My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER #2 Pt57 Pg20 - Page 5

Originally posted by: heer_varsha

sorry i dont have the link but u r a fabulous writer.update soon na cannot wait for ur update

I dont know how to tell you all, what shall I say, I have no words n absolute no courage to tell you all abt the most terrible thing that happened in my life. I lost my cousin (more like a brother to me) due to fatal disease cancer. He was a man in mid 30's n was suffering from cancer since december. At times I thought to post a topic here n tell you all to pray but never executed it until the day came when he left this world, and a huge family behind crying for him. I will never be able to forget him, it is a trauma for all his loved ones. Anyways coming back to this ff, firstly I was busy in examz, uni classes so I could not update it. then my cousin expired on july 4, after that I had final examz n today was my last paper so I completed part 53 n will update in lil while. Tomorrow I m going to village n will be back in aug. I will try to write some updates there n will post them soon. Sorry to keep you all waiting but at first I was busy n involved in lots of things then I could not concentrate on anything n could not do anything. Things took such a drastic change, I never imagined all this. I'm sure you all will understand reasons for not updating it. I'm sharing all this with you ppl bcos I-F is my 2nd home.

PART 53

With gloomy face she looked at sky n it glittered with a bright star.

Additi: wow! Yeh to bilkul diamond ki tarhaan glitter kar raha hai

In a jet speed the star moved downward n Additi with pressed palms prayed: bhagwaan ji plz meri life mein koi aisa aajaaye jo meri behen ki kami ko door karde aur mere bohot close rahe. Woh kabhi mujhse door na ho.

After that, with eyes full of hopes she went to sleep.

While Additi had a peaceful sleep with her parents, there lives a sweet, little girl with her mother in a cosy house in Panchgani. She played with her doll (who was wearing red velvet dress) n heard her mother calling.

Mother: chahat

Girl: yes mom

Mother: jaldi se so jaao, bohot raat hogayi hai

Girl: okay mom

The little girl hugs her doll n says: good night my best friend, hum phir kal milenge.

The woman enters in room n switches off the light. She laid down beside her daughter.

Heer's dream

Heer is at a lonely place which seems like an open, wide place n somewhat like a jungle. She has two leaves in her hand but due to wind one flew away. Heer holding one leaf is running after the other one but she is lost in bushes n is not able to find the leaf.

Next scene:

Additi is playing with a red coloured doll n is in a room which seems to be different from her room in real. Heer then saw Additi laughing n roaming aroung in the house which is not Juneja house. The environment, surrounding is different. House and room seem to be new. Heer then hears Additi yelling out "mom, mom!" Heer enters in room where there is dim light n Additi is standing in a corner n crying terribly n says: mama I need you!

Heer wakes up suddenly n is soaked in sweat. She shivers a bit n has a shocked expression on face. Prem turns to other side n noticed Heer who in tension is sitting on bed. Prem places hand on heer n it gives her a jolt.

Prem: kya huwa heer? Tum darr kyun gayi?

Heer: prem kuch bura hone wala hai

Prem: kis ke saath?

Heer: hamare kisi apne ke saath

Prem: kaun hai woh heer?

Heer: kahin woh additi to nahin? Additi ke saath kuch bura hone wala hai

Prem: heer, yeh kya keh rahi ho tum?

Heer: prem maine ek bohot bura sapna dekha. Maine dekha ke additi mujhe mom keh ke pukaarti hai. Woh ek kamre mein laal rang ki guriya ke saath khel rahi hai. Jab main us kamre mein jaati hoon to woh ek kone mein ro rahi hai aur mujhse kehti hai ke use meri zaroorat hai.

Prem: heer additi ke saath kuch bura nahin hoga, woh to chen se so rahi hai, dekho

Heer turned n saw Additi peacefully sleeping. She kisses her on forehead n gets emotional. She then turns to Prem.

Heer: phir us sapne ka kya matlab tha prem?

Prem: woh sapna nahin sirf tumhara wehem hai. Additi ke saath kuch bura nahin hoga kyunki uske mama papa uske saath hai. Ab tum so jaao.

Next morning! Premeer's room

Additi dressed in school uniform enters in room n quickly kisses her mom.

Additi: good morning mama!

Heer woke up n saw Additi

Heer: additi aapko school ke liye tayaar kisne kiya?

Additi: papa ne, aap so rahi thi. Main to aapko uthaane aarahi thi phir papa ne kaha ke main aapko disturb na karoon aur unhon ne mujhe tayaar kar diya.

Heer: aapke papa kahan hain?

Additi: neeche dadi ke paas, okay mama mujhe school ke liye dair ho rahi hai.

Additi was about to go when Heer stops her.

Heer: beta aapke paas koi laal rang ka khilona hai?

Additi: laal rang? Kaisa khilona mama?

Heer: koi guriya?

Additi: nahin, laal rang ki mere paas koi guriya nahin hai. Mujhe to laal rang pasand nahin hai. Mere favourite colors pink aur blue hain. Par aap kyun pooch rahi hain?

Heer: kuch nahin beta aap school jaao. She hugged her angel.

After sometime Prem enters in room n observes Heer roaming around in tension.

Prem: kya baat hai heer? Kal raat ki baat se pareshaan ho

Heer: maine bohot socha prem lekin woh sapna aur additi ka rota huwa chehra mujhe baar baar yaad aajata hai.

Prem: heer additi ne tumse kaha na ke uske paas laal rang ki doll nahin hai aur naahi woh tumhein mom kehti hai.

Heer: woh ghar is ghar jaisa nahin tha, koi alag jaga thi.

Prem: heer ab is sab ke baare mein mat socho. Hamari additi ko kuch nahin hoga. Hum apni beti ka poora khayal rakhenge.

Prem hugs Heer n they share a moment.

Additi in school

Additi enters in her class n takes a seat. She takes keen interest in the story being taught in class. After sometime with permission of teacher she goes to washroom.

Precap:

In the bathroom she washes her hand n then looks in mirror. She ties her pony n poses infront of mirror when suddenly she notices something strange n weird. Additi is in a complete shock! Keep waiting for next update. New character in next update!