My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER #2 Pt57 Pg20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Crazy_94
plss update its being soo long no update :(

two parts are updated dear now m waiting for r comments luvs bye

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S.B.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

Hey!!!!!!!!!

i had been a silent reader of ur ff since long back. it is truely awesome and superb. i completed reading all the parts from ur previous thread in one go..

the characters and how the story proceeds from the point u started it is just perfect.... i just love additi.her naughtiness and cuteness it is just so sweet , cute.....😃i am now very very eagerly waiting to know when and how heer and prem will find out about chahat.....

plz plz plz continue soon...tc...😊

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sowmya18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

hey................please update soon......cant wait to read next....plz.....

Edited by sowmya18 - 14 years ago

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Biya

@biyaahmad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

please update.its almodt 3 months.

plz,plz,plz update.

add me to ur pm list.

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Biya

@biyaahmad

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

r u ok na?its a long time.😕

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

plzz update soon,its been a long time since u have updated

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sowmya18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

hi...plzz update soon...
waiting... 😊

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iheartChai

@iheartChai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

Hey sorry for the intrusion.

But I just wanted to let you know that I'm starting a new Desh FF/Creative Writing Archive for the forum.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1738386/desh-ff-creative-writing-archive-needs-ur-help

Please come and reply to the post so this FF can be added to the Archives 😃

Please respond in this format

Title:
Author:
Link:
Summary:
Status:

(all of this is explained in the first post of the Archive)

Thanks for your time.

Sorry about the intrusion.

---Grace

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

Hey continue soon!!!

Do add me to ur pm list..

tc..

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AASUS

@AASUS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

zehra-pisces 😃

Wow really awesome FF. I'm glad you filled the void which was left by the actual show and wrote all the parts of PH with their family & child.

PH individual scenes as well as together with their daughter Additi are superb.

Preet, Meher, G3,Bauji,Kulraj along with all the kids Ayush,Avi, Tanu,Ketan and Additi masti scenes are awesome.

Loved each chapter up until now.

The last few chapters mentioning Additi's look alike girl. I just wondered if Heer had twins & may be they were separated without her knowing it.

Is that why Heer had a dream on the day Additi met Chahat, her new friend?

It'd be awesome to find out what really happens between PH, Additi & Chahat and how the rest of the family reacts.

Thanks so much for taking the time to write. It really is a relief to read about what might have happened during the separation of PH. You have a wonderful imagination & great flow of dialogues that keep everyone glued to the story 😛

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