My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER #2 Pt57 Pg20 - Page 13

WOW...rally happy to know that you are gonna continue it
looking forward to it<3

PART 57

Chahat & Heer at the festival

Chahat says to herself: oh God I am scared, mujhe koi buri si aunty kidnap na karle

Heer comes there n calls out: to tum yahan khari ho

Chahat looks up n feels scared

Heer: chalo humein ghar jana hai, papa kab se wait kar rahe hain

Chahat: nahin main aapke saath nahin chaloongi

Heer gives her a strange look

Heer: ab bohot hogaya additi papa naraz hojayenge

Chahat: main aapke saath nahin jaongi

Heer: kyun?

Chahat: main aapki beti nahin hoon

Heer: enough additi lets go

She took her hand n walked away

On the way Chahat managed to get rid of Heer n ran away

Heer stopped in middle n was furious

Heer said to herself: abhi prem ko bhejti hoon wahi iski khabar lega

Heer was leaving to get Prem when someone called from behind

Additi: mama

Heer turned n saw Additi

Additi innocently asks: aap mujhe chor ke ja rahi thi?

Heer: acha par thori dair pehle to tum ne kaha ke tum meri beti nahin ho

Additi: maine?

She thought for a while n predicted that it must be Chahat

Additi whispered: lagta hai mama chahat se mili thi, stupid chahat!

Heer: additi yeh sab kya tha?

Additi: sorry mama I meant ke main papa ki beti hoon, papa ki angel

Heer left n Additi followed until they met Prem

Prem saw angry Heer n gloomy, sad Additi

Prem: kya huwa my angel?

Heer: prem lets leave

Chahat n her mom

Mom: sorry beta main apne client mein itni busy thi ke aapko time nahin de paayi

Chahat hugged her n said: its okay mom

Mom: kya huwa chahat?

Chahat: mom thori dair ke liye laga ke mujhe aap se koi door na karde

Mom: aisa kabhi nahin hosakta aapki mama hamesha aapke saath rahegi

Chahat held her mom's hand while Additi held her papa's hand. They both parted ways n left. Additi turned n waved Chahat from a distance. They were sad that their plan didn't taste success.

Premeer n Additi in car

Prem: heer additi ne sorry keh diya na ab to use maaf kardo

Heer stayed quiet

Additi: mama plz I'm sorry woh main nahin thi

Heer: acha come on additi mujhe apni beti ko pehchaane mein dhoka kaise hosakta hai

Additi: lekin mama woh meri friend

Prem signaled her to be quiet as Heer was in real bad mood

Additi grumbled in heart: kya socha tha ke mama papa ko surprise milega jab woh chahat aur mujhe ek saath dekhenge lekin ulta mujhe shock milgaya sirf stupid chahat ki waja se

By the time this loving Juneja family reached home Additi was fast asleep.

Next morning

Additi gets ready n leaves for school. In car she says to herself: aaj main mama ko bol ke aayi hoon ke aap hi mujhe lene aana warna main ghar nahin aaongi.

Chahat's place

Chahat while getting dressed up for school says to her mom: pata hai main aapko kal kisi se milane wali thi

Mom: kisse?

Chahat: meri friend additi se jo bilkul mere jaisi hai

Mom: acha

Chahat: haan mom woh shakal mein bilkul mere jaisi hai, aap pehchaan nahin paaoge ke aapki chahat kaun hai

The woman is shocked and gives a worried look to her daughter. She shook her up and said: beta aap usse door raho woh aapke jaisi dikhti hogi lekin woh aapki kuch nahin lagti

Chahat: par woh to meri friend hai, meri best friend! Ek behen jaisi!

Mom: nahin! Woh aapki behen kabhi nahin ho sakti, suna aap ne?

Chahat noticed her mom fumed in anger

Mom: friend hai lekin usse zyada kuch nahin aur hum kabhi usse nahin milenge kabhi uske ghar nahin jayenge

Chahat: okay

Her mom left and she said to herself: itna gussa!

School

Additi and Chahat met on the way to their class.

Additi: hi chahat kal tum aise kyun chali gayi?

Chahat: mujhe bohot darr laga ke kahin koi aunty mujhe kidnap na karde

Additi: stupid girl acha aaj main tumhein apni mama se milaaongi

Chahat: nahin additi mujhe nahin milna, hum milgaye bas theek hai

Additi: kya huwa tumhein?

Chahat: mom aaj bohot gusse mein thi woh tumhein pasand nahin karti

Additi: lekin abhi woh mujhse mili bhi nahin hain

Chahat: I don't know par woh bohot gusse mein thi woh nahin chahti ke hum tumhare ghar aayen

They thought for a while and Additi came up with an idea.

Additi: hum aaj ek doosre ke ghar jayenge aur poora din wahan spend karenge

Chahat: meri mom to tumhein ghar se bahar nikal dengi, it's a bad idea :(

Additi: uffo main unhein bataongi nahin ke main additi hoon, main acting karoongi ke main chahat hoon

Chahat: phir hum unhein kab batayenge?

Additi: shaam ko aur woh surprise hojayenge

Chahat: okay let's do it

Chahat stops walking and thinks

Additi: are ab kya huwa?

