mini ff-'OUR WAYS' last part pg 16

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newt2007

@newt2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#61

nice

Prem met his sons.

wonderful. waiting to see how Prem reacts after knowing the truth.

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Annwesha

@annwesha09

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Posted: 15 years ago

#62

fantastic update !!!!!!

plz cont asap..

thnx a lot for ur pm.

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Nidhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#63

very nice n

awsome update

m commenting 4 the first time

really like this concept................................

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

n plz pm me if possible

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sonia7

@sonia7

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Posted: 15 years ago

#64

awesome update im glad prem saw his kids

and i hope they find out the turtth

thanks for the pm

update soon

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

fab update....

heer about to tell the kids that prem is their father was nice....

preet still running from hi bauji and prem saving him....😆

nice preview.....wonder which half of the truth is out.....

continue soon!

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mandy60

@mandy60

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

awesome update
plz continue soon

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

part 8

in evening heer is in her house and seeing moon and thought "i miss u prem i miss u" and break her vrat by seeing prem picture and on other hands juneja bahus were also ending their vrat and prem was seeing this and was crying and thought "i miss u heer i miss u" and the day end with two loving birds crying

next day

heer woke up eat breakfast and goes to office and sujal say "heer chalo humein jaana hai"
h:kahan
s:heer tum bhool gaye aaj humara contract sign hona hai junejas ke saath aur hum wahein ja rahein hain aab baatein mat karo aur chalo
after an hour they reach juneja empires and goes to the board room where all were sitting as sujal and heer entered in room prem say "welcome Mr.garewal"
s:come on prem no formalities call me sujal mein itna bhi buddha nahi hoon
prem:(by smiling):aao sujal
s:thats better
sujal and heer sit on the chairs and heer sit front of prem and then
prem:so lets sign the contract
s:yeah pr...........mean while heer phone starts ringing and she sees the name and it was from chota prem and heer say "sorry " and disconnect the call and thought "yeh loog bhi na aaj school nahi gaye aur mujhe disturb kar rahein hai ghar ja ke dekh loon gi inhein"
s:so pre.......again heer phone start ringing and again it was of chota prem again say "sorry woh...."
prem:its okay Mrs.juneja(saying by a huge smile on his face) aap call attend kar lein
h:thank u Mr.juneja (said with a fake smile) and get out from the room and pick up the call and say kya how a prem itni baar phone kyun kar rahein ho"
jr. prem:mom woh..........
h:woh kya???
jr.prem:mama woh mein preet aur chahat bahar khelne jaye kya
h:kyun kya howa ash massi ghar par nahi hai kya
jr. prem:nahi hai abhi uncle ke saath bhar gayein hai hain aur hum ghar mein bore ho rahein hain
h:acha theek hai lekin sambhal kar kehlna aur zayada sharartien mat karna
jr. prem:thank you mom ....love u and astala beestala babe
h:yeh tum ne preet ki language kab se sikh li
jr. prem:bas waise hi
h:acha chal bye
jr. prem:bye mom thank u love
and cut the call
heer says to herself "pagal larka" and with a huge smile again enter in room and all notice heer wide smile and sujal say "kya howa kis ka phone tha jo itna muskora rahi hoo"
h:kuch nahi woh prem ka phone tha aur keh raha tha keh..............realizing that all are seeing her she stopped and was very embarrass and say "sorry " and again sit on the chair and prem was only seeing heer and later on meeting was over and in evening heer went to home and as she entered in the house and see the house was empty and say "prem.....preet .....chahat kaha ho" but no replay again say "koi hain" but again no replay she was very tensed and then her phone rang and she picked it up and was very shocked and say "kya !!!!!mein abhi aa rahein hoo" and she disconnect the call and ran outside from the house sit in the taxi and drove to a house and when she entered in the house she was crying very badly say "prem" by screaming and all in the house were shocked to see heer and heer ran to the upstairs and see sr.prem standing outside the room and heer goes to the prem and say "prem...prem kahan hai ..woh theek to hai na...yeh sab kaise howa .....prem...."prem sees the crying heer and hug her and say "heer kuch nahi howa prem ko bus chota sa accident howa hai aur kuch nahi " and heer again say "chota sa .............prem ko itni chootein lagi hain aur tum keh rahein ho chota sa accident " and meanwhile she realize that they were still in hug and she leave prem and say "sorry " and goes to chota prem room and see preet and chahat are also there and when they see heer they run to heer and hug her and chota preet say "mom woh PB ..........."
h:kuch nahi howa woh theek hai
and by saying this she went to chota prem and see him sleeping and stroking his hair and after sometime chota prem get up and see heer and say "mama.........."
h:tum theek to ho na bata
jr. prem :haan ma mein theek hoon
h:acha khana kaaye ga
jr.prem:haan ma bohat bhook lagi hai
h:acha theek hai mein khana le kar aati hoon and by saying this she went outside and after few min she came with food tray and say "lo khana aagaya" and then start feeding her and after feeding her she says "acha chalo aab soo jao" and put him on bed and after sometime jr.prem fall asleep and listen a voice "mama mama"
heer say "aayi " and went downstairs and see all juneja family sitting in a dinning table and also see jr.preet and chahat there and jr.preet sees heer he say "mama" and heer went towards him and say "kya howa mere bete ko"
jr.preet:mom bohat bhook lag rahi hai
h:to kha lo na
jr.preet:mom plz aap khila do na
h:acha theek hai
prem was smiling seeing her life heer and his children and heer start feeding her and then chahat say "mama aapne chahat ko kabhi itne pyaar se nahi khilaya"
h:acha.....to yeh tum lo and feed chahat and after that they both feed heer and kiss her on her on her cheeks and heer say"thank you shona" and meanwhile sr.preet think a mischief and say "acha bacho yeh batao keh is duniya mein kitne chand hain" after listening to their question all burst out laughing and bauji say "preet" in anger
gungun say "papa one"
chota preet :two
sr.preet ask "woh koun koun se???"
jr.preet:ek woh asmaan wala aur doosra yeh(pointing toward bauji)
listening to his answer all burst out laughing and heer say "preet bado se aise baat nahi karte"
jr.preet:sorry mama (making a puppy face)
h:its okay par dobara se aisi baat mat karna
sr.preet:its okay bhabhi waise itna samjhdar bhatija mera hi ho sakta hai
jr.preet:mom yeh bhatija koun hota hai???
h:beta woh..........
a voice came "heer" all see towards the door and heer say"ash" and runs toward her and hug her
ash:heer prem kaisa hai
h:woh theek hai abhi soo raha hai
and ash start coming inside and preet say "ruk jao ash" and heer and ash was shock

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