He turned and looked at her. there was just a pleasant expression on her face. He thought may be she did not like what he had spoken so he said " heer tum kuch bologi nahi" heer said " pata hai jab mein kamre main ayi this to main bohut nervous thi lekin aap ne to meri sari tension hi kam kar di. Mein bhi hamare rishte ko kuch time dena chahati hoon. Thank you apne meri sari tension kam kar di" prem just smiled at her innocence and brought his hand infront " so friends?" heer looked up at him and smiled saying " yeah friends". Prem " mujhe pata hai ki kulraj di ne tumhe sabkuch bata diya hoga ki main kitna shy hoon lekin main apni kuch batein tum se share karna chahata hoon. Maine meri puri padhayi boys school main complete ki. isiliye ladkiyon se bat karne se itna sharmata hoon. Pg complete karne ke baad mein ne humara business joint kar liya" aur abhi vahi kar raha hoon. Main drink nahi karta. Collage mein ek baar dosto ne cigratte smoke karne ke liye kaha to maine kar diya. Lekin jab ma ko pata chala to vo bohut hurt hui. Maine tab unse vaada kiya main cigratte ko kabhi haat nahi lagaunga. Main maa se bohut pyaar karta hoon. Uske baad di se. heer " pata hai" prem " jaroor di ne bataya hoga" heer just smiled. Prem " tum kuch nahi bataogi" heer " maine apni school aur yahi simla se puri ki. Aur jaise apko pata hai is saal main final year main hoon aur meri exams agle hafte hai. Mujhe spiritual books padhna pasand hai. Jab 7 sal ki thi tab ma chod ke chali gayi tab se dad hi mere sab kuch hai. Unhone kabhi mujhe akele feel hone nahi diya. Never had seen such family bonding, love so much happiness but aap ki vajahse mujhe itna bada parivar mila so thank you." Prem " abhi u say v are friends and saying thank u also" heer smiled.prem " Hmm.. mujhe lagta hai abhi ke liye ye bohot hai. Kal subaha baat karenge. Tum thak gayi ho na. jake change karlo. Heer " aap bhi". Prem took his clothes and went to change. As soon as he came changing he told heer to go and change" heer gave him her smile and went to change. When she came out she saw prem taking a pillow and bedsheet and going to sleep on the couch. He looked at heer and said " heer tum bed pe so lena mein yahan couch pe so jaunga.good night" heer " prem aap couch pe kyun so rahe hon. Mujhe aap ke saat bed share karne main koi problem nahi hai. Aur vaise bhi hum dost hai na" prem looked at her and asked " are u sure?" heer just smiled and said a yes. prem got up from the couch and slept at one end. Both of them wished each other good night and went to sleep"



Next morning heer woke up.. and saw her husband lying beside her. she really felt good the way he had explained to her all things the previous night. May be she had found a best friend in him.. she saw the time..she got up and went to the washroom to get ready as it was her first day today. Hearing some noise prem got up. He was expecting heer to be at his side. But she was not there. Then he noticed that she was in the washroom. He was waiting for her outside.. and there was a knock on the door. He went and opened it. Kulraj was standing there. Kulraj " kyun bacchu kaha khoye hue the. Kab se knock kar rahi hoon. Maine disturb to nahi kiya na?" kulraj said while letting out a small giggle. Prem felt shy and said " nahi di vo main abhi utha hoon. Actually heer is getting ready so waiting for her to finish." Kulraj " okay chalo abhi jaldi se niche aa jana hum sab pooja ke liye wait karrahe hai" prem " thik hai di..as soon as she finishes we both will come downstairs.okay?" kulraj patted his cheek and said okay and was about to go down turned around and said " hope u had great time yesterday" prem just looked down and closed the door behind him. As he entered he saw heer coming out wearing a red saree. She was simply looking stunning meaning he did not have words. She was just looking so beautiful. He kept on staring at her. but soon her voice brought him back to the world. Prem " tumne kuch kaha" heer " ji vomera ho chukka hai. Aap jakar change karlo." Prem " okay . but before he went he said " heer " which made heer to turn. Heer " ji?" prem " tum bohut acchi lag rahi hon" and went inside to change. Heer just blushed and went and set near the dresser. She got ready. She took a pich of sindoor and kept it in her maang. She wore some jewellery. And then was putting a necklace but was not able to. Prem came out and saw his wife struggling with it. So he came and stood behind her and asked " main help kardoo?" heer just smiled. Prem moved her hair to one side. And help her put the necklace. She could feel him very near to her. so she just closed her eyes. Prem " ye lo hogaya " heer said thank u" prem " phirse thank u?" heer " sorry?" prem " sorry?" acha chalo niche chalet hai. Both left to go down.

