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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys! So I finally got a moment, so I am starting a thread for this ff! i am still not sure if it even is an ff. I am still not sure of the story line either lol😆 But Here you guys go:

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<p align="center"><font color="#993300" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Yeh dooriyan
Yeh dooriyan
Yeh dooriyan

In raahon ki dooriyan
Nigahon ki dooriyan
Hum rahon ki dooriyan
Fanah ho sabhi dooriyan

Kyun koi paas hai
Door hai Kyun koi
Jaane Na koi yahan pe

Aa Raha paas ya door mein ja raha
Janu na mein hoon kahan pe </p>

This Is a Tale of love and circumstance(isn't every telly serial?😆) I am not exactly sure where the story is headed or whether it is a ss or ff, So please bear with me! And as always, I am COMPLETLY open to suggestions!😳

I also will be updating on this thread and the parts will be short. Simply because I will update whenever I have time.

Okay So Lets get started:

<div align="center">Yeh Dooriyan

"Hide Me!" Preet told his friend Raj as he rushed to hide behind a rack of sweaters.

"Why?" Raj said as he spotted two gorgeous girls sifting through scarves a few aisles away.

"Are you trying to hide from those two pretty girls?" raj said as he adjusted his shirt and prepared to flirt.

"Yes, the one on the left." preet said trying tomove price tags out of his eyes.

Raj examined the girl in question. She was tall with brautiful brown hair, pale skin with rosy cheeks, She smiled brightly, and her ees were beautiful. She was a little chubby, but gorgeous. He was confused as to why preet would hide from such a pretty girl.

"Preet, she is hot. Why are you hiding from her?"

"because she is my wife....." Preet said in a guilt filled tone.

Raj's jaw dropped. "Preet, mazak band kar. I have known you for years. What did you do get secretly married and not tell anyone?"

"Shut up, yaar. Mein tumhe sab kuch baata that hoon, bas tu yahan se chal."

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<div align="center">As Preet and Raj were slipping out of the store, preet took a good look at Meher.It had beensix monthssince they had last met. </div>
<div align="center">She looked beautiful, her hair was lighter, she was a little thinner, her skin had some color to it, but what made her more beautiful at that moment was the way her eyes lit up. </div>
<div align="center">His eyes followed Meher's to see what, or rather who, had lit up Meher's face. He saw a man, his age, with a newborn. The man hugged meher tghtly and planted a kiss on her cheek.</div>
<div align="center">Preet felt strange when he saw that man kiss meher, but he felt even stranger when he saw meher's wide smile in response to the peck on her cheek.</div>
<div align="center">Meher took the baby from her hands and cradled him, as the man talked to Meher's friend.</div>
<div align="center">A million questions ran through Preet's mind, as he stood rooted to his spot. He remembered when they had boarded the flight to Canada, 6 months ago, she had been reading books regarding pregnancy and new borns. He couldn't help but wonder if she had been pregnant when they had gotten married. Is that why she wanted to leave as badly as he had?</div>
<div align="center">Preet was snapped out of his trance, by Raj pulling on his sleeve. "Preet!" raj said in a whisper.</div>
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<div align="center">"Haan, kya hai?" preet said dtill in his thoughts.</div>
<div align="center">"Tumari Wife!" raj said shaking his head in disapprovement at Preet's inability to pay attention. </div>
<div align="center">Preet looked over and understood what Raj had been trying to tell him. Meher had spotted him and was walking over to him. </div>
<div align="center">"Hi Preet." Meher said semi awkwardly as she hugged him. Preet was surprised at the gesture, but he hugged her back. it felt familiar. </div>
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<div align="center"><strong>What are they going to talk about? Stay tuned! Part 2 will be short. In Part 3, I will try to remove all the confusion!</div></font></div>

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 2

"Preet, tum kaise ho?" meher said timidly.

Preet, who was just as uncomfortable, said, "Mein theek hoon, Meher. Tum kaisi ho?" preet said.

