A very big thank you to all the people who read my ff and comment on it. I remember the day when this ff came into being. My cousins were in village n they told me the news of a 5 or 6 years leap soon to happen in kis desh. It was June 19 2009 n I was terribly shocked to see Veera's death. I never expected any such thing to happen so I came up with a storyline which begins from 19 June onwards. I had a discussion with one of my cousin n told her my idea which she liked a lot. Together they all supported me n encouraged me to post it on I-F for the readers ie Premeer fans. I obeyed them š They are Miracle_leo, Crazy_94 n Kash_premeer. Without them the ff would not have been here, they helped me in many scenes so loads of thanks to them. The ff was given a warm welcome from the readers, for which I'm grateful to you all. This is the 2nd version of the ff and it will continue from part 52 which I will update soon.
Here's the link: My first piece of writing on Premeer
Summary of 51 parts
Juneja family came to know about Veera's death for which they blamed Nihaal. Gaya3 told Heer the truth about Sameer, she expressed her bitterness n ordered her to leave Juneja house n Prem. Heer wished to tell Prem abt it but they were unable to understand each other. Prem behaved rudely with her n blamed Nihaal for his sister Veera's death, hence Premeer were separated. Nihaal on the other hand burned himself n died in the most tragic way, in end it was not his dead body but only ashes which were left. A disheartened Heer who lost her brother forever n was pregnant with Prem's child left Ludhiana n moved to Panchgani. Mitali (Nihaal's colleague n friend) was a gr8 support n a caring friend to Heer. She was with Heer in her days of crisis. Within 5 years time Heer became the owner of P & H Hotels, Additi's mansion n a perfect mother to her princess Additi.
This little doll is like her mama in features but her habit n her behaviour is like her papa Prem. She is a 4 year old kid who knew her father Prem n his family but was unaware of the reason behind her parents' separation. It was a business project for which Prem n his family came to Panchgani n they met Heer. Sooner they came to know that Nihaal was not responsible for Veera's death, it was just an accident. It was Mitali who showed them the proof (video cassette). They came to know abt Nihaal's death n Premeer's daughter Additi. Prem n his family decided to unite Prem n Heer for which they tried out every possible way.
A problem arose in the project for which Heer blamed Prem but he found out a solution. During all this Heer fell in love with Prem all over again n confessed her love but destiny didn't allowed them to be together so soon n this time it was Heer's disease n she unwillingly moved out of Prem's life but united him with Additi.
Now a six months leap have taken place after which we see Heer living with Juneja family, Prem n Additi. What exactly happened? how did they get together is yet to be known so keep waiting. A new track will be coming soon n some new characters will make an entry in coming parts. Never forget reading this ff, it needs your support, appreciation n comments always.
Index
Part 52 = Pg 4
Part 53 = Pg 7
Part 54 = Pg9
Part 55 = Pg12
Part 56 = Pg14
Part 57 = Pg20
Edited by zehra-pisces - 11 years ago
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