When both want down they saw the whole family waiting for the morning pooja. Gay3 came Infront and took some kajal and put on heer's cheek " bohut sundar lag rahi hon. Beautiful kisi ki najar na lage". And took her to the pooja ghar. As it was their first day after marriage gay3 told prem and heer to do the pooja. As they finished it, heer gave prasad to every 1. Later all assembled in dining room. All ladies went to kitchen. Here in the dining room preet " dad aaj breakfast ke liye itna time kyun lag raha hai?" Harman " ha dad sab kabse to kitchen me gaye huye hai.. what are they doing from so long. I m so hungry." Lalit " sabro karo sabra aaj heer sabke liye kuch mitha bana rahi hai" preet " phir pb ki to nikal padi. Bhayya pet bharke khana aaj pehli baar bhabhi hum sab ke liye kuch bana rahi hai" Harman " vo to khayenge hi .. agar acha bhi nahi bana hoga tab bhi bhai bhabhi ke bare mein soch soch kar khayenge kyun bhai?'

Prem was about to get up from the chair to avoid this situation. Preet " bhag kaha rahe hon aap?? Baithiye baithiye."

In the kitchen

Gay3"Heer tu aaj mithe mein kya bana rahi hai?". Heer " ma main kheer banana ki soch rahi thi.." veera " ha banayye bhabhi kheer hi banayye" kulraj " and prem also loves it" gay3 " ab shuru mat ho jana" kulraj " okay ma" they left heer in the kitchen to prepare.

About half an hour later heer came out holding a tray in her hand. She started giving it to every one. Lait was about to take one. Heer " dad ye apke liye nahi hai" lalit " kyun bhala mujhe bhi apni bahu ke haat se bani hui kheer khane ka hak hai" gay3 " ji nahi apko doctor ne mana kiya hai na" lalit " are yaar ab kya main aise hi tum logon ke chere dekhte rahoon" veera " ji dad" heer came infront with a small bowl of kheer in it and offered it to lalit. Harman " are bhabhi aap yeh kya kar rahi hon. Inki baton main mat aye hamesha aise hi karte hai" heer " actually wo Harman bhayya isme sugar nahi hai yeh sugar free hai" lalit " tum bhi inke saat?" gay3 " jo mil raha hai vo chup chap khayye aur beta yeh sab karne ki kya jaroorat thi?" heer " ma vo aap sab khate to dad akele reh jate na to acha nahi lagta" lalit " mere is ghar mein sirf meri bahoon aur mera beta hi hai.. tum sab mere dushman hon.. love u beta" gay3 " ab bas khana shuru kijiye"

Heer was a bit nervous coz she did not know how it was prepared. Prem took the first soon and it was so yummy. He loved it. He looked at others faces. They were eating while making weird faces. He did not understand y. coz he found it very tasty. And here heer was getting all nervous because she could see the family's reaction. She thought it is not nice. Lalit said " heer yeh kheer tumne banayi hai?" heer with fear " ji dad" gay3 said " sachem tumne banayi hai?" heer was getting more and more tensed. Prem inturupted " ap sab yeh kyun pooch rahe hon.achi to bani hai?" kiran " acha abhi se taraf dari karna shuru ??" prem " jiju?" gay3 " prem ek minute main heer se baat kar rahi hoon." She turned towards heer " kya tum pehle kitchen main gayi thi?" heer was now totally on the verge of crying. She was firstly nervous. She answered " jee ma" veera " abhi ma bas bhi karo nahi to yeh ro dengi" all started laughing. Heer looked at them in surprise as well as prem. Lalit " kheer bohot achi bani hai.. hum sab yahi kehna chahate the" heer felt very good. Even prem started smiling. Preet " agar aap kuch der aur choop rehte to ye sachem yahan ro deti. Aur ap sab logon ne prem bhai ka chehra dekha tha?" veera " han bhai. Aur bhabhi se jyada to inko fikar ho rahi thi" kulraj " mujhe dar that heer ki bajay ye na rona shuru kar de". Lalit " beta idhar aao" heer went infront. Lalit removed s gift and handed it to heer. " ye lo beta" heer " lekin mai kaise?" gay3 " le le beta shagun hota hai" heer accepted. She received gifts from others also except prem. Kiran " are prem tum kuch nahi donge?"

Prem " actually jiju mujhe pata nahi tha" preet " are pb ye to cheating hai hum sab ne kuch diya aur aap nahi doge" Harman " are pb personal mein denge sab ke samne thodi hi de sakte hai.. samja karo baat ko." Preet " okay yeh baat hai". Prem just excused himself by saying he has some work and left the room while heer to change the topic said. " di vo rishi kahan hai subhe se dikhayi nahi diya" kulraj. " are vo to so rahan hai". heer " okay" gay3 " beta tu yeh sab chod jake apni padayi kar. Agle hafte se exams hai na." heer " ji ma" preet " bhabhi agar help chahiye to pb hai. unhone bhi mba hi kiya hai. unse poonch lena. Aur apna gift lena mat bhoolna". Heer just ran from there feeling all shy. Kiran " bhagwan jane dono ka kya hoga?"

As they al were sitting they heard a knock on the door..

" kya main aa sakta hoon?"

