My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER #2 Pt57 Pg20 - Page 8

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Additi while waiting for Heer saw Chahat coming her way

Additi: by god chahat! Kitni dair lagaadi tum ne aane mein

Chahat: additi bag pack karne mein dair to ho jaati hai na

Additi: tum bhi meri mama ki tarhaan packing mein bohot time lagaati ho

Chahat: waise tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Additi: as usual apni mama ka wait kar rahi hoon

Teacher called Chahat to give her the book that she forgot

Additi says in heart: I hope aaj mama jaldi se aajaye, main unhein chahat se milaaongi. Tab mama ko bhi yakeen hoga ke god ne meri wish poori kardi.

Premeer's room

Heer gets ready to leave for school while Prem makes an entry n stops her.

Heer: kya hai prem?

Prem: aaj tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho

Heer: mujhe pata hai

Heer tries to leave while Prem blocks her way

Heer: prem

Prem: heer

Heer: prem hato na

Prem: heer tum aaj additi ko lene school nahin jaaogi

Heer looks confused

Heer: are par kyun? Additi wait kar rahi hogi

Prem: heer main bhi to wait karta hoon tumhara har ghari har pal

Heer: school mein additi pareshaan hojaayegi, idhar udhar mujhe dhoondhegi

Prem: heer kabhi yahan wahan bhi dekh liya karo, tumhara pati khara hai tumhare saamne aur tumhein additi ki pari hai

Heer: additi tumhari hi to chahat hai

Prem: jo bhi ho par tum aaj nahin jaaogi. Maine driver ko bol diya hai woh le aayega

Heer: prem tum bhi na

Prem mischieviuosly smiles at him

Heer: ab yeh to bataao ke mujhe kyun roka?

Prem: tumhein yeh dene ke liye

He showed him a frame of love which had space for 4 separate photos out of which three were occupied by Additi, Prem n Heer. Heer took the frame to have a clear look.

Heer: prem yeh jaga khaali kyun? is mein bhi koi photo laga do

Prem: well, uski koi photo hamare paas nahin hai

Heer: prem itni saari pics hain koi bhi laga do.

She then thinks for few seconds n says: uski? uski kiski?

Prem: usi ki jiski lagni chahiye

Heer: prem tum kya keh rahe ho?

Prem: heer tum har baar bhool kyun jaati ho? abhi use bhi to aana hai

Heer: kise?

Prem: ek aur mehmaan ko jo hamari family ko poora karega

Heer feels shy n says: to uski tayaari abhi se shuru kardi

Prem: haan baap hoon na, is baar pre planned rehna chahta hoon

Heer: to tum ne naam bhi socha hoga

Prem: tumhare paas koi hai naam?

Heer: haan Rahul kitna famous naam hai!

Prem: aur kitna boring bhi

Heer's face fell while saying: to phir tum hi bata do koi unique sa naam

Prem: heer mujhe beta nahin chahiye. Main chahta hoon ke hamare ghar koi guria si beti ho jo additi ki best friend bane aur dono mein bohot pyar ho

Heer: aur us beti ka naam?

Prem thinks for a while then says: heer unique naam kaafi mushqil hote hain. Chalo hum films se help lete hain. Tumhein to waise bhi filmein dekhna bohot pasand hain.

They happily leave to watch few films for inspiration!

School scene

Additi waits for Heer while she spots Chahat

Chahat: okay additi meri car aagayi hogi

Additi: plz thori dair wait karo mama aati hogi

Chahat: agar main abhi bahar nahin gayi to meri mom andar aajayegi

Additi becomes sad

Chahat: acha yeh lo

She gives her photo to Additi

Chahat: ise apne paas rakho yeh tumhein meri yaad dilayega

Additi: thank you

Chahat leaves and after a while Additi leaves too with her driver

TV room

Premeer are having a good time with each other watching movies when Additi makes an entry

Additi: mama very bad main aapka wait kar rahi thi aur aap papa ke saath enjoy kar rahi hain

Heer: i'm so sorry beta tumhare papa mujhe aane nahin de rahe the

Prem helds ear and says sorry

Additi: main aapko apni friend se milana chahti thi

Prem: beta friend se baad mein milna pehle yeh movie dekhogi?

Additi: nahin mujhe nahin achi lagti

She leaves the room

Premeer's room

At night time Prem is busy in some files while Additi on the same bed is busy playing with her dolls.

Additi: papa aapko ek aur beti kyun chahiye? kya main kaafi nahin hoon?

Prem hugs her little princess and cuddles her

Prem: mere liye to aap kaafi ho, mujhe to beti aapke liye chahiye jo aapko company de

Additi: par woh to mujhse choti hogi woh mujhe kya company degi. Ise to acha ho ke meri age ki ho

Prem: aisa kaise ho sakta hai?

Additi: ho sakta hai na papa, meri friend hai chahat woh bilkul mere jaisi hai

Prem: acha bilkul aapke jaisi?

They hug again n Heer calls out Additi for her milk

Later at night Premeer are sleeping while Additi gets up from bed. She picks up the photo, tears it out from borders and fits it in the empty space of the frame.

Additi: hmmm perfect! ab lag rahi hai yeh ek complete family

Next morning

Additi is packing up her school bag while Heer enters in and notices the picture.

Heer: yeh additi ki photo prem ne kab lagaai? yeh dress mujhe to yaad nahin. Additi yeh aapki kaun si dress hai?

Additi: uffo mama yeh meri dress nahin hai aur yeh main bhi nahin hoon

Heer: stop it additi mama ko tang mat karo

Additi: mama yeh meri friend chahat hai, she's like a sister

Heer: bas additi tum ne phir se apni sister stories shuru kardi

Additi: mama yeh mere school mein hai

Heer: acha bas school ke liye late ho raha hai chalo school

They leave the room

In school teacher announces that there is some festival arranged in a nearby hotel for children and there will be many amazing games for them so she tells all to participate n go there tonight.

Chahat: additi hum zaroor jayenge

Additi winks at Chahat n thinks abt a super cool plan

Precap: Additi n Chahat are at the festival

Additi: thank god tum aagayi chahat, ab kahin jana mat jab tak mama na aajaye.

Will Additi's plan succeed? Will Heer see Additi n Chahat together this time?

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX

Awsome part!
Luved it!
So Additi still hasn't been able to show Heer her look alike.
Hmmm...Premeer are planning on having another kid...cant wait for that track...lolz.
Lets see if Heer will be able to see Chahat at the hotel...fingers crossed n waiting for her reaction.

Update soon n thnx for the PM!