Dooriyan - Meet FF part 12 page 21 8/20 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Reserved ( will unreserve on friday 😆 ) .. shd I paste my comment on the 1st two parts here too ? 😆

btw no PMs ?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ONLY FOR TADASHI
DAILY I CHECK ALL UR FF LIKE A FOOL,BUT DONT GET THE NEXT PART ANYWHERE😭
I AM NOT WELL FOR LAST FEW DAYS BUT STILL I WUD KEEP CHECKING UR MEET FF'S & MEET ONESHOTS AND ALL THE OTHER MEET FF'S OF ALL THE OTHER WRITERS TILL U & ALL OF THEM UPDATE THEM.
BINA LAPTOP KE ITNE DIN KAISE RAHOGI,MAIN TO 1 DIN BHI BINA COMPUTER KHOLE NAHI REH SAKTI,PLZZZZ JALDI APNE LAPTOP KA KUCH KARO AUR APNE SARE MEET FF'S & MEET ONESHOTS UPDATE KARO.
BEST OF LUCK FOR ALL UR UPCOMING EXAMS👍🏼
AS SOON AS U GET TIME PLZZZZZZZ UPDATE ALL UR MEET FANFICS & ONESHOTS & SEND ME A LINK OF THEM IN UR PM SO THAT I CAN GET THEIR NAMES EASILY BACAUSE I FORGET SOME NAMES.
Edited by monaghosh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
another meet ff!!!! 😃
just read the first 3 chaps......👏👏👏👏
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
ITS FABULOUS👏 I JUST READ THE THIRD PART OF MEET FF DOORIYA,EAGER TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN NEET DURING HOLI😍UPDATE SOON.
THANKS FOR UPDATING ATLEAST THIS FF,SORRY FOR REQUESTING U AGAIN & AGAIN TO UPDATE ALL UR MEET FF & ONESHOTS.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I JUST NOW READ THE THIRD PART OF MEET FF DOORIYA,ITS AMAZING👏REALLY EAGER TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN MEET DURING HOLI😍UPDATE SOON.
THANKS FOR UPDATING ATLEST THIS ONE,SORRY FOR REQUESTING U AGAIN & AGAIN TO UPDATE ALL UR MEET FANFICS & ONESHOTS & DISTURBING U.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Part 4

I looked at her confused. Then I figured she thought i was prem bhaiyya, and she must be Heer.
" Ma ne tumhare baare mein bhi yehi kaha tha. Likin jis taare se tumne mujhe bhiga dia, tum bhi kahi se seedi nahi lagti ho." I said.
"Ab seedhi saadhi hone mein kya maza hai?" meher said twirling her hair. "Khair, welcome to the family. I think hum dono ka khoob banegi." meher said extending her hand.I was shocked. I thought brides in India would be shy, she was more forward then any girl I knew.
I wanted to tease my new bhabhi a little bit, after all if she was so forward I could be too.
I took her hand and pulled her close into me and whispered, "Mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai." I kissed her hand and winked. Her eyes grew wide and she ran away.
I decided she would be terrible for PB. PB would never like a girl who was welcoming her husband to the family after two minutes and dumping pichkaris on him. I decided to talk to PB that night.......
"PB!" I screamed as I entered the house.
PB didn't respond.......he was staring at the moon. "Uhh PB mujhe abse Heer ke baare mein."
"Preet, woh kitni achi hain na? I think mujhe love at first ssight hogaya hai." prem said in his dreamy state.
"KYA!?" I shrieked. "Woh ladki toh pagal hai, aur woh mujhe Prem samaj thi hai, toh pir app usse kaise mile.....?" I was so confused.
"Yeh tu kya keh raha hai? Ma ne mujhe heer se milaye, aur woh bohut achi hai." prem said.
"ek minute..Is she tall , dark brown hair, a little chubby, round eyes...?" I said
"Nahi toh, heer is really thin..." prem said
"Ab aap koh kya pata, you think mom is skinny too" i said as I left to figure out this heer chakkar.....
I went to Ma and I asked her about heer, and what she looked like. Ma showed me a picture. I had definitely nmt met heer. I told mom about the girl I met, and she chuckled. She said I must have met heer's sister, meher. Ithen told her about meher thought I was prem bhaiyya. I asked for mom's help in getting meher back. She was hesitant at first, but I convinced her.
Now i waited for the next day when we went for the moo mitha.
Hey guys I updated from preet's pov b/c he is telling the story, but is it okay if I switched to third person? I am more comfortable that way/
Edited by tadashi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Wonderfull FF! Love the storyline so far, hmmm so Preet and Meher are married probably for their parents sake, and Preet thinks Meher has a kid... since they are going back to india, they'll have to pretend to be husband and wife and hopefully there will be lots of Meet scenes, please update soon cant wait to read more.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I dont know how I missed this

I look forward to reading more of this 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I JUST NOW READ THE THIRD PART OF MEET FF DOORIYA,ITS AMAZING👏REALLY EAGER TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN MEET DURING HOLI😍UPDATE SOON.
THANKS FOR UPDATING ATLEST THIS ONE,SORRY FOR REQUESTING U AGAIN & AGAIN TO UPDATE ALL UR MEET FANFICS & ONESHOTS & DISTURBING U.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Hey guys! I hada little time so I updated part 4. Sorry I havent updated...its really hard to get on w/o a computer.

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