My First Piece of Writing on PREMEER #2 Pt57 Pg20 - Page 12

Originally posted by: -Xpress-

Hey!!!!!!!!!

i had been a silent reader of ur ff since long back. it is truely awesome and superb. i completed reading all the parts from ur previous thread in one go..

the characters and how the story proceeds from the point u started it is just perfect... i just love additi.her naughtiness and cuteness it is just so sweet , cute...😃i am now very very eagerly waiting to know when and how heer and prem will find out about chahat...

plz plz plz continue soon...tc...😊

Originally posted by: biyaahmad

please update.its almodt 3 months.

plz,plz,plz update.

add me to ur pm list.

Originally posted by: biyaahmad

r u ok na?its a long time.😕

Originally posted by: AASUS

zehra-pisces 😃

Wow really awesome FF. I'm glad you filled the void which was left by the actual show and wrote all the parts of PH with their family & child.

PH individual scenes as well as together with their daughter Additi are superb.

Preet, Meher, G3,Bauji,Kulraj along with all the kids Ayush,Avi, Tanu,Ketan and Additi masti scenes are awesome.

Loved each chapter up until now.

The last few chapters mentioning Additi's look alike girl. I just wondered if Heer had twins & may be they were separated without her knowing it.

Is that why Heer had a dream on the day Additi met Chahat, her new friend?

It'd be awesome to find out what really happens between PH, Additi & Chahat and how the rest of the family reacts.

Thanks so much for taking the time to write. It really is a relief to read about what might have happened during the separation of PH. You have a wonderful imagination & great flow of dialogues that keep everyone glued to the story 😛

Originally posted by: AASUS

Seasons Greetings zehra-pisces

It'd be fab to see you write. You are a terrific writer.