My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER #2 Pt57 Pg20 - Page 9

Originally posted by: moon_mine

a very sweet part indeed!!!!

lovd additi n chahat;s interaction!!!!!

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wow awesome update,loved premeer scene n they r planning for another kid its soo cute,loved chaahat n additi conversation,precap look interesting how will heer react to see chaahat n additi together.plz update soon

PART56

Additi & Chahat together during break

Chahat: additi tum ne aise kyun kiya?

Additi: kaise?

Chahat winked but was not an expert like Additi

Additi: oh! woh is liye kyunki i have a super cool plan

Chahat: mujhe to yeh ishaare samajh mein nahin aate, main to confuse hogayi thi

Additi laughed n said: tum bilkul meri mama jaisi ho

Chahat: acha yeh bataao ke tum ne yeh aankhon ke ishaare kahan se seekhe?

Additi: papa se

Chahat became sad n told her: mere to papa hi nahin hain

Additi held her hand n said: main hoon na tumhare paas, forever

Chahat: acha yeh bataao ke plan kya hai?

Additi: hum aaj raat is festival mein zaroor chalenge

Chahat: okay but kya humein permission milegi?

Additi: haan kyun nahin, hum dono wahan ek saath apni mom se milenge

Chahat: ek saath kyun?

Additi: taake unhein yakeen aajaaye ke hum dono ek jaise dikhte hain

Chahat: tum ne apni mama ko bata diya?

Additi: bataya tha lekin unhon ne believe hi nahin kiya. Unhein laga ke main phir se stories bana rahi hoon. Tum ne bataya?

Chahat: nahin par aaj bata doongi

They head towards their class

In class a teacher gives maths worksheet to Additi n after a round she gives another one to her again.

Additi: teacher aap mujhe ek de chuki hain

Teacher looks at Chahat who is without a worksheet, just grinning at her.

Teacher: oh i'm sorry beta

She gives one to Chahat

Later she distributes their homework copies n mistakenly gives Additi's copy to Chahat.

Chahat: miss yeh meri nahin hai

Teacher has a look at Additi, then at Chahat n hits her head with a copy

Teacher: oh god main to pagal ho jaaongi

She calls out to Ms Seema n tells her: ms yeh kya problem hai? additi aur chahat ke ek jaise dikhne se bohot confusion ho raha hai. Main ek ki cheez doosri ko de deti hoon. Main kya karoon?

A student gets up says: ms aap ne salman khan ki judwaa film nahin dekhi? He sings: tan tanatan tan tan tara!

All students have a good laugh even Additi n Chahat

Ms Seema: stop it kabir, take your seat

Ms Seema to Ms Nimmo: dono ko ek saath bitha do, is se confusion bhi door hogi aur agar galti se ek ki cheez doosri ke paas aagayi to woh usi waqt exchange kar sakti hain

Additi n Chahat happily sat together on a two seater bench

Ms Nimmo: ab tum dono hamesha ek saath rehna

Their voices echoed: yes mam

Chahat's home

Chahat enters in her mom's room who is occupied in her office work. She hugs her mother n says: aaj aap mujhe lene nahin aayi?

Mother: main busy thi beta

Chahat: aapke paas mere liye bilkul time nahin

Mother: no chahat aisi koi baat nahin

Chahat: mujhe aapko bohot important batana hai

Mother: kya hai?

Chahat: mere class mein ek larki parhti hai jo bilkul mere jaisi hai

Mother: kya matlab?

Chahat: matlab yeh ke woh bilkul mere jaisi hai wahi aankhein, wahi kaan, wahi chehra sab kuch mere jaisa

Her mom is shocked to hear all this n it immediately caught her attention. She leaves her work n accidently drops an album on floor.

She whispers to herself: aisa kaise ho sakta hai? kya yeh wahi hai? no! this cant be!

She looks at the opened album which has a picture of herself holding a tiny baby in her hands. She says: jo main soch rahi hoon woh nahin ho sakta, yeh sirf ek ittefaaq hai.

Juneja house

Additi: dadi plz mama ko convince karo

Gaya3: meri guria itna kyun pareshaan ho rahi ho. tumhari mama chalegi tumhare saath

Additi: nahin dadi mujhe pata hai woh nahin aayengi

Heer passes by n Additi asks: mama aap chalogi festival mein?

Heer: nahin beta, mere sar mein bohot dard hai

Additi: dekha dadi, maina kaha tha na

Gaya3: heer additi ka bohot mann hai chali jaao uske saath

Heer: maa woh...

Prem enters in lounge n stands beside his darling wife

They talk in whispers

Heer: dekha

Prem: dekh hi to raha hoon, tumhein

Heer: prem plz, aaj tumhari waja se mujhe apni baby se jhoot bolna par raha hai

Prem: heer ek aur baby ke liye itna to karna parega

Heer: use school se lene nahin gayi kyunki mere pyaare se pati ko mere saath filmein dekhni thi

Prem: woh to baby ka acha sa naam sochna tha is liye

Heer: aur ab, ab tumhein mere saath waqt guzarna hai, akele mein

Prem: heer tum gussa kyun ho rahi ho?

Heer: to aur karoon? hum din mein bhi to saath time spend kar sakte hain na?