Chahat: soch lo additi tum bohot bara risk le rahi ho, meri mom ka gussa to...

Additi: are kuch nahin hoga darpok

Chahat: gusse mein meri mom is like boiling water!

Additi winks and ignores the warning!

School gets over and Heer comes to pick Additi. Chahat and Additi hide behind a tree. Additi points to Heer and tells that she is her mother.

Chahat: are main inse mili thi kal

Additi: haan yeh meri mama hai jise tumne kidnap karne wali aunty samjha tha

Chahat: sorry

Additi: it's okay ab jaao

Chahat meets Heer for first time and hugs her. Heer feels a void getting filled with happiness. She feels as if she has met her daughter for first time. They both sit in car and head towards home.

Additi watches them leave and smiles. She too sits in Chahat's car and leaves.

Juneja house

The car reaches home and Chahat looks with astonishment. She says to herself that her friend has a really big house. They go inside and Chahat looks around. She goes into Tanu's room and looks at pictures of Tanu, Ayush and Avi.

Chahat holds picture in hand and says: oh to yeh hai additi ki buwa ki beti tanu dee

Heer: additi kya kar rahi ho aap? chalo school dress badlo

She enters and looks at her child and says: oh to aap tanu dee ko miss kar rahi ho? Don't worry woh december ki chutiyon mein aajayengi

Chahat: december? Abhi to june hai matlab 6 months baad?

Heer: haan! Are wah aapko to maths mein koi problem nahin huwi

Heer kisses her while Chahat gives her a loving smile

Heer: additi aapki bas yahi cheez mujhse milti hai

Chahat: kaun si?

Heer: yahi maths mein slow learner, lekin ab to aap ne kaafi improve kiya hai, very good!

Chahat smiles mischievously thinking that her best friend is slow learner in mathematics while it is her favorite subject.

Chahat says in heart: lagta hai additi ko maths parhana hi padega!

Heer: pata hai is cheez ke ilawa baki aap poori ki poori apne papa jaisi hain

Chahat becomes sad thinking that her father is no more and she hasn't seen him ever in life.

Heer: chalo ab bohot dair hogayi hai

Heer and Chahat in bedroom

Heer enters in room and Chahat follows her. Chahat looks sad and hugs Heer. Heer feels different, she feels more loved towards her child.

Heer: kya huwa beta?

Chahat: aap se ek baat poochoon?

Heer: poocho

Chahat: additi ke papa kahan hain?

Heer: kya?

Chahat: ummm ahhh I mean mere papa, woh kahan hain?

Heer: woh office mein hai is waqt

Chahat: woh kab aayenge?

Heer: shaam ko

Chahat thinks: mama to mere ghar aane ke baad office ka kaam ghar se karti hain to kya additi ke papa aisa nahin kar sakte?

Heer: aapko apne papa ki yaad aarahi hai?

Chahat nods head positively

Heer dials Prem's number and gives phone to her.

Chahat and Prem phone conversation

Chahat: hello papa

Prem: hello my angel!

Chahat feels nice listening to a male voice

Prem: kaisa hai mera bacha?

Chahat: bilkul theek, aap ne khana khaya?

Prem: are wah aaj meri angel ko apne papa ki bohot fikr hai

Chahat: kyun nahin hogi main aapki beti hoon! Aap ghar kab aaoge?

Prem: bohot jaldi, bas main ek meeting karloon aur phir aapke paas

Chahat: okay bye

Prem: bye beta

The call ends leaving a satisfying smile on Chahat's face

Heer gives clothes to Chahat and says: additi aap jaldi se dress pehen ke neeche aao khana khaane

Heer leaves while Chahat says to herself: I wish yeh mere real papa hote :(

Precap: Additi tells Chahat's mom: woh, main aapki beti nahin hoon

The woman is shocked!

Additi: aapki beti chahat mere ghar pe hai, main additi hoon uski best friend! Hum dono ne decide kiya tha ke hum ek doosre ke ghar jayenge

The woman shouts angrily: what! How dare you?

Additi feels scared

Juneja house

Heer is sitting on bed with tears in eyes and worried for Additi

Chahat wipes Heer's tears and says: aap roiye mat additi bilkul theek hai

Chahat holds Heer's finger and says: chalein additi ke paas

Heer looks at her in surprise.

yehh finally u continued it..i m so happy to see this update..

lovelyy update waitinggg for next

Originally posted by: AASUS

Thank you Zehra. 🤗 We all love your story and definitely others will read too.

Thanks so much. Sorry about power failure. In my place we had black out due to snow + ice storm. I am ok now but there are others in city still out of power & phone lines.

Love you for thinking of us and willing to continue for your fans and friends. ❤️

Originally posted by: biyaahmad

Pleasure to know that u r going to countinue
u know i just luv ur story
waiting eagerly fr the update and best of luck.

Originally posted by: -Xpress-

WOW...rally happy to know that you are gonna continue it
looking forward to it<3

Originally posted by: kiran_28

yehh finally u continued it..i m so happy to see this update..

that was very cute update..love heer nd chahat scene..prem-chahat convo..

pls cont soon..😃 Thanks for PM

Originally posted by: sweta2005

lovelyy update waitinggg for next

From afternoon i was reading the entire story. Lovely story. Happy to see that u r continuing this. <3