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Posted: 15 years ago
Chapter 64
Getting dressed for the shoot and then having to walk up the hill was not at all easy. Veronika Hammond and Alexis were moving in and out of the large hall that doubled as a lobby in the castle. The large truck parked outside had the clothes. The huge French windows in the hall were opened out to the lawn. There was a slight warm breeze. Heer and her two sidekicks were being as fast as they could. Dressing with practised ease. The trials had been a help. Time was of the essence. They needed to be up on that hill at the right time to catch the right light.
Suddenly Prem came in through the doors. He trained his eyes on all three models. He was, as usual, not happy with the first attempt. There were raised voices, frazzled nerves. Heer didn't appreciate being ordered to hurry up.
"Prem! We are moving as fast as we can. You should have thought this out a bit more! We have to cart ourselves up the hill now. I'm not looking forward to it!"
"It's just you and what you're wearing. That's all you have to cart up there. I'm not asking for the moon am I?"
The arguing continued, so did the dressing. Veronika pronounced that it was all done and walked out, hoping the others would follow.
The two models, who were by now used to being the onlookers, didn't budge, while Prem tried to be helpful and moved a wisp of hair away from Heer's collar. The past weeks of pent up frustration burst through the dam and Heer launched into a tirade. Prem was treated to a lecture on how his arrogance and complete disregard for his colleagues had inconvenienced everyone and how she couldn't believe that Hardikar and Fari had accommodated him and given him everything he demanded. Prem had heard enough and motioning to the other two he led the way outside.
"I'm talking to you!"
But Heer was forced to follow the rest out into the garden and across the lawn.
Meanwhile, on another hillock, facing the shoot location, a quarter of a mile away, Fari and Hardikar were ensconced in two rather posh deck chairs. A nearby tree offered some shade. The castle staff had laid out afternoon tea on a plaid blanket in the grass. Cucumber sandwiches, various canapes, mocktails and plenty of crushed ice. Fari had her binoculars permanently glued to her eyes. Hardikar noisily dredged the last of her mocktail through a straw.
"Ooh! There they are. They seem to be going to the spot now." Fari reported to Hardikar.
"And?"
"Ooh! This reminds me of Jane Eyre!"
"Fari, don't get your classics mixed up. You were supposed to be Emma and get these two married."
"No but this scene is Jane Eyre!"
"Why? What's happening?"
"Get your own binoculars!"
"Why should I when you are watching them like a hawk and reporting to me?"
"Is there no limit to your stinginess?"
"This isn't stinginess. It's just plain common sense!"
"Prem is leading the rest like the Pied Piper....haha!.....closely followed by an angry Heer"
"Good God! Angry Heer? This doesn't sound good."
"The two sidekicks are following Heer and Veronika is trying to follow. Why do designer chicks think that the whole world is a ramp and try to walk in heels everywhere?"
Hardikar was munching on sandwiches now.
"Ok finally they are at the spot. Prem is walking round and round and Heer is stalking him and saying something."
"Are they still arguing? The sun will go down if they don't hurry."
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"This is the last time I will be manipulated Prem! The last time!"
"Heer, I really don't think this is the right time."
"Oh you don't? Well who cares?!!"
Heer's voice was so loud that it must have carried over the hills.
Prem got hold of Heer by the shoulders and spun her around. He made her face the opposite hill and pointed at Fari and Hardikar.
"Do it for them!"
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"Amu........."
"What?"
"Prem is pointing at us."
"Lemme see!"
"Get your own binoculars!"
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Heer was winded for a second. But the sight of those two soon got her yelling again. By now Veronika had made it up there and Alexis had also joined them. The two sidekicks watched anxiously. Even they now realised that they were running out of time. The sun would lose the afternoon glow. Prem on the other hand looked calm. His earlier nerves and restlessness had gone. He put his hands on his waist and waited for Heer to cool down. He gave her a level look. She looked at him. Yes he knew that she wouldn't let them all down. Yes, he knew that this wasn't over. And yes, he was prepared to lose this opportunity to take some great pictures, if that's what she really wanted. The wordless communication happened in seconds.
Heer posed for Prem.
Edited by locman - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome
and fari and hadikar are just hilarious lol
heer is frustrated but prem is none the less hehehhe 😛
update soon
Edited by sonia7 - 15 years ago
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Chapter 65
"Woah! Posing poooooossssiing!"
"Lemme see na!"
"Get your own !!!!"
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Dinner at the castle was full of buzz and chatter. The excitement of the day was catching up with everyone. The buffet was laid out in a large patio. Daylight still. Veronika was ooing aaaing to Fari and assuring her that the magazine cover was as good as done. Heer had been magnificent. Prem was a master at what he did and all would be well.
