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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey great update but very short
please update soon
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Radz Di!!!!!!!! *Big Humongous Hug*

Dude. We haven't talked in AGES! Where have you been? I missed you sooooo much! :( Heh. Who am I to be talking, I've been missing in action too :P lol, but I do come on I-F occasionally mostly as a silent reader. =)

I cannot believe you forgot about this SS! :( The story is awesome! I want to read the wholeeee thing! kay? So ur gonna update more often, for my sake? Please??? 😊 With a cherry on top? hehe. 😉 😆

Love,
Garima

P.S. We gots to talk, it's been AGES! Miss youu! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
awesome part!!!!
waiting to see how chahat unites prem and heer.....
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Aashifa: yup it is. hope you're feeling better. *hugs*

@ amu142: me too! thanks. :)

@ mandy60: thanks. will do.

@ --pie--: thank you! glad you're enjoying it.

@ sinak: I agree. but they didn't, and it didn't, so we'll make do with stories and our memories of what the show used to be!

@ Meera: lol. no comment.

@ Ayesha103: added!

@ Fatima: comment on the next part together with this one? lol.

@ samrocking30: thank you!

@ sonia7: thanks.

@ yasu09: thank you!

@ Garima: OHMYGOD GARI!!!!!!!! *huggles* it's been ages and ages! how are you?? I've been here, only not in this section? lol. you? where the heck have you been? ohmygod, how have things been? you, PM me sometime soon! I'll direct you to my current haunts, and you can join me there! 😆 I'm updating because of this comment. else I'd have forgotten about this. Again! haha. I love you Gari! PM me soon! :D missed you!

@ v_nikhita18: thank you! update coming soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
part four is here! one more part to go, then we're done! don't expect any elaborate scheme or anything k? I wrote this in a day. the whole thing, all five parts. it was an experiment. I'm surprised so many of you are enjoying it actually!

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Rajveer reaches the next day, and almost immediately he receives an invite from Preet for dinner. He agrees readily, putting off running into Heer for at least a few hours. He does not know how he can keep something so big from his friend when they are face-to-face.

Dinner is a pleasant affair. The people around the table are all part of the plan. All genuinely want to bring Heer and Chahat back into Prem's life. He senses a shift in the dynamics of the family. Preet and Meher have (finally, he thinks) moved away from just friendship. Lalit and Preet have grown closer. Harman has become stronger, there is steel in his eyes. Maya has grown more mature and caring. Their love has grown into a more stable one. The only two that have remained as what he remembers are Kulraj and Kiran.

They discuss, in depth, how they are going to manage to break the wedding. Maya (rather enthusiastically) call for a remake of the not-wedding to Ashlesha, claiming she never got to see it. Meher laughs, teasing Maya about her filmy tendencies.

Harman wants to get proof of Gayatri and Ashlesha's misdeeds. He informs all present that the reason for the distance between Gayatri and Prem is because Prem found out that she tried to take Chahat away from Heer.

Lalit stills at that. Rajveer admires the man for his strength. "Humey yeh sachai sab ke saamne laana chahiye ke Nihaal ne Veera ke saath kuch nahi kiya," Lalit says. Rajveer nods once. That was where the roots had been laid. And Nihaal's name being cleared will mean a lot to his sisters.

Kulraj pipes up. "We should also expose Ashlesha's truth. The cover-up of that night brought about the separation."

Maya is silent for a moment. "I can get Ashlesha to admit the truth," she says. Harman covers her hand with his. "I've done things to this family, to Heer Bhabhi that I am not proud of. Some of this is my fault. If I can do this much, maybe some of my sins will be erased."

Kiran gently tells her that her speaking the truth all those years ago erased all of her mistakes. Rajveer wonders what they are talking about but figures it is not his place to ask.

Dinner is hastily finished after Lalit blesses Maya with luck. He pulls Rajveer aside as the couples leave and asks him if he is happy now that Geet is single. Rajveer is surprised he is so easy to read.

Of course he is happy Geet is not marrying Prem Juneja. Of course he is happy the woman he loves is not getting married. Of course he is happy the woman he loves is not marrying Heer's Prem.

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enjoy, and do let me know what you think.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
u update soo soon 😲 plz someone pinch me to tell its not my dream 😆
b/w gonna edit this soon
luv
Fatima



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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
great part!!!!
waiting for the next part......and premeer's marriage...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
not first!
-edit-
I am forever defending my self Radz, courtesy of the fact I unreserve late, but today in my defence I would like to blame the person who invented exams! he obviously had nothing better to do then to invent a instrument of torture!
I loved this part, but the next part is the last part isn't it?
ahh well
I wanna comment properly altogether OK?
Love ya Radz 😆
Your Aashi
Edited by curledup - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Great part
Look forward to reading more
Edited by Aaliyah01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
great update
thanks for the pm

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