My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER #2 Pt57 Pg20

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

nice part dear...................... 👍🏼 waiting continue soon.......................

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Dolly

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

awesome......cant wait to see wats dat additi saw...
nd ya dis dream really is freaking me out..bt cant wait to see it...
nd m so sorry abt ur lose...

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sneha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

hey plse add me awesum ff but watz is de secret de hospital one

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hani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

please jaldi se iss ff ka update bhejo.i m dieing to know d nexy part👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Anumta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

PART54

Additi in school

Additi enters in her class n takes a seat. She takes keen interest in the story being taught in class. After sometime with permission of teacher she goes to washroom.

Additi in washroom
Additi washes her hands n poses in front of mirror. She then straightens her pony n poses again giving cute n funny expressions. Suddenly she notices something strange n weird. She turns to her right n is in a complete shock to see her reflection. Additi with an open mouth, her eyeballs are about to touch the floor. It is no one but Additi herself standing right in front of her. Additi narrows her eyes n stares. To her surprise her reflection does the same. She moves her right finger towards her reflection n it does the same. Additi in fear closes her eyes thinking it's a nightmare as she saw two reflections at same time. One was in mirror while the other was right in front of her. While Additi tightly closed her eyes, the reflection runs away! Additi opens her eyes n finds things back to normal. She took a deep breath n says: oh god yeh to ek nightmare tha, meri do do reflections!

Additi in class

Additi enters in class n takes her seat. After sometime a teacher makes her entry n tells the other teacher abt the new student n points out to a girl sitting in 2^nd row. The teacher is astonished to see additi in 5^th row n the new student in 2^nd row. For the next two periods she teaches english to class n reads a new chapter.

Recess time!

Additi hangs around with her friends n she feels thirsty so she leaves them to get herself water. Additi drinks some water from the gallon which was under the shade in corner of the ground. On her way back she stops in middle as she again see herself standing right infront of her. Just then a boy quickly passes by n Additi realizes that the girl who was standing infront of her n now is lying on ground (due to boy's push) is not her reflection but a girl in real. Now Additi understood that its a look-alike thing which gave her headache since morning. Additi offers her hand to help out the girl. She stands up n for few minutes they just gaze at each other.

Additi: tum kaun ho? aur mere jaisi kyun dikhti ho?

The girl feels shy n doesnt answers back

Additi: bolo na

A teacher passes by n both the girls greet her.

Additi surprisingly looks at the girl n smiles.

Additi: oh to tum bol sakti ho, thankgod mujhe laga ke tum goongi ho

The girl just smiles

Additi offers a handshake n introduces herself

Additi: hi i am additi

They shake hands n girl says: hi i am chahat

Additi: oh chahat, nice name. Chalo hum wahan bethte hain.

Chahat: hum pehle mil chuke hain

Additi: haan toilet mein. Main woh meeting kabhi nahin bhooloongi itna darr gayi thi by god!

Chahat: mujhe laga ke main apne aap ko dekh rahi hoon

Additi: lekin hum ek jaise kaise dikh sakte hain?

Chahat: ab yeh to bhagwaan ji se poochna parega

Additi notices a scratch on Chahat's arm

Additi: tumhein to chot lagi hai

Chahat: nahin its okay

Additi: koi okay wokay nahin, chalo nurse room mein

They both go to nurse room for bandage.

The nurse applies ointment on Chahat's arm while she tightly closes her eyes

Additi: dard ho raha hai?

Chahat: thora sa par darr lag raha hai

Additi: aunty please aaraam se lagana

Nurse: yeh aapki sister hai?

Additi: nahin

She then hugs Chahat n says: par sister se kuch kam bhi nahin hai

It was a cute sisters moment!

They leave nurse room n Chahat asks: tum ne nurse aunty ko aise kyun kaha?

Additi: kyunki hum sisters nahin hain but i love u like a sister

Chahat: agar hum sisters nahin hain to kya hain?

Additi: friends

Chahat: lekin hamari friendship kab huwi? hum friends kaise bane?

Additi: chahat friendship to bas ho jaati hai, is mein when and how jaise questions nahin hote. Yeh koi english ki class thori na hai.

Chahat: oh additi english teacher wait kar rahi hongi, lets go.

Juneja house

Premeer's room

Heer was cleaning her cupboard when Prem enters n hugs her from back.

Prem: tumhein pata hai additi ke baare mein mujhe sab se acha kya lagta hai

Heer: kya?

Prem: yahi ke woh bilkul mere jaisi hai, uski harkaten uski baatein mujhe mere bachpan ki yaad dilaati hain

Heer: haan harkaton mein to woh tumhari carbon copy hai

Prem looked skeptical

Heer: tumhari tarhaan bohot sharaarti hai, itna pareshaan karti hai ke poocho mat

Prem looked sad n angry

Heer: pata hai jab tum mere saath nahin the to additi ne ek baar bhi tumhein miss karne nahin diya

Prem: acha to tum ne mujhe miss nahin kiya

Heer smiles n runs around while Prem chases her

Eventually Heer finds herself in Prem's arms, during all this a vase from the table falls on floor. Flowers fall on Premeer's faces n Prem moves Heer to the other side, both didn't got hurt n were safe while vase was in pieces on floor.

Prem: thankgod hum bach gaye, agar yeh vase mujhe lagta to tum vidhwa ho jaati

Heer: prem doobara aisa mat kehna

Prem: oh sorry, aur agar yeh tumhein lagta to main vidhwa ho jata!

Heer: prem tum vidhwa nahin ho sakte

Prem: rite, tumhare liye har saal karwachauth ka vrat jo rakhta hoon

Premeer have an eyelock session after which they get lost in a deep hug.

Precap:

Additi says in heart: I hope aaj mama jaldi se aajaye, main unhein chahat se milaaongi. Tab mama ko bhi yakeen hoga ke god ne meri wish poori kardi.

Prem: heer tum aaj additi ko lene school nahin jaaogi

Heer looks confused

Edited by zehra-pisces - 15 years ago

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

awesomeeeeeeeee too good waitingggggggg for next

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Anumta

@zehra-pisces

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeee too good waitingggggggg for next

thanks dear n sorry for taking 5 weeks to update, will try to update next part soon

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Anumta

@zehra-pisces

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya
awsum update.......

additi is so sweet....

hp evr thing is fine......

thx for da pm....

feelin sad u hv to go to such rought times......dnt worry evythin wil be fine....

thanks for liking the update, agreed that additi is sweetypie n my fav character in this ff, thanks for ur console things are getting back to normal

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Anumta

@zehra-pisces

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: angelina_angel
i just read ur ff now
from the 1st chapter till now
its awsone!! n must say it was an awsome one u updated just now!!!
but wasnt it short n thr was hardly any nice romantic premeer scene!!!
guess aditi's gonna see chahat in the skl
do add me to ur pm list

srry to know about ur hard times
n more for knowing tht u still updated!!!

gr8 to know that u read ff in one go, i know it was a short update n couldnt include premeer romantic scene in it but i've included in next part so hoping that u'll like it

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Anumta

@zehra-pisces

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: PremHeer_Chahat
first i am so sorry to hear about your cousin..:((
awesome update
loved it
please don't let anything happen to Additi
and who is the new character???
thanks for the pm
pm me

thanks for loving it, dont worry dear ur additi is in safe hands😉 n nothing will happen to her, this dream mystery will later be revealed. new character introduced in next part, i hope u like it

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