Heer treated herself to a slightly larger meal than usual. The salmon was a treat that couldn't be passed up. Prem was tucking into some cold cuts and salad. Hardikar was at his elbow, asking him what had really happened on the hill that afternoon. Heer was watching him. He knew it without looking. In between mouthfuls, he talked to Hardikar, and basked in the warm glow of being eyed at by Heer. Oh life was sweet!
Finally Heer managed to get over her pride and came and sat next to him with a bowl of fruit. She offered it to him and he picked out a strawberry.
"Job well done Heer. Everyone thinks so."
"Oh ya. There was no question about that. We were lucky with the weather too."
"So....do you still think all those nasty things about me?"
"I've always thought those things about you."
"And you're not going to change your opinion any time soon?"
"Does my opinion even matter to you?"
Suddenly the friendly bantering mood changed, the rest of the room and the people seemed to fade out and it was just them. Prem reached for her hand. Heer looked intently at him. If this was going to work, they needed to start again. And she wanted this to work.
"I've never taken you for granted Heer. Never."
Heer nodded, "But you sometimes lose it when you're in a creative haze. Yes I know. And I understand."
Prem's eyes widened,
"Then why did you scream like a banshee at me?"
"Because I need to be more than just your prop, your shield and your model."
"My what?!!"
Heer disengaged her hand from his and walked out into the garden. Prem followed.
They stood in the lawn.
"Heer.......
"Prem, do you feel safe with me?"
"I trust you."
Heer's eyes welled up.
"You do?"
Prem held out his arms,
"I do."
Heer went to him and finally, she was home.
Fari was at the French windows, looking at the scene in the garden. She had a satisfied grin on her face. "Job well done Fari," she said to herself, "Job well done!"
**********No, this is not the end. More to come.....****************
Edited by locman - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww they made up
so heer is opening up to prem
after all their job is well done
but more to come?
i hope no more arguments lol
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Chapter 66
"What do you mean, you did it? What did you do? Huh!"
Hardikar was standing in her room, electric toothbrush in one hand, listening to Fari take credit for a major breakthrough in the Prem-Heer story. Fari tut tutted away Hardikar's remarks.
"I dreamed up this whole idea. When Prem ran away, I found a way to bring him back!" Fari dramatised her statement by miming a cowboy throwing a lasso.
"Ya ya. This is still romantic Scotland, where everyone is sugary sweet to each other. Wait till we get back to London."
"Hah! You just wait and watch!" Fari had a smug smile.
Hardikar slammed the door on her and went to bed.
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Back in London, everyone admired the proofs. And Prem and Heer were congratulated. It was hard to tell if they were celebrating the pictures or their engagement. The assumption was that Prem had proposed in Scotland. At least that was what Fari would have everyone believe. No one dared ask the couple. But certainly the atmosphere was far more relaxed.
They had all returned to London the next morning. Both Heer and Prem looked well rested to Fari. That could only mean that they had had an early night. Fair enough, the day had been exhausting. Physically and emotionally. Not even Prem had the kind of energy that kept Fari awake all night. But what were they planning to do? When would they make the big announcement?
Heer had only one thought now. How to tell her mother. But of course! There was a brilliant way to break the news.
"Prem, I was thinking…."
"uh-oh!"
Heer ignored that,
"Why not go to Leeds this weekend?"
"No, that won't be right!"
Heer looked innocently at Prem,
"Why not? What d'you mean?"
"I mean, I can't just turn up at your mother's doorstep and expect her to accept me."
"She adores you!"
"That was before I had intentions."
Heer giggled,
"Intentions?"
"You have to tell her first and let her get used to the idea."
"Didn't you two cook up a plan?"
"Now you're being paranoid!"
"No. I've just got very good intuition. I think you should call her and tell her the good news."
Prem nearly blushed with embarrassment. But Heer was adamant. So Prem made the call.
*************More to come***************
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow you are so fast today
is it cus u want to end this ff quickly lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
😆 yup Sonia....am trying to finish by tomorrow. Let's see if it makes sense. Is it making sense to you?........if it doesn't , dont worry, i understand! 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh wow prem proposed heer
and they got engaged amazing
so heer found out that prem and his mother had a plan to get them together
prem got caught lol

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: locman

😆 yup Sonia....am trying to finish by tomorrow. Let's see if it makes sense. Is it making sense to you?........if it doesn't , dont worry, i understand! 🤣


hey of course it makes sense to me
i have been reading this ever since you started writting this ff and to my knowledge i dont think i missed any chapter 😛
😆
aww so u are going to end it by tomorrow
i wil definitely miss it
and i hope you start another ff or ss 😊 soon
and this ff is great
😊
actually not great its excellent 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sonia, you are a sweetheart.
i'm going to cry now....😭
sigh!
Will continue tomorrow...........

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