||Dil Ko Choo Liya||ch 82 pg i41(perfect date!!) - Page 5

Originally posted by: kptl

awesome.......nd veera really needed this shock of her life....
and ya congrats for da new thread...
so wat did preet saw......nd ya hope inder doesnt do something stupid...if lalit wanted him dead he would have remember him bt it seems like he doesnt so tat means tat there was no lalit involve in inder's past ....hope next prt clears out at least tat confusion...i dont wanna premeer to get separated...

Originally posted by: mithalio

congratz for the new thread, and update is superb as usual

mithiya

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

awesome


thanx 4 the pm


update soon



Kamal

Originally posted by: hina_1

Congrats on the new thread....Update is great as usual....

hi all......

Chapter 60

Heer was with Shiv as he was preparing himself to leave…..

Both faces were dull and Gauri noticed it when she came to them after putting chah to sleep…

"kya..baat hai …tum log itne udaas kyu hai….?"

Shiv looked at her for a second…but gauri avoided meeting his eyes and turned to heer…

"kuch nahi dee…maine socha tha ki kam se kam aaj ke din sir mujhe ghar jaane doge…lekin…."her voice was dull…

"aur papa bhi ajeeb tarah se behave kar rahe the…pata nahi…"

"Heer…wo shayad tumhari ma ki sehad ke vajah se pareshaan hai…aur tum us baat ko leke baith gayi ho…."Gauri patted Heer lovingly…her gaze deviating to Shiv….

Shiv stood up with a sigh….looked up to the stairs….

"pata nahi inder uncle ko kya hua…wo aaj ke din ....bar main…?Heer …tum dono so jao …main uncle se milke seedhe ghar ja raha hoo…"

Saying this he walked up to the stairs…..Heer and Gauri looked at each other in slight tension….

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Veera stood in the store room…her heart pounding as her eyes looked around in search of something….

She remembered the small pouch bag in which she packed all her things which inder had given her when they were together…..

She had taken them with her to London …..not being able to part with his memories then….the photos….the sweet little gifts he gave her….all those helped to keep her sanity then……

Years went by and Balraj 's love made her accept life as it is…..

When Balraj and Lalit decided to go back to India….she had abandoned her treasure here..

Now after such a long time he came in front of her…….!!!

Acting as if they haven't met in their lifetime…!!!

Why?

Veera rummaged through the boxes ….forgetting herself at times as she slid the boxes making noice….she came near to the door searching the shelves…

She stopped as something velvety touched her fingers….

Her treasure..!!

She held it close to her heart as fresh tears began to pour out from her eyes…

She emptied the pouch on the floor….and….touched the things hesitantly bending on her knees…..dreading the effect they are going to have on her….her fingers and eyes stopped as they fell on a bangle box…..

Her hands were shivering when she opened it……

"veera….yeh shagun hai….."Inder said hugging her from back as he presented the bangle to an elated Veera…

"inder…yeh to….bohot mehenga hai….tum…"she turned and looked at him suspiciously….

"aur mujhe pehle yeh batao ki tum do din kaha gayab huye the…?!"she said faking anger….

"wo ..veera…main…"Inder tried to find an excuse….

"khabardaar jo mujhse jhoot kaha tho…main tumse baat hi nahi karoonga.." Inder could not lie looking into her eyes…

"wo maine…kuch paintings…..bech di…."he said turning away from her…..

Veera stood there shocked…her eyes welling up truly understanding the love he had for her…she knew how much he valued his paintings….

"Inder…"she hugged him from back and he turned to wrap his hand s around her…

Veera took the bangle out of the box and held it towards the light…..

It shined in the light …..the green stones sparkled and so did her tears…..as she sat there holding the bangle in her hand unaware of two eyes which looked at her in disbelief…..

Preet was stunned by what he saw in the store room….

His mom…!!!

What was that ….the bangle…..he had seen it some where….

Where!!??? Preet rubbed his temples in concentration…..where did he see this….?

Suddenly a lightning flashed in his mind……

Painting….!!!the painting in Inder uncles room……

Does it mean….?!!!oh no…!!! Preet held his head with both hands…..

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Heer was happy….she was about to sleep….

As she lay on the bed hugging her cusion which she named 'Prem'…..her lips had a shy smile…..

Prem…..how caring he is….he made ma agree to their relationship!…..and also ma accepted her as beti wholeheartedly……!

She rolled on burying her face in the cushion……

Her body still aching for his feel…..she remembered their dance and his affection towards her ….

She was drowning herself in his thoughts….

Suddenly her phone rang……and she smiled widely….yeh Prem bhi na….abhi thode der pehle hi tho phone kiya tha …

But her face changed when she saw who was calling….