It was balraj standing there. Lalit " are ballu u dnt have to ask like this.. and vaha kyon khade hon andar aaooo na" lalit went and hugged balraj.. gay3 greeted him. Preet kulraj kiran veera and Harman came and touched his feet. Lalit " aur tu kab se aisi batein karna laga.. bachpan ka dost hai meraa ghar main an eke liye permission chahiye tujhe?" balraj " tab baat alag thi abhi beti ka sasural hai na.." lalit " tu bhi kya batein karta hai.. aur ab vo meri bhi beti hai.." balraj " pata hai .. isiliye to dar nahi lag raha hai..main top bas yeh uski kuch kitabe dene aya tha.."

Lalit " kitabe dene ya usse milne?" balraj " actually dono. Itne vaqt taq kabhi use door nahi raha na..isliye yaad arahi thi..kitabe to sirf bahana tha" gay3
" bhai sahib aap bhi kya aap jab chahiye apni beti se milne aa sakte hai.." balraj " pata hai jab heer ki shadi ki baat ati thi tab hamesha dar lagta tha ki kya vo shadi ke baad khush reh payegi lekin aab mujhe koi dar nahi hai use mujhse bhi jyada pyaar karne vala parivar mila hai. betiyan kab badi ho jati hai pata hi nahi chalta. aur pata hai use sab se jyada ek maa ki kami thi lekin ab vo bhi kami puri ho gayi.. maine heer ki ankhon main gay3 ke liye vo pyaar dekha hai jisse vo hamesha chahathi thi.." he turned towards gay3 " thank u bhabhiji aap ki vajahse meri beti ko maa ka pyaar milega" lalit " are yeh tu kaisi batein kar raha hai" gay3 " aap dono yeh sab batein chodiyeh bahisab meri beti nein aaj pehli baar mitha banaya hai.. aap baithiye mein abhi lekar ati hoon.." balraj " kya sachem heer ne banaya hai tab to hum jaroor khayenge.. vaise vo hai kaha.. aur prem bhi dikhayi nahi de raha..?" preet " uncle vo dono apne kamre main hai.. kuch time spend kar rahe hai" harman " chup kar preet.. actually uncle vo heer bhabhi ki exams hai na to vo padhayi kar rahi hai.. aur prem bhayya apne kam main busy honge" kulraj " rishi bte jake mamu aur mami ko bula lana.. preet tu bhi jao inke saath"

Here in premeer room

Prem was busy on his laptop .. so heer quietly went to the suitcase and started searching for her books' and to her badluck she was not getting it.. she was really tensed.. prem saw his wife so tensed about something so he went and stood behind her and said " heer" the sudden sound made heer nervous and she lost her balance and was about to fall but prem caught her.. heer was standing closing her eyes.. but when she realized that she was not on the ground and was in the arms she opened her eyes.. she saw her husband staring at her both were busy in their eye lock session.. they were brought back to the world by the knock on the world.. it was preet and rishi..preet shut rishi's eyes with one hand and with the other he covered his eyes..

Rishi" mamu hum ne kuch nahi dekha kasamse.." preet " maine bhi nahi hum to bas abhi aye the.." prem and heer both felt embarresed and made heer to stand.. heer made herself proper..

Rishi " aap dono ka hogaya ho to kya hum ankhen khol saktein hai.." and preet removed his hands and both of them started giggling' prem " preet jaisa tum soch rahe hon vaisa kuch nahi hai.. vo actually" preet " bhayya hume sab pata hai.. hum to yahan yeh batane aye the ki niche balraj uncle aye hai to aap dono ko niche bulaya hai.. rishi " lekin mamu lagta hai yeh busy hai hum jake batadetein hai niche.." heer" kya papa aye hai?" rishi " ha mami" heer picked rishi in her hands and ran downwards.. prem and preet were about to go..

Preet " bhayya agli bar se darwaza band kijiyega ya phir bahar board laga dijiye ga ki I m busy.. hum samaj jayenge" prem looked at preet angrily.. so preet just ran from there..

Heer came running down..she kept rishi and went and hugged balraj. " papa aap kab aye.. apne bataya nahi ki.." balraj ' main abhi ayah un beta bas teri yaad aa rahi thi..aur vaise teri kitabein bhi ghar pe hi thi..to socha tujse mil bhi ata hoon.." till then prem came.. he bent forward and took balraj's blessings and hugged him.." kiase hon app papa" balraj " maim thik hoon beta.."

He turned towards heer " beta aur tune to kitni bhadiya kheer banayi hai.. mujhe nahi pata that ki my angel daughter knows to cook also." heer just smiled..

He made prem and heer to sit..all the members were sitting and chit chatting..later it was time to leave..he hugged prem and heer.. and bid a good bye to every 1..


chalo i will also bid u all a good bye
the update not so good
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Edited by vrushika - 13 years ago
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oops double postt😛!!!

was soo happyyy to see the update😆
Edited by repunzell - 13 years ago

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