"Uhh, who main theek hoon. Actually, acha hua ke tum mujhe mile. Mein wapis India ja rahi hoon kuch din ke liye. Bauji ki taibet kharab ho gayi hai aur Ma ne ghar bulaya hai. Don't worry, i will tell them that you are extremely bus and cant make it. Likin tum kya ek dafa call kar sakte ho, thake ma aur bauji ko thasili ho?" meher said with hopeful eyes.

Preet was shocked. He knew how much Meher's father meant to her. He was the reason Meher had married Preet. He couldn't let her go to India b herself. Even if their relationship wasn't real, they still had an undeniable bond. "Meher, tum kaisi baat kar rahi ho. Mein tumhari saath jaonga. Waisi bhi mujhe bhi tumari bauji se milna hai."

"Nahi preet, Hum ne 6 maine pehle decide kar liya that ke hum alag zindagi jeenge. If you come things will get more complicated, plus I don't want you to have get entangled in my problems. Waise bhi, pir hume aur natak karna parega. " meher protested.

"Meher. I am coming with you. Whatever our relationship is, our family is the same. Aur mujhe tere bauji se alag waja se milna hai. Humne shart lagayi thi on India vs. England aur tumhare bauji haar gaye. Hisab barabar karna hai!" preet said winking at meher trying to alleviate the tension she had regarding her buaji.

"Preet I really don't think it is a good……….." Meher was saying before preet cut her off.

He placed his finger on her lips. "Shh, meher. I have decided I am going to India whether or not we go together, to visit my bauji.

Meher smiled and nodded in agreement as she tried to control her tears. She had forgotten how wonderful he was.

He slowl placed his hand on her cheek in an attempt to wipe he tears. She backed away, "Um preet I should go." She said. Preet, trying to disguise his motive for his hand in the air by brushing his hand through his hair, said "yeah, I will call you about the flight."

Meher smiled again, "Oh preet my number changed." She gave him her new number and left with out looking back. She tried to catch her breath as she went over everything that just transpired between them.

Preet on the other hand, stared at meher's retreating figure. Raj who was immensely confused by now, snapped his fingers in front of preet's face. "You have a lot of explaining to do" raj said to preet. Preet nodded solemnly as they left the shop.

Confused you more didn't I? The plot is actually very simple and very Balaji-ish. I promise to clear the confusion for you guys and Raj in the next part!

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natasha

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"Preet, you have confused me so much. What was all that talk about India? And If you are married than why aren't you with her?"

"I will tell you everything.Just listen..."Last year bauji made us move to India. Do you remember when Bauji chased me with the plane ticketin order to make me go? Raj chuckled at the memory. Preet continued...I thought it was absurd that PB was going to marry some random girl that he had never met before. What if she didn't even speak english? What if she was ugly? What if her personality didn't match PB? But bauji was admanant. He had made a promise to his best friend when we had left India that PB would marry his daughter. Now his friend had cancer, so he wanted to move back to India.

* Flashback One Year Ago*

Woh log ka ghar itna bura nahi tha. We stayed there until our house was fixed. There daughters weren't home when we came. They had gone to visit a cousin in Delhi. I remember veera, harman bhai, and i slept the entire first day we were there because of Jet lag. Ma forced us to wake up as the next day was Holi. Holi in India is a completely different affair. Woh log pagal ki tara khel the hai! mere liye tho perfect tha! I was observing the girls at the Holi party, when a girl came up to me and completely soaked me in colors with the pitchkari. i turned around, furious, to find her laughing with several other girls. She quickly ran away. Main ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ke woh ti kaun, likin woh bohut pretty thi. Main uske paas gaya aur pucha, "Excuse me, likin kya mein pooch sakta is meherbaani ki waja?"
"Ma said you were the shy type, likin tum shy kahin se nahin lag the." meher said looking me up and down.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Heyyyyyy how r u???