Prem: heer tum jaanti ho mera office ka kitna kaam hota hai

Heer: meri angel kitni udaas hai

Prem: angel ko kisi aur ke saath bhej dete hain

Heer: woh nahin ja rahi tumhari tarhaan ziddi jo hai

Lalit enters n says: additi beta tumhare mummy papa dono nalayak hain, main chaloonga tumhare saath

Additi: nahin dadaji, mama papa ka mere saath jana bohot zaroori hai

Gaya3: bas phir teh hogaya prem heer tum dono aaj raat festival mein additi ke saath jaaoge yeh mera hukm hai

Premeer scene

Heer getting ready n Prem staring at her

Heer: kya hai prem? aise kyun dekh rahe ho?

Prem comes near n hugs her from back

Prem: heer jab tum hospital mein thi tab yeh kamra, yeh dressing table sab kuch veeraan tha. Par ab tum aagayi ho aur zindagi mein yeh saare rang bhi wapas aagaye hain

Heer: prem tum baar baar us waqt ko kyun yaad karte ho?

Prem: sorry! main bhool jata hoon

Heer: acha mujhe yeh do

Prem picked up necklace n gave it to her

Heer: maine to kuch kaha bhi nahin aur na koi ishara kiya phir tumhein kaise pata chala ke mujhe yeh chahiye

Prem: heer main tumhare bina kuch kahe tumhare dil ki baat samjhta hoon. Iski achi khaasi practise bhi ho chuki hai

Heer: kaisi practise?

Prem: main tumhein nahin bataaonga, warna tumhein sab yaad aajayega

Heer: kya?

Prem: yahi ke jab tum operation ke baad ghar aayi to kuch samay ke liye tum kuch bol nahin sakti thi aur un dinon mein maine tumhari khamoshi ko parhna seekh liya

Heer became quiet n remembered bad times

Prem: heer yaadein achi hon ya buri humein unse bhaagna nahin chahiye. Mujhe us waqt ko yaad rakhne se yeh ehsaas hota hai ke us waqt ko paar karke mujhe meri heer doobara mil gayi aur is baar hamesha ke liye.

They had an emotional hug n thanked destiny for being together

Additi enters n says: chalein? i'm ready

Festival

Additi reached along with her parents n looked everywhere for Chahat.

Additi: mama papa main bas 2 minutes mein aati hoon

Heer: are wah pehle to hamare saath aana chahti thi aur ab hum se door ja rahi ho

Additi: mama plz i'l be back

She left n searched for Chahat, finally caught her near the icecream stall.

Additi: chahat itni dair se main tumhein dhoond rahi hoon

Chahat: sorry woh main dekh rahi thi ke icecream kaise banti hai

Additi: stupid! tumhein icecream ki pari hai, hamara plan bhool gayi?

Chahat: nahin, yaad hai mujhe lekin maine mom ko yeh nahin kaha ke main unhein tumse milaane lekar aayi hoon kyunki phir shayad woh nahin aati

Additi: kyun?

Chahat: jab maine tumhare baare mein unhein bataya to woh bohot pareshaan hogayi, pata nahin kyun. Tum ne bataya apni mama ko ke hum yahan kyun aaye hain?

Additi: nahin bata paayi, unko manaane mein itna time waste huwa ke main bhool gayi. Mere mama papa bhi kabhi kabhi itna drama karte hain, god!

Chahat: chalo ab hum apni mama ko yaheen lekar aate hain

Additi: wow! hamari dress bhi same hai

Chahat: are haan yeh ek ittefaaq hai

Additi: ab 10minutes mein hamari mama humein saath mein dekhengi

They leave to get their moms

Chahat: mom chalo mujhe aapko kuch dikhana hai

Mother: wait beta, main aunty se baat karloon

Chahat: mom i want icecream

She gives her money n says: tum jaao main abhi aati hoon

Chahat thinks: icecream ka dil nahin kar raha jab tak mom phone pe baat karle tab tak main gola ganda khaati hoon

She goes to buy gola ganda

Additi reaches the stall but Chahat is not there

Additi thinks: oh god yeh chahat bhi na, us stupid girl ko bola tha ke yaheen mile but woh abhi tak nahin aayi

Additi: mama main abhi aati hoon

Heer: nahin additi tum hamare saath raho, agar kho gayi to?

Prem: heer dont worry additi khoye huwe logon ko dhoond sakti hai par khud kho nahin sakti, right angel?

Additi: rite papa!

She leaves to find Chahat n after half an hour gets successful

Additi: thank god tum aagayi chahat, ab kahin mat jana jab tak mama na aajaye.

Chahat: main gola ganda kha rahi thi, tum khaaogi?

Additi: no thanks mera isse gala kharab hota hai

Chahat: mom phone par hain, woh abhi aati hogi

Additi: mama to kahin dikh nahin rahi, par papa arcade games ke paas hain. Main unhein lekar aati hoon aur dekhti hoon ke mama kahan hai. Tum plz kahin mat jana.

Chahat: okay

Additi leaves while Chahat stands in a corner alone

Chahat says to herself: oh god i am feeling scared, mujhe koi buri si aunty kidnap na karle

Heer comes there n calls out: to tum yahan khari ho

Chahat looks up n feels scared

Precap: Heer: chalo humein ghar jana hai

Chahat: nahin main aapke saath nahin chaloongi

Heer gives her a strange look

Finally Chahat n Heer met but it was not as planned by Additi

How will Heer come to know that this little girl is Chahat n not Additi? Why is Chahat scared to see Heer n whats in her mind? Why was Chahat's mom shocked, what is the connection between her & the Juneja family?

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anyway...it was fantastic...lets see wat happens next......update soon.........

the precap seems very interesting!!!!

awsum update!!! luvd it !!