Preet..!? Is waqt….?….heer got up ….kya maa ko kuch …?!.

She attended the call worried…

"Preet …kya baat hai…sab theek…."

Preet cut in…his voice hushed up and strained…

"di …..Inder uncle apne kamre main hai kya….?"

Heer was baffled by his question….

"nahi….shayad wo study main hai….lekin..tum yeh…."

Preet again interrupted her…and said in one breath….

"di mujhe ek sawal ka jawab chahiye…aap ko abhi uncle ke kamre main jana hai. wahan window ke paas main ek portrait hai….maine portrait to nahi dekha tha magar …di aap jaldi jaake dekho..aur mujhe batao ki wo kiski hai…"

Heer was horrified….

"Preet tum yeh kya keh raha hai….tumhe ho kya gaya hai..? are agar portrait ko dekhna hai to kal aajaona…sir se …."

"nahi di.. Aap…. Please…. do as I say…I need to know who is that person and I can't wait till morning…."

"acha…main koshish karti hoo….tum phone mat kaatna….be in the line…"

Heer slipped into Inder's room…

The room was dark and she groped for switch….her hands found a switch and a dim light filled the room….

Yeh Preet bhi na…ajeeb hai !ab us portrait main aisa kya hai jo who subh tak wait nahi kar saktha….thank god ..sir yahan nahi hai…mujhe jaldi yahaan se jana hai…!lekin wo portrait……

Heer looked around…..searching and her eyes fell on the curtained frame….

To yeh hai ….!

Heer moved to it and pulled the strings in a hurry her eyes darting frequently to the door…..

Her eyes fell on the portrait for fraction of a second but her concentration was towards the door.. her heart beating increased in fear of being found out by Indrajeet…..

But….

Something blasted inside her and she turned to the frame…in horror…!!!

The portrait was exuding life……

Heer stood frozen…. her heart pounding violently……

Maa!!! her exclamation made herself start…..!

Her brows furrowed in bewilderment…yeh ..sir ke room main…?????.

She looked around and found two more curtained photo frames ….

Heer ran to them and tore away the flimsy cloth….

Her head reeling in confusion……

Is this possible…?!!!!her confusion that she and Gauri are related surfaced in her mind….

But….how?!!! bua ne to kaha tha ki mere papa mar chuke hai….!!!phir..?!!!

Heer clutched her head as tears were gushing out of her eyes…uncontrollably….she frantically wiped her face and walked backwards wanting to run away from there….but her legs were weak..and they wobbled….

She was stopped by the side table and stood there panting..keeping her hands on it….

No…this can't happen…this is not true..!!! this can't be true..!

She started to the door but accidently her hands brushed the papers on the table causing them to fall down…

Heer rubbed her eyes and bent down to gather them…..

Her name caught her attention….

Oh God…mera naam!….Singhaniya..!!! Heer put a hand to her head not knowing what to do…..

She took the paper and her world turned upside down….!!! her hands let go of her phone which crashed to the floor…!!

She stared at the paper wondering what language it was…..she was not understanding it…..or she was too numb….!

Indrejeet Singhaniya !!! Biological father….!!

Iska matlab….!!

Heer sank to the floor…..unable to hold herself…..

Iska matlab Indrejeet uski papa hai….!!!itne dinon se wo apne papa ke saath reh rahe the….aur unhe pata tha ki main unki beti hoon….!!!!

Heer was shocked beyond words…..

Kyu?…

unhone yeh baat mujhse kyu chupaya…?

Kyu???….

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Preet was at his wits end …seeing his mom on this state was the last thing he expected to see in his life…..

And Heer di….heer di ko kya hua….phone to on hai…lekin wo kuch bolti kyu nahi….suddenly he heard a loud noice from the phone…

"heer di…"he called out frantically…..

A hand touched his shoulders and Preet turned startled…..

Prem stood there with Balraj and Lalit…all of them worried….

"Preet kya baat hai…?tum kisse baat kar rahe ho….??"Prem asked .

Prem was shocked to see Preet in tears….

"Preet….bolo..?!!"he shaaked him ..his tone becaming harsh as he snatched his mobile….

"heer…?!!!tum Heer ko kyu…."

Preeth's eyes went to Veera and all eyes followed his ….

A gasp of shock followed…

"veera…."Balraj ran to her….

Veera was lying on the floor fainted still clutching the bangle….

"Preet yeh sab kya hai….Veera is haal main hai aur tum use dekhe bina Heer ko kyu phone kar rahe the…??"

Lalit looked at Preet in anger and confusion….

Preet sobbed and Prem hugged him….