btw i read this the other u told me to. i just didnt get time to comment😳 i m quite busy with uni, family matters, PR forum awards, nd when i hav time left i update my ffs😳 really busy time going on. i will b done with my finals on april 17 🥳 which is pretty close 😍 ok bak to the ff😆

firstly, its nicely written(as usual)!! preet got married secretly🤣 u know i watched dulha mil gaya some time ago nd after watching i thought i wud write a ff on it (even though i didnt like the movie😆 but i wud change some things nd it wud luk cute on meet😉) nd then i gave up the idea as i didnt have time😳. so i m glad u used that secret marriage thing!! it was so funny that preet was hiding from meher😆they seem like a normal couple. i mean meher was polite to him when she met him again. nd i m sure that baby is not meher's!! i m waiting for preet to tell the story just like raj!! its so confusing but gud!! i wonder what happened one year ago 😍

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natasha

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Originally posted by: unknown18
Heyyyyyy how r u???

btw i read this the other u told me to. i just didnt get time to comment😳 i m quite busy with uni, family matters, PR forum awards, nd when i hav time left i update my ffs😳 really busy time going on. i will b done with my finals on april 17 🥳 which is pretty close 😍 ok bak to the ff😆

firstly, its nicely written(as usual)!! preet got married secretly🤣 u know i watched dulha mil gaya some time ago nd after watching i thought i wud write a ff on it (even though i didnt like the movie😆 but i wud change some things nd it wud luk cute on meet😉) nd then i gave up the idea as i didnt have time😳. so i m glad u used that secret marriage thing!! it was so funny that preet was hiding from meher😆they seem like a normal couple. i mean meher was polite to him when she met him again. nd i m sure that baby is not meher's!! i m waiting for preet to tell the story just like raj!! its so confusing but gud!! i wonder what happened one year ago 😍

thanks sid! I am kind of confused too😆 I am not exactly sure what direction i am going in. Its not turning out like I wanted it to. 😕 I have never seen duhla mill gaya...who is in it?

Don't be so sure about the baby......😉

After preet tells the story of how he met meher, we will have some fun with them on the plane ride home, but that is as far as I have planned. in fact i don't even know what story preet is going to tell yet! 😆 thanks for commenting! my laptop is still broken and my so is my sister's. so we fight to use the computers. I have a powerpoint i am working on right now.

See you later alligator!

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Posted: 15 years ago

i m confused too abt my ffs😆 well dulha mil gaya was not that gud. it had fardeen khan, some new girl😕, sushmita sen, nd srk (not a big role but i liked him!). it was abt a rich spoiled guy who never wanted to get married. his father died. his will said that his son wud get all the money nd property only if he married samarpreet (a girl in india) nd sum more conditions. so he goes there nd marries her nd leave her there nd goes bak to his country. samarpreet already fell in love with him. the guy doesnt contact the girl so she goes to his country nd finds him. she sees his true self nd decides to go bak to india. sushmita sen finds the girl nd tells her to get her husband bak. so samarpreet has a makeover nd looks all glamourous that her husband cant even recognize her. she teaches him a lesson. the guy realizes his mistakes nd rejects the glamourous girl for his wife. samarpreet reveals herself.

did u get it?😆

well the baby better b meet's or someone else's or else... 😈

i want a fun romantic story 😍 oh u dont know the story? ask preet!! he will help u 😉 🤣 i miss him 😭

oh i hate fighting for computer but thankfully now i hav my own (nd my brother too). now we hav a spare computer so nobody fights😆

all the best for the presentation!!

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natasha

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Posted: 15 years ago

aww thanks! i have to think...what would preet do!

lets just say it will take them a long time to realize they love each other!

you should do a meet ff on humtum1 that is one of my favorite stories! and meet would be perfect for it!

if i watch dmg it will be for srk! i still haven't seen mnik. I am waiting for my parents to get back from their cruise. my mom made me promise i wouldnt watch it with out her .lol

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Posted: 15 years ago

yes what wud PREET do...!

the longer they take, the longer will b the ff 😆 right?? 😉

i will think abt any new ff after april 17th!! well april 19th since i will b sleeping for at least 2 days😆
meet wud luk so cute in humtum 😍

ur mom is on a cruise nd u r here waiting for her to watch mnik?? 😆 if i were in ur place then i wud tell my mom that take me on a cruise too (with u or without u!) nd i wont watch the movie!!😆