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Posted: 15 years ago
Estee, there are already 2 master manipulators in the tale - Fari and Hardikar, so one more shouldn't be a problem.
And I have to say that people like the Fari-Hardikar jodi just as much as Premeer 😲....so umm...I feel I have to give them what they want.
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Posted: 15 years ago
😆 y'know what i like most about the f-h duo? they're sooo good at manipulating the world to make prem-heer happen. and yet, they themselves are being manipulated by the prem-heer phorces, no?

they will put aside ancient rivalry, and even merge two fiercely competing companies -- ya, ya, i know all the business reasons. hogwash, i say! just a well-thought out front for the real reason -- just to get prem-heer together.

in the end, they too are just another set of chess-pieces in the real game. not pawns certainly. more like the bishops, i guess. but they too move to make prem-heer happen. *smug muh of apparently deep understanding*

manipulated and manipulators.
foe and friends
we are all equal,
in the end.


(ya, that's part of a song. and i know you can't hear the music, 'cause it's just in my head. but aren't the lyrics profound? well, except for the first line -- the original song has something else, i think. 😆)
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Posted: 15 years ago
^^ 😆 you have a point there.
except Premeer are manipulating without being aware they are so ebil (ok three quarters of the forum are victims this unintended ebilness too).
imagine being manipulative so and so's and not even knowing it! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: locman

except Premeer are manipulating without being aware they are so ebil (ok three quarters of the forum are victims this unintended ebilness too).
imagine being manipulative so and so's and not even knowing it! 😆



manipulation is ebil only if it is done purposefully, no?

if it's unintended, that's not ebil. just... all encompassing and all powerful.

omg. just what the world does not need -- benevolent manipulators!
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Chapter 62
Prem and Alexis went over the clothes one last time. Heer was the only model present. The other two would join them in Scotland. The concentration was fierce and hardly a word was being spoken. Tweed was an old man's fabric and here Prem was giving it a modern feminine twist. Heer had instantly liked the idea. A traditional arasaid worn from the shoulder,pleated and tucked in at the waist. A Celtic dress in tweed, worn by an Asian. It appealed on many levels. Underneath was a skirt, not quite a kilt, that just barely touched the floor when Heer knelt. The blouse was a silken seventeenth century pirate shirt. Alexis counted and recounted every piece of clothing. Heer helped with the accessories. The broaches and clasps that held these majestic swathes of cloth in place. Finally they were ready.
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Glen Findle was a magnificent edifice beside a lake. Crowding round on all sides was breathtaking scenery. Rolling hills dipping out of sight and rising again in the distance. A brilliant blue sky, quite unlike the grey that covered most of England. Even a small meadow on one hillside with wild flowers and the occasional tree. The fashion crew took a while to adjust to their surroundings. All the way from Edinburgh airport to the estate they hadn't paid attention to what they were driving through. There was just too much to worry about and double check. In the SUV, Prem,Heer,Alexis and the terrible twins Fari and Hardikar were a bundle of nerves. This was it. Make or break time. The weather could scuttle everything for a start. So they prayed that the beautiful sunshine would hold for two days. Shanu was the designated driver and was the calmest. The soothing voice of the GPS navigator was certainly helping.
Inside the castle, the staff were friendly and efficient and conducted a quick tour for everyone before showing them to their rooms. Prem was glad to be back on his feet after a few hours cooped up travelling. He strode out of the castle into the courtyard, the gravel crunching under his boots. Fari was admiring the grounds.
"Prem, no time to waste. We need to scout around for some good spots right now!"
"Ya. You've got the binoculars?"
"Yes, ok let's go!"
"Hey! Wait!"
Heer saw them walking off and went after them.
"Hold up you two! Where are you going anyway?"
Fari slowed but Prem continued his brisk pace up a gentle incline towards a small collection of trees.
"Heer, we have to get cracking and find a good spot."
"We have sunlight till 10 pm. I don't think we need to go tearing off into the woods now."
"Let him go and do his thing. If you like, you go back inside and relax."
Heer looked slightly disappointed,
"I thought I'm supposed to keep an eye on him."
Fari clucked and gave Heer a reassuring squeeze,
"You seem very worried."
Heer didn't say anything. She wasn't worried. Not anymore. That chat Prem had with her mother had been quite long. When she had returned to Vanilla after yelling at Fari and Hardikar, Prem was STILL chatting. God only knows what was said. She was never going to ask him or her mother. But she knew that somehow it had helped Prem. He had relaxed a tiny bit. Beyond that she couldn't say what he was thinking. There was probably nothing but this shoot on his mind now anyway. She, on the other hand, had plenty of time to think. They were thrown together in the office again. He affected her just by his physical presence again. She was resenting it again. Some things never seemed to change.
But, there was also something else now. Heer realised that she had actually missed him when he left FarOut. His way of slipping into her consciousness, being a part of everything she did. Even her regular conversations with her mother seemed to have Prem as a silent third person listening in. And now the October Issue. Heer loved everything Prem had envisioned for it. The quirkiness, the confidence and yet not letting go of a proud tradition. It was just so thoroughly British. Fari had wanted to celebrate British fashion. Heer couldn't think of a better way to do it than this.
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Chapter 63
Hardikar welcomed Veronika Hammond and the two other models to Glen Findle. Fari, Prem and Heer were out deciding on locations. Prem had other reasons to be excited about this shoot here in these highlands. His mind's eye was seeing Heer dressed like a Scottish Marchioness, the backdrop framing her like a heroine. His heroine. Mrs Maan had been very wise as usual. Heer was too headstrong and independent to ever declare her love to him openly. He would never hear the words, "I love you" from her.
Here she was, following him up a slope, keeping a discreet distance. Prem turned around abruptly and asked her for an opinion,
"What d'you think?"
Heer stopped and looked around. Fari was way behind, walking up with deliberate steps, like she was stalking deer.
"So, you want me to stand, where exactly?"
"Where you are is fine."
Prem drew a diagram and marked the spot. In a few hours, if they could get everyone organised, he could start. The sun just needed to be slightly closer to the horizon. Late afternoon. Heer and Prem walked back down again towards the castle. They passed Fari on the way down, who said she would stay and bird watch with her binoculars. They managed to keep a straight face and kept walking.
"I see Fari is as mad as ever."
Heer was glad he had spoken first,
"It's genius. It usually manifests as madness."
"Ah! Loyal as ever."
"Not that you would know much about that."
Heer regretted saying it, but it was too late. Prem however was strangely oblivious to what she had said. He changed the topic,
"Are you completely comfortable in the clothes? I mean I know I should have asked you weeks ago but, how do you feel when you wear them?"
This was often the first question a model is asked and here Prem was asking at the last possible moment.
"I feel in control, in command. I feel feminine."
Prem had a satisfied smile which he half hid from Heer. He had not only captured the modern British look, he had encapsulated Heer. He was really quite good at what he did. He turned to look at Heer, who met his gaze with a slight smile. He almost returned the smile, but Mrs Maan was right. Let her sweat a little. Prem dropped his gaze, picked up the pace and made his way to the castle. Heer was momentarily surprised at the sudden change in mood. She watched him go like the wind and sighed. Time to get back to work.
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Posted: 15 years ago
You update like waaaay to fast! 😆
Got so much to read
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh so Mrs Maan will another helping hand in getting Premeer together!not bad haan 😆 Good going anu and i like the fact that youre a fast updater! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Anu awesome updates....You are such a fab writer...every update is just perfect...and I love the humour in them added in the name of Fari..and I love Mama Maan too
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Posted: 15 years ago
intresting
so heer's mother is helping prem lol
awesome update

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