"dad…main Preet ko dekhta hoo… aap dono ..aunty ko kamre main leke jayiye…."

Prem dragged Preet to his room…..

"Preet mujhe batao …bat kya hai…tum Heer se kya keh rahe the…..wo bhi itni der…almost 45 minutes…."Prem pushed the phone on to Preeth's face….

Preet covered his face with hands and….sobbed…

"Pb…main yeh baat …kaise kahoo..mujhe khud pata nahi ki kya ho raha hai…."

"matlab…tum mujhe saaf saaf kaho….."Prem was becoming impatient….kahi heer koi problem main to nahi hai….

Preet took a deep breath and looked at Prem…......

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Inder walked to his room with a heavy heart…..

He was not an alcoholic….and from his life he had learnt it clearly that his sorrows cannot be drowned in alcohol…..

But today he needed some help…just to get rid of her shocked face looming in front of his eyes….

Inder reached his room ……

Yeh lights…??.he wondered to himself and went in…..

The instant he stepped in he felt strange….

His eyes scanned the room and then he saw her……!

"Heer….tum….kya baat hai…beti….??" Inder ran to her worried….

Heer was seated on the floor clutching her knees….her eyes were red…and swollen….

Inder sat beside her but she moved back from him her face pouting like a crying kid….

It was then inder noticed the state of his room…..

His eyes went wide in shock as he saw Veera's portraits ……

A phone broken into pieces lay beside heer and …and she was clutching some papers…!

His eyes darted to the table and his heart sank……

She knew…!!!

Now she knew…!!!

"heer beta…main…"

"kuch mat kehna aap…"Heer sobbed hard…"kya kehne wale hai …ki aap …ki aap…"she couldn't say further and hugged Inder….

Tears were flowing from two pair of eyes uncontrollably…..

"I am sorry beta….lekin…main kahoo to tumse kya kahoo….tum Balraj ko papa mante the…aur mujhe pehle unse pata karna tha ki aakhir wo tumhe apna naam kyu de rahe hai…."

Heer looked at him stunned….her mind becoming alert hearing Balraj's name….and everything fell into correct places……

Balraj's sadness…..

Veera's fainting…..oh no….!!!maa ne papa ko dekh ke ….!!!

She looked at Inder in horror….

Inder made her getup and sat beside her on his bed….

"tum daro mat….Balraj ne mujhe saari baat batadi hai aur…humne decide kar liya hai ki …"he gulped the lump of sadness in his throat…

"ki…hum Veera se tumhare sachayi nahi batayenge…….."

Heer looked at him baffled…..

Inder looked at his daughter lovingly…..

"Veera ki apni zindgi hai….parivaar hai…..wo us se khush rahegi…..main tumhe khona nahi chahta heer….itne saal maine akela kaata….mere akelepan ka tumhe andaza bhi nahi laga sakthe…lekin aaj mujhe jeene ki vajah mil gaya hai.....aaj se mereliye sirf tum hi zindgi ho ..

He stroked her head …and wiped her tears….

"aur tumhare…papa aur mama hamesha khush rahenge.. yeh mera vada hai tumse…."Inder said refering to Balraj and Veera….

"Chachu….??!!!"

Gauri stood at the door bewildered….

Heer ran up to her and hugged her…smiling widely….

"dee…aap sach main meri di hai…."

Gauri looked at Inder and then her eyes went wide….

Veera aunty….!!!

to….heer ..veera aunty aur inder uncle ki beti hai….!!!

Gauri's eyes welled in joy….she had always regarded heer as her sister and today they got a true relation….

Inder explained to Gauri in few words how he came to know that heer was his daughter….

After some time Gauri left the room knowing that both dad and his girl had many things in their minds to share…

The rest of the night ..inder and heer sat up and shared their live's events all these years which each of them missed .

Originally posted by: premspadhu

congratulations for second thread
iam sorry iam late to comment on this update
my net connection is very weak that's y iam not post any comments
ok come to update
its just aweome
u revealed the truth to prem also
veera action is awesome
Inder is done a good job when he saw veera is condition
i think preet saw veera and inderjeet photo
i miss premeer scenes
u know verwell
i love this drama but i love to see only premeer scenes
its my weakness
that to u potrait the premeer romance in very intensive manner
i just love ur writing skills
everyday iam waiting for ur update
i love to see premeer married life
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update the premeer scenes
mean next part
iam waitinggggggggggggggggg frnd

hi pavni...thank you so much..

sorry for not putting premeer parts in this update...

i'll try to marry them off soon..hahaha...

lekin kuch drama ke baad....(me being ebil..)😡

Originally posted by: suryavani

and there fore no premeer in this part